Demon Slayer's Thunder

My heart is pounding because love is like a raging fire.

Based on its current quality, it's arguably the best in the Demon Slayer series. Keep it up, author!

Chapter Fourteen: He poisoned his buddy to death. Were Japanese women during the Meiji Restoration era really this arrogant? After saving you, you give me the cold shoulder and have someone send you to learn swordsmanship? Then the protagonist was completely at a loss for what to do? That's fucking hardcore gentleness!

Some posts were deleted. It's upsetting. You can say my writing is bad, but personal attacks are unacceptable. I'm a very open-minded person. If you point out something I'm not good at, and I think it's appropriate, I'll change it. Even if I don't use it, I'll leave it there and not delete it. After all, this is my first time writing a book, and there are many shortcomings.

Is Shinobu Kocho the female lead? And what about Kanao?

Goodness, you should prioritize your studies. Update more when you have time; that's already quite good. Don't abandon the project prematurely. For a new author, abandoning projects prematurely damages their reputation. Once abandoned, it'll happen again and again. Many veteran authors have fallen into a slump and never recovered because of this.

The protagonist is either being attacked or on his way to being attacked. In every battle, he either collapses from exhaustion or makes a last-ditch comeback before falling again, and in his last moments, he can still see someone (referring to friendly support). The story builds up to how incredibly talented the protagonist is, and even with a marriage and some cheat-like abilities, he almost loses against a monster.

After chapter 48, when Tanjiro slashed Muzan's neck, the protagonist's fighting power started to feel off. The power levels were toned down later on; if you can accept that, keep reading. After Muzan, he gets beaten by Tomioka, then in the selection tournament, then by Train... It's frustrating. The description above was quite good; with the protagonist's talent, I feel like Tanjiro would be unbeatable. The idea of ​​losing once and then losing countless times just doesn't really appeal to me.

Your romance scenes are like a delusional fantasy, utterly devoid of any real experience, and incredibly awkward. You wrote them well, but please don't write them again. Please!

Reaching level three gives you ten skill points. Why not allocate them before going to kill ghosts to experience what it's like? Why insist on allocating points during combat? Are you crazy?