Yuzhen's Rebirth: a Sword Opens the Sky at the Beginning

Can this introduction be deleted? It makes people's scalp numb when they see it, and they have already picked out a whole city.

Although I really like this kind of writing, I found it a bit embarrassing. In the chapter where a sword opens the gate of heaven, the voice of the protagonist echoes through the world in your writing. As a result, the disciples in Qingcheng Mountain came out in a hurry, thinking that the voice of the coming of the earth echoed through the heaven and earth. Can't they recognize who it is? Can't you hear it? Can you please stop writing such mindless passers-by and supporting characters? It's off-putting.

The fanfics of the Ancestor Trilogy are not brainless novels. Still the protagonist is Zhao Yuzhen. Love it, love it. This author can handle it.

The boy likes that monk the most! I like the character!

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I haven't read the original work, but it's pretty good and the writing is pretty good.

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If I hadn't stumbled upon it by chance, I really wouldn't have discovered it. I've always wanted to find shounen fanfics.

At the end of the writing, the supporting characters take over the main role. Things like Southwest Road are all in the original animation. The main character is introduced and there are no changes except that Brother Gu is alive. There is no need to describe it in detail. There are also many useless passer-by characters taking up a lot of space. If you look closely, the plot doesn't advance much. The most important thing is that I think Zhao Yuzhen's rebirth was originally for Yuhan Yuhan's regret. As a result, Li Hanyi's character became more and more OOC. With Li Hanyi's character, he would be jealous of other women? She understands Zhao Yuzhen's character, and with her confident and infatuated personality, she will not doubt their love when she falls in love with Zhao, nor will she become suspicious when she sees a woman. Moreover, when he went to the villa to ask for a sword later, Li Hanyi was basically invisible. He was a peerless genius and a peerless swordsman. When he asked for a sword, he was ignored by the owner of the villa and only saw Zhao Yuzhen (outrageous). When you saw the sword dance, you described everyone but not Li Hanyi's performance (in the original book, except for Baili Dongjun, everyone else's achievements were inferior to Li Hanyi's). Li Hanyi has an arrogant and confident personality. She is obsessed with swords and practices swordsmanship every day. She disguises herself as a man when walking in the rivers and lakes. She relies on her strength to gain the reputation of Xueyue Sword Fairy. How strong is her obsession with swordsmanship? In the original work, she was obsessed with only two levels of skills left. Everyone thought she would be in pain and confused. However, she returned to the swordsman's tomb to practice swordsmanship, and she was still able to defeat Lei Wujie, who had become a swordsman, with her own sword. For such a master character who has flesh and blood in the original work, the author actually writes her as a mere vase... I have written all the reactions of Eight Young Masters, Song Yanhui, etc. When I saw the sword dance. I thought Li Hanyi had left, but it turns out he has not left 😅 In the book, the public's positioning of Li Hanyi is actually Zhao Yuzhen's woman, the owner of Iron Horse Binghe. I am really 😅😅

Is Jianhe so awesome? He can charm Li Hanyi casually, and he is still not far away from the protagonist.

This eunuch! ! ! ! ! !

This book is gone! The eunuch didn't say a word.

Isn't Baili Dongjun more than ten years older than Zhao Yuzhen? And Li Hanyi and Lei Meng from Jixia Academy killed his father, daughter, and fellow teacher? The timeline confuses me