The Demonic Cultivators at the End of the Dharma Are Wandering in the Heavens

Does the author use too many adjectives? It's okay if you have a lot of descriptions, but the problem is that your writing is just like deliberately limiting the number of words, giving people the feeling of great conflict. What we are talking about is whether the author can be more precise when describing a thing. Even if the number of words is less, at least the writing style is good, right?

The author would like to thank Qidian for the recommendation. I forget your book very easily. I just recommended it and I just remembered that I still have this book on my bookshelf. Although it looks very exciting, it is easy to forget the title.

There is a shortage of books. I am looking for books. Do you have any similar novels, analogies to heretics and demonic cultivation, such as the two-dimensional demon cultivator, the beautiful comic book Immortal Cultivation Record, the heretical scholar, the pale hand, etc.

I remember that there was a similar novel before, which was also about magic cultivation, but that one was mainly set in the two-dimensional world. The first world was Goblin Hunter, and then it seemed to go to the Iron Castle. The last words seemed to be that he got mixed up with Chinese artifacts in the world of God Killer, and also went to Harry Potter.

I think we can add something like the changes brought about by this spiritual energy, which is like the United States being built on the bones of Indians. The underground is full of dead Indian souls. Normally there is nothing we can do in the age of the end of the law, but now it is difficult to activate them under the stimulation of spiritual energy.

First of all, the protagonist wears a magic cultivator's vest but does the same things as the righteous path. He should be called a righteous cultivator. There is a problem with Mo Xiu's explanation. If there is a benefit to killing a beggar, then killing is a demonic cultivator. If killing a beggar is not beneficial, then killing is an evil cultivator and is not a demonic cultivator. Then would a monk who is not a demonic cultivator not kill a beggar for the sake of profit? A demonic cultivator should be able to do whatever he wants within a certain range, killing people depends on his mood. Secondly, the protagonist is a demon cultivator, and his cultivation relies on merit, which is very incompatible. He doesn't look like a demon, and he is almost the same as a righteous monk. Finally, saying that a country cannot cultivate demons is as illogical as hackers who cannot find jobs. As extraordinary beings, demon cultivators are of great value to the country. It is said that there is no spiritual energy in the Age of Ending Dharma, but the protagonist has spiritual energy in his blood after practicing cultivation, which is inconsistent. The protagonist has to sacrifice all the bloodworms in the misty hospital to escape from the flames. Robert casually comes in and takes the protagonist away. This dangerous scene cannot be described clearly. After reading Chapter 14, I had a lot of questions and I didn't read the rest.

After reading more than twenty of them, I felt that there was too much nonsense and too long-winded. There are too many explanations, I'm afraid I won't understand. Trying to explain

It's too wordy, so I can explain one thing once or twice, but I can't stand it even if I'm the Crimson King when I explain it over and over again!

I suggest the author practice his writing. The subject matter is really good and it is wasted. After you finish writing, listen to it yourself. It will be good for you...

Can Shen Nong tell me what happens next? I've read Chapter 29 so far. It's too long-winded, and it also likes to introduce settings repeatedly. I also didn't expect to practice directly next to the Sea of ​​Fire, and I didn't know how to shield myself from the high temperature, lack of oxygen, and thick smoke. As for the weapon refining, with seven rays of mana, I refined a low-grade magic weapon used by foundation-building monks, fought with tentacle monsters, and fought against a demon that could destroy a mountain with a full blow. I also set up a demon-suppressing array, but the result is that I can't even reach the first level of Qi training. This foundation-building can't even break the vacuum.

Let's complain about the merit system. In fact, according to some zombie apocalypse, it is really hard to believe that humans, who occupy a small base, are the beneficiaries of the merit system. I am more willing to believe that the occurrence of this kind of thing means that the merit system is about to change species. Maybe zombies will be the mainstream in the future?

In Taoism, demons are not evil people, but are testers sent by God to test practitioners

There is something wrong with the setting. I just read a few chapters. In the mist world, the mist is also an invader. The mist has spiritual energy. You cannot absorb the spiritual energy. Killing monsters has merit to help you absorb the spiritual energy. But have you done it the other way around? The monster is an invader. The spiritual energy is also an intruder in the world. You use the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of this dynasty! ?

Nonsense, Luo Liba.

The setting can score 90 points. The description is relatively detailed and the writing style is good. +10 Points. The protagonist does not know the plot, -10 points. No tricks, no imagination, -10 points. The feeling that the imagination is not broad and cannot be spread out, -10 points. Slow update, -10 points. 60 points can be scored. You can watch it, but if you follow the introduction and expect to be surprised, then you are overthinking it.

Perhaps the author made a mistake between being detailed and lengthy. No matter how many words you write, it is not as good as showing it clearly in three or five words. It can be seen that although it is lengthy, it is also written with care. It is obviously better than those who have no words in mind. However, this is unpopular and always makes people feel that there is a pile of words that can be refined without any special requirements.

You should also tell me when you spend money, are you keeping a running account? It's not like everyone's IQ is not enough to read. Do you need to write word for word? Water, really water, this good subject is wasted.

He is obviously a demon cultivator, but he is not cautious at all! You can obviously avoid the trouble, but you do nothing

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What happened to the author? I'll teach you what it is to cultivate immortals 😏 [Qi training] Qi training is to refine all quantifiable things. Practitioners at this level have the power of the heavens in their own bodies, and are also called true immortals. They can freely travel between the time and space of the multiverse, and a breath can make an infinite world fall into silence! [Foundation Building] Building the foundation is to cast the foundation of the avenue, incarnate the avenue, and be called the saint of the avenue, Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian, everything in the past, present and future is like looking at the patterns on the palm of your hand, without any mystery! [Golden elixir] The golden elixir is the fruit of the condensed Tao, returning to the unknown, turning the impossible into possible, making non-existence exist, and the logic of the heavens changes with a single thought! [Yuan Shen] This realm transcends all existence and non-existence, possibility and impossibility, and can freely edit, create, and tamper with all concepts, information, principles, and laws!

It started so well, but it ended so badly. I remember more than 3,000 people invested. At that time, it was still on the monthly vote list, but now, alas.

After reading Chapter 26, there is a lot of unnecessary nonsense. Can anyone tell me what happens next?

It's time to dig deeper and open too many copies, it's too watery.

I was attracted by the zombie training part. But I only practiced it once in the whole book, and there is nothing else. I don't feel that there are many magical ways. I feel that there are still flaws. Some parts are not completed and the expectations are not met. Some contents can still be written, but there are some small holes that have not been filled in. Then it ends a little quickly.

A real masterpiece, but unfortunately, it ended badly.

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It's a pity that it used to be quite good, and it only had more than a hundred chapters at that time. Recently, I thought about it and wanted to continue reading it, but ended up finishing it after more than two hundred chapters?

There is a shadow of "The Power of One" in the copy of God's Descendence, but it's a pity that the author disappeared

If you have to write about an inexplicable interstellar practice, you might as well write about an anime world. Can you handle such a huge span? It's better to travel through the two-dimensional fan world

The author! Why doesn't it seem like most of the characters are not talking about the protagonist? It's all the supporting characters talking. The protagonist doesn't have much of a role and has no sense of immersion.