The Spearman Across The Unrivaled Tang Sect

I read what the author wrote. I'm not trying to criticize you, just stating the facts. The protagonist knows that Shrek Academy is hypocritical, morally questionable, hypocritical, and bullies the weak, but I still want to fawn over them, no matter how wrong they are. That's the feeling I got. No wonder I felt something was off when the author wrote that the White Tiger Duke didn't know he had a son named Huo Yuhao.

There are tons of bugs. Enkidu's curse was set up by the Sumerian gods; even the most powerful Sun and Moon gods couldn't possibly have it. And the incantation for summoning Servants is wrong. Why not just use the most common one? Why insist on using Tokiomi's? His incantation is specialized because his master was the Jewelcrafter; what does that have to do with the protagonist? Didn't the protagonist learn in El-Melloi's classroom?

You're being way too nice to the main character!

You didn't even try to steal Huo Yuhao's opportunity, so why were you going to Star Dou to find someone? It's all so inexplicable and I don't understand what you're doing.

If you switch your focus to Shrek Academy now, you still have hope. Otherwise, your readership will only decrease. Most people who enjoy fanfiction focus on Tang San. Frankly, any genius at Shrek Academy could become a Title Douluo. They'd be impressive if they could turn trash into Title Douluos.

I only said that after reading the comments. Now that you've already decided on a name, Yours is vertical and horizontal. Either invincible or an unkillable cockroach. The more they fight, the stronger they become. They grow stronger with each battle. Looking at yours, I don't feel that way at all.

The story starts by claiming that he and Enqi are practically unmatched in Douluo Continent, and then they go to Shrek Academy? What's the difference between this and those reborn Immortal Emperors who go to school and show off their power? I'm utterly speechless. It's 2023 already. If they have that kind of strength, why not just sweep through everything?

Enkidu's five stats are not fixed; he has an inherent skill called Transformation that can change his attributes. If the attributes are evenly distributed, all but his Noble Phantasm are A++.

That's too cruel! You went to Shrek Academy just to kill Zhou Qi?

In Douluo Continent, if someone can survive a Sun Wheel attack, I'll consider them incredibly lucky. Your fifth soul skill is Sun Wheel? Without the necessary conditions, just accept death. Sun is considered the pinnacle of spearmen; Scáthach can't beat Sun, and even the God Ancestor would have a tough time. The Little Sun's Noble Phantasm has demanding conditions but guarantees destruction. I wouldn't say anything if you used your seventh or ninth soul skill. But you used your fifth soul skill.