Huaijin's Immortal Journey

After reading the first chapter, the logic is very clear. Although my mother did not love my father in the previous life, she was not cynical. This rebirth can make up for the lack of family affection in the previous life. I hope to keep up the good work, come on😊!

If I could travel through time, I would love to be in this novel!

There are a lot of introductions and settings, as well as a lot of irrelevant character introductions, most likely to make up the word count, but no one will read those parts and will just skip them. You can try to talk about the setting later. Don't throw it out all at once. Readers won't remember those few hundred words seriously.

"Average" is sometimes a very useless word, especially when used as a criterion. There are many private settings, and it is easy for logic to fail. When I first saw the heroine's parents decide to stay in the earthly world, I felt okay. Later, Zhou Haofa, who had lived for hundreds of years in the distraction period, was kind enough to take in the heroine's second brother. He said that he had spiritual roots but his spiritual roots were low. Wouldn't those who were much higher than him be eliminated in the trial? Not only did he not need to go through trials, he was also treated the same as everyone else, which was a bit baffling. It is recommended that the heroine should not have too deep ties with her family. Should she help her brothers when they are bullied or need resources? Should her parents still look for treasures of heaven and earth when their life expectancy is approaching? If their parents are injured and have any regrets, will they not be afraid of inner demons?

The heroine is not outstanding enough in terms of spiritual roots, soul, or character. There are so many children who are better than her.

The setting is very novel, but it's too protective... Is the boss so free...? No need to experience and upgrade? Although the geniuses in their herringbone department are indeed geniuses, geniuses are just geniuses if they don't grow up... Emmmm, that's why I'm a bit offended, please give it a try

I feel that the heroine is a bit ordinary, nothing is top-notch, her qualifications, understanding, strength, character, and methods are mediocre. She may not be in the top 100 in the same period. If you put it in the entire sect, it would be hard to find this person. She is really mediocre, without quotation marks. The sect must be at least in the top ten at the same level to be considered a genius, otherwise it will not be ranked in the entire world of cultivation. The genius heroines I used to watch were the ones who could be ranked in the top ten in the entire world of cultivation. The heroine in this article must have at least one outstanding feature, otherwise it will feel too flat and lackluster.

It's really unreasonable for such a beautiful Wen Buhuo

The book is in short supply. Update soon.

What a treasure. I hope more readers will pay attention to this article. It is really better than many other articles.

The practice is described in great detail! Nice!

I've read some good and bad reviews, but I haven't read it yet and it's too thin! Add it to the bookshelf first and let's take a look!

Why not update? Please update.

La la la, good looking, good looking

The fighting scenes are exciting, but the updates are a bit slow. Updates are a bit unstable.

The author hasn't updated in two months😭

Are there any big pitfalls in blindly booking and not following serialized articles?

Big cheers for the author! It's so well written, I've given you all the tickets, please don't stop updating! Please keep writing more and more and more readers will like it!