Douluo Dalu: The True World

Don't read later, the protagonist's emotional intelligence and IQ are not very good. 1. Nmd doesn't talk about the moodiness of the character, let's talk about this emotion. It's okay to have a harem in a fantasy world, but he was written as a scumbag. Do this, do that, and maintain your innocent persona behind your back? He is both a fool and a fool, or the author's writing skills are not good, and he is a scumbag 2. He is a scumbag, and he does not deserve to win. He should go to Tongzilou with Tang San Meet Brother Scar 3. Send fairy grass to the Yazisan, and lick the three factions 4. There is nothing to write about, the author is starting to waste money, there are always people who don't listen to advice, and the commentaries read and criticize 5.It is recommended to change it to Douluo: The Author's Reality Reflection of the Wimpy World

It's so poisonous. Bibi Dong can't be killed. Don't you kill Tang Hao. The one with severe injuries and the one with a broken arm. The money you spend is just like feeding the dogs. Don't write any more articles in the future.

Personal advice, if you like it, don't stress over the main character. If you have an online IQ, you can take a detour if you have a clear purpose. The author is a thief and costs money.

The protagonist's position is actually very good. The enemy is the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Dragon Sect. After solving the poison on Dugu Bo's body and getting the fairy grass, it will be of great benefit. Ning Rongrong can be promoted to the Nine Treasure Glazed Tala Cage. If you think about it carefully, there are at least four titled Douluo platforms, not to mention their influence, and the situation they can involve is too great 🙂

Liu Erlong still hasn't let go of this in her heart. The protagonist still tolerates her. It's really amazing.

I think the author suppresses the protagonist too much. I won't talk about the level. It's cliche, the starting point is unique, and the emotional scenes are also a little too stretched. At least in my opinion, I can't allow my lover to pretend to be someone else. The worst is to break up, which is better than the Cold War. Then the protagonist's plug-in Fallen Heart Flame has several features. It consumes less to separate the sub-fire (it only takes two or three days to be weak), it can control people's life and death (directly triggers the heart fire to burn others to death), and the most important thing is to speed up the practice (Liu Erlong Soul Saint) Level 6 in 3 years), 100% soul bone And the protagonist refines his inner fire at the age of three, which means that the protagonist's cheats officially take effect at the age of three. I think readers should have ideas about this powerful cheat, at least I do. But to be honest, the protagonist in this book is a bit cowardly. He is afraid of this and that. I am not wrong. After all, behind Yu Xiaogang is Bibi Dong, and behind Tang San is Tang Hao. The relationship is complicated and there is nothing wrong with being cautious. But it takes ten years from the time when the first ray of Heart Fire is extracted to the time when the protagonist enters Shrek Academy. Even if it is refined once every three years, with a full set of soul bones that can definitely be collected, it is possible to pile up 3 titled Douluo, plus Liu Erlong and Dugu Bo. If you do what I said, there should be a high probability that it will come true. So what if I threaten Tang Hao clearly? If it's outrageous, I might even interrogate Xuantian Gong.

The character of the protagonist is really confusing. Both his EQ and IQ are damaged. He is always sneering, angry, showing cold murderous intent, and has a cold face... He is like this no matter how close or distant he is. Who wants to get along with this kind of person?

If you want to be friends with Tang San, be friends with him. If you want to be hostile, be hostile. What's the point of being hostile but giving him resources?

It should be called Douluo: The Wimpy World

After chasing 278, I feel that everything else is okay. It's just a sloppy emotional drama. Is this a single heroine or multiple heroines? If you have a single heroine, just write Liu Erlong well. Don't engage in ambiguity and add a different fire to strengthen the influence. If there are multiple heroines, just be more direct. Don't pretend to be both.