Little Red Riding Hood Is Challenging the Dragon Clan

Let me start with the downsides: it's extremely unfriendly to those unfamiliar with the second world. As someone who hasn't read *Night of the Full Moon*, I was completely lost. Plus, it forces you to join one faction right from the start. Does the author really think readers have some weird fetish, enjoying being threatened or forced?

All cards are from the game Night of the Full Moon. Hey guys, this is the in-game appearance of the "Night of the Full Moon" card that appears in the book. This will be updated regularly from now on.

I suggest the author write a separate chapter to briefly introduce the world view and related settings of the game Night of the Full Moon. Otherwise, for readers who are not familiar with Night of the Full Moon, some parts are indeed unclear. For example, I still don't understand what the so-called judgment is. Is it some kind of weight that will attract the gaze of death?

Although I really like Night of the Full Moon, it's a pity that yours doesn't have much to do with Night of the Full Moon. And then, the opening scene was really annoying—Midas came along, what was that all about?

Why isn't the female lead the carpenter?

Leaving aside the issue of suppressing combat power (given the change of map), did you really have to portray the protagonist as so subservient? (Accepting being treated like a dog 😃) I initially thought it was a system-based story, but then a "mastermind" appeared. Just when I accepted this premise, you delivered the final blow. I was thinking, isn't this just a solo transmigration story with a "bonus" included? The genre is niche, writing is difficult, author, take care!

This is torture! The first five chapters showed how difficult it was for the protagonist to survive in the world of the full moon, and then in the sixth chapter he was forced to act like a dog. I thought this was a fanfiction with a satisfying ending, but this is it. So it's a classic case of starting strong and ending weak, huh?

What I hate most is fanfiction that changes the setting but not the plot.

Seriously. You should just stick to writing Little Red Riding Hood properly. Why did you have to add the tyrant Midas and an unknown god? Don't you know that makes it chaotic? Adding a god is like locking in the ceiling. No matter how powerful you are, you can't compare to him. How are we supposed to enjoy reading that? Secondly, there's that donkey ear thing.

The writing is decent, and while there are some flaws, they are relatively minor and acceptable. However, the target audience is extremely small and limited; only those who have played "Night of the Full Moon" and read "Dragon Raja" will be able to appreciate it. Furthermore, the plot is obscure and difficult to understand. It's predictable that its sales upon release will be mediocre, and the chances of it being abandoned are extremely high. 😴