Film and TV: I Am Walking Through the Heavens at This Moment

If your skills are not good, then don't write about a female protagonist first, otherwise most people will be blocked by this.

Everything is fine, the setting is good, and the writing is just fine. But what the hell is that woman? It's so embarrassing that I jumped to watch it. It's no exaggeration to say that this is a woman who gave me goosebumps.

See the author's top post for comments. Regarding the heroine, I want to say The heroine should be a character in a movie or TV series. Zhu Tianwen travels through the heavens, and then there is an original heroine in this world, which is very discouraging. If you can't write a romantic drama, don't write a heroine. Just have a "lover" in each world. Don't take people through time travel. It's best to freeze time and return later. Of course, if the author's writing skills are good, he can set up a female protagonist. Many people don't like to read heroine or harem novels. It's not because readers don't like them at first, but because the author clearly doesn't have the writing skills and insists on writing them like this. Good heroine novels are written as harem novels, and harem novels are written as stallion novels, otherwise they are just dog-licking novels. If the plot is entirely driven by women, it will be inexplicably disgusting.

What's this book like? Isn't it cliche 😏😏? Is the protagonist going to save others or doing whatever he wants 😏😏😏? Is he a peerless good man (who only likes one woman) or is he a wanderer among flowers🌸😏😏😏

As for the heroine Diana, forget about the real heroine and it's too embarrassing to write.

What I have read so far is pretty good, but sometimes I feel like the protagonist has no brains and is not using his brain. Both I Am Legend and the Parasite Beast escape with bruises and bruises. The biggest difference between humans and other creatures is (humans use their brains and use tools). If the protagonist is a little prepared, he will not suffer so many injuries. For example, if I Am Legend wears an armor body armor, he will not get bitten on the back. The same goes for the Parasite Beast. If you go to the Parasite Beast's base camp without preparation, you can redeem points. At least make some preparations, think about it one day at a time. A qualified hunter will not easily confront the prey head-on. He will keep a distance after causing damage to the prey. If he harasses the prey from time to time, the prey will gradually weaken and die. If Goto beats the protagonist with wounds all over his body and then keeps a distance so that the protagonist gradually bleeds and weakens, the protagonist will escape on his own if he is afraid. That's right "escape"

As expected of a travel system, I really don't know what to say about the plot and missions. . When improving your physique, don't forget to improve your brain.

What do you mean? Inexplicable evolution. It must be benign if not the author. I'm just afraid that one mutant will be gone. Ban whatever you want. I'm just complaining

Suddenly there is a setting, and the world will be destroyed three months later. Don't know what to say. . . . .

When writing about time travel, don't write about the ordinary real world, it will feel awkward.

Don't take it too seriously when traveling. The first two worlds are fine, but Iron Man doesn't feel so silky.

What does it mean that the protagonist knows the plot for a while and doesn't know anything else for a while?

The description of this heroine is really not good. I hope the author writes less. It's uncomfortable to read.

I discovered an incredible question

I just read it, but the reality volume has already made it impossible for me to continue. The effect of persuading me to quit is very effective. The author of the reality volume can't read it yourself before publishing it.

What about Wandering Earth? We said we were going to push the Earth to Proxima Centauri, but where have we gone? Choked to death by Zod?

After reading chapter 16, I really can't stand it anymore. This is a novice writer. I just write about the heroine at the beginning.

Chapter 154, ridiculous and outrageous, reported

The more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The writing is tasteless.

I haven't read the novel, but I saw the comments. This is what I personally recommend. I don't mean that you have to be a eunuch. You can be amorous everywhere, but don't write the plot. If you write the plot, then he will be the supporting female character or the heroine. If you are amorous everywhere, you will only be the female supporting character.

Damn it, this finale came so unexpectedly 😓

Please don't call me Superman, and don't call me a person from the motherland. Please call me an ancestor. I'm here just for you to call me an ancestor.

Looking at the resume, the parasitic beast is actually a disease😂😂😂

It's too shallow. The world of parasitic beasts is written too lightly.

Doesn't the movie, Marvel, and Marvel all have Superman comics and DC comics? Why can't anyone inside see that the main character is Superman?

When I read the introduction, I thought it was the parasitic beast 🤫

The book is good, and if you can maintain this rhythm in the later period, quality is not a problem. Come on! ! 😁😁

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