Visualize the Sun and Moon, Cultivate Immortality and Achieve Enlightenment!

Following the template of Superboy-Prime, he has tens of tons of strength at the age of three, tens of thousands of tons at the age of ten, billions of tons at the age of 20, multiverse level at the age of 30, and is invincible before the age of 40. He can break the fifth wall and let the author change the setting!

I hope that Superman will not be suppressed. Many authors add Superman to the protagonist and end up suppressing the protagonist and adding various disgusting restrictions. Superman is idealistic. As long as he thinks of Pangu Hongjun slapping him to death or Shi Hao and Ye Fan killing him with one blow, idealistic Superman should be synonymous with invincibility. Suppressing the protagonist will lose the meaning of becoming a superman.

The plug-in was good and the creativity was novel, but then I couldn't hold it anymore. After the three golden chapters, the plot was dragging and stiff. The protagonist and supporting characters began to lose their wits, and the word count started to get low. In chapter 15, the rescuer was written to death for the sake of the plot. The dialogues between the characters were half-baked in classical Chinese. The dialogues in the next few chapters were all "no, no, no," and other pretense of culture, and he looked like he was very smart.

Superman cultivating immortality? What's the difference between practicing martial arts with Doomsday next door? ⊙ω⊙

A few words of complaint, is the protagonist really a time traveler? He doesn't look like a modern person at all, and his world view is very classical. Plus, you have a modern Western superman style, and it makes the writing very weird.

Since it is Superman cultivating immortality, let's give Superman's skills a name that suits the style of painting: Biological Force Field-Great Freedom Man of Steel-Zhenyuan's Immortal Body Heat Vision-Tianhao Taiguang God Thunder Fire Freeze Breath-Taixuan Wuxiang Yin Gangsha

If you say you have a superhuman physique, then you should have a few basic superhuman abilities, such as heat vision, flight, cold breathing, etc.

After reading the previous point, I know that the author is a character teacher who is modeled after Superman's father, but the impression is very ordinary. First of all, the protagonist is an adult from time travel, not a child, but a physical child. Secondly, the teacher is not a great sage, but just teaches literacy in a small village with the background of cultivating immortals. However, this teacher is like a knives rolling around in front of the protagonist, asking him to listen to his own words and his own principles. I want to say, why? Is he smart? Smarter than the main character? Moreover, the background is still in the world of cultivating immortals, and he is just a mortal. In the world of cultivating immortals, there are differences between immortals and mortals, and the characteristic is that the gap in status is huge. Moreover, the protagonist is born a strange person, and he has also traveled through time. He is not a real child. What kind of little village teacher can he ask for? On the contrary, he gave back a lot to the village, no loss or debt, but this teacher is not a fool. He knows that the protagonist is born a different person and provides extraordinary assistance to the village, but he still acts like a knife in front of the protagonist, as if he is the protagonist's life mentor. You must listen to my reasoning. The setting of this plot has greatly damaged the protagonist's dignity.

Can you please stop writing the protagonist so "innocent"? Although the protagonist is a child now, he is still a time traveler. Although the information is not equal, you can't just tell someone directly when they ask you, without any scheming.

The finale of this book is to go through eighty-one hardships, then grow up, and finally reach the Sun and Moon Gate. Now I can guess the plot just by looking at the chapter names, and I have no interest in following it. I don't know how long the author plans to write the plot of "The Path to Learning".

Is the author from this kind of world of cultivating immortality?

The characterization of the main character is so crazy that if he is reborn as a seven-year-old child, he will really think like a child.

Watching this plot makes me anxious to death. The woman is crazy and holding me back. The protagonist looks invincible, but in fact he is wearing a superman skin. He also said that the eunuch is a pity. It is a pity that he is a der. He deserves it.

Life and death, my investment! Is it super greasy?

One hundred thousand words, still on the way to the Immortal Sect, what, a Superman version of Journey to the West.

Superman cultivates immortality with boundless magic power

Stop eating Superman. Just say he's a Kryptonian. Superman is too over the top.

Why is there no movement? Cut? Well! The investment was wasted again!

Superman's cultivation of immortality is at least better than practicing martial arts in Doomsday, which is just about practicing Chinese martial arts. At least he can accelerate his growth and increase his comprehensiveness through cultivation of immortality.

After changing the name, I feel that I will lose some readers, and at the same time, it won't have the refreshing feeling of the original Superman: Journey to Immortality.