The Coming Lord

The protagonist's name alone persuades him to quit. Liu Dayou, tsk, among all the Western names in the Western aristocratic world, the protagonist's name is Chinese. What do you think?

Do you think the Chinese name you chose sounds good? Let's not talk about whether it feels inappropriate to use it all the time. This ugly name alone is poisonous.

No wonder he jumped on the street, the male protagonist is too kind, and his status as a lord is the same

It's a pity that the author has great writing skills, but the setting is neither Chinese nor Western. Many writers who write about lords and fictional stories about medieval times are prone to falling ill. Lord stories should either be entirely fictional, or adhere to a medieval setting. Chinese and Western cultures and histories are very different. The setting is neither Chinese nor Western, and the plot of the article is neither Chinese nor Western. It's a pity. After reading the review, the author used to name the protagonist Luo Dayou, but he changed it back later. . . . . The writing power is enough, but it is too fatal to be neither Chinese nor Western.

This name is too embarrassing and too discouraging.

Rubbish, can't you start normally?

Neither Chinese nor Western, a fusion of Chinese and Western? Quite strange!

Let's not talk about the plot first. As for the protagonist's name 🤔, it's best to change it.

The protagonist seems to be doing the mission without any emotions, everything goes as it should. He has to take risks and build a territory. He is not cheated, but he is a time traveler who is very lucky and knows everything.

The beginning is a bit confusing, which makes it a bit hard to watch.

I haven't read such a childish novel in a long time.

🙂🙂🙂🙂living person

I suggest the author to read other similar novels. Innovation is not so innovative. I just looked at it a little bit and felt a lot of inconsistencies.

For some things, I think it's better to talk them out. Since it's a fantasy theme, I think it should be based on encouragement. Give more suggestions and discuss more. First of all, there are many problems. Other readers have mentioned personal names, so I won't mention them in detail. I will mainly talk about titles. In the European medieval system, titles such as uncle are generally used for people who are related by blood, especially father's brothers, cousins, etc. Other than that, they cannot be used. For father's friends, if the relationship is relatively close like this article, it is enough to call them by their first name. For those who are slightly distant, it is better to call them by their last name + position. The second is the issue of choosing words and making sentences, which is not in line with the background of the Western Fantasy Middle Ages. You must know that a series of languages ​​​​evolved with Latin as the main body. Its characteristic is to make fuss about the main sentences of sentences, such as subject subordinate sentences, object subordinate sentences, or adding various attributives and adverbials. The main points are those sentence structures. This is unchanged. It is not like the forms written by the author that are more similar to Chinese, and short and few clauses are added to form sentences. Since it is a medieval theme, the former is actually more consistent. Finally, some proper nouns need to be clearly defined and cannot be used casually. For example, emblem and heraldry have different meanings. An emblem is a series of objects used to express family identity, while a heraldry is a language-like logo composed of language, patterns and ornaments. There is still a difference between the two. The author described the emblem at the beginning, and then there are some places that depict the heraldry. The two cannot be mixed.

As mentioned earlier, the protagonist's name is Liu Dayou, and his family is called the Liu Family, which is very unusual in the Western Middle Ages. Later, the protagonist's name is changed to Luo Jin.

It's well written, and the protagonist's IQ is online.

After reading this directory, I didn't find anything about the technology tree. Is this the kind of traditional lord story that doesn't focus on technology?

It's well written, please give me more updates, author.

Very few people have read this book