Journey to the West: the Little Monster's Struggle

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Personal Opinion: First of all, your book is essentially a fantasy based on Journey to the West. It's easy to post a bunch of fantasy settings followed by logical worldview settings. I saw your self-recommendation, and what attracted me to Westward Journey and Xiao Yao were these two things. The most important thing was Westward Journey, because Westward Journey comes with its own traffic. But after reading the tens of thousands of words you wrote, it's not like Journey to the West, but like reading a story about a mortal cultivating immortality. This is very embarrassing. So I have a few suggestions. 1. For the world view of Journey to the West First of all, the cultivation system must rely on traditional Taoism, and the settings in the original work must also be used. For example, the five immortals of heaven, earth, humans, gods, ghosts and ghosts in the original work. Then, the Taoist method of refining essence, transforming qi, refining qi, transforming spirit, refining spirit, counter-emptiness and anti-empty Tao. Give it a try and it will feel more immersive than your current settings. The worldview is generally a fusion of Fengshen and Journey to the West, so the settings in Fengshen can also be used. Try to conceive a reasonable worldview, so that your novel can be highlighted. If you tell the story well, there is a possibility of breaking the circle. 2. I don't feel good about your system, so why don't you open something else? For example, a treasure that changes the protagonist's system. For example, there are jade butterfly fragments in some books and so on. Of course, the system is also possible, but I feel it is difficult to grasp. It is easy to reverse priorities. 3. The most important thing is that your cultivation system is too fantasy. I personally feel that it is very weird. Because nowadays traditional Xianxia is more popular such as Lan Keqiyuan. Essentially, what stands out in the original work of Journey to the West is not the realm, but magical powers and magic weapons. 4. In terms of the plot, the ordinary beasts in the Nameless Mountain can turn into monsters and become immortals through plug-ins. Of course, you can do this in this book, but you can't suppress the protagonist. It is entirely possible to write that the protagonist transforms into a demon by using plug-ins, absorbs the essence of the sun and the moon, practices spiritual wisdom, and slowly realizes magical powers. Relying on various travels, meeting Taoists in Taoist temples in the mountains, seeking Taoist magic and true Dharma, etc., Practicing for five hundred years, and studying scriptures in the West. Scribbled here.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 all all all all are all available to you. Of course, the author still has to work hard. You are still the one writing the book, so you still have to take control. I think the upgrade flow is no longer popular now. This realm is as popular as supernatural powers, spells, and magic weapons. There are also some contradictions in the settings in Tuli. So you still have to figure it out yourself. Come on.

This simplicity can be changed, but it doesn't work at first glance. I have to introduce myself as a hard-working time traveler. Three words are unnecessary.

The little monster reports

Can I ask where you got this book from? Just out of curiosity, I want to make statistics myself. Please tell me, 😁 Ahem, the reward is to give you a wife, you can mention it downstairs 😜

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To be honest, I have been feeling anxious lately, so I wrote (cobbled together) a poem on behalf of the little monster to express my ambition through poetry (just kidding (•̀⌄•́)). As for this novel, I understand everything, but many times I don't dare to write too clearly because I'm afraid. The full text of "Erecting a Stele in the Fall of the World" is as follows: When the bones of the Taoist ancestors were unearthed from the tomb, the gods all over the sky were like dogs. Killed all the millions of soldiers of the Emperor of Heaven, and the sword on his waist was still bloody. Cut off the Buddha's head to make a wine cup, raise the cup to drink the blood of gods and demons. Here we go to the Demon Mansion to recruit old troops and kill Yama with a hundred thousand banners. ——Fa Tiandai established a monument

Now that you are trying to get the cover of Journey to the West, you cannot miss the key points. I will list the keywords for you, including Chaos, Sun Wukong's apprenticeship to Bodhi, and Golden Elixir I think since the little demon doesn't have great magical powers, he can sneak it in. For example, use two cups with a string attached, put one side in the backyard of Bodhi Patriarch, and listen to the other side. It will be more interesting to do a few of these novelties

Foot. One bedroom and three living rooms. Understand. Chapter 24

，（15），（，，，，），（，，）       The reversal of the protagonist's mentality and status, from a humble little demon to a demon soldier, is greater than the reversal of the meaning of breaking through the demon king (from not being a human to becoming a half-human). (Because I am depicting the capitalist country in the 19th century, I can't say more) And the immortal Buddha, do I really mean the "immortal Buddha"? Although this book is still a novice, some book friends who have too little experience and have no official jobs at first glance made some random comments with strange angles and failed to hit the point. I really couldn't laugh or cry 😭😅 ps: It is not convenient to write this review for deeper things. I don't know if I can post this long review. . . . . . .

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I hope that I am a demon and don't have the Holy Mother's heart overflowing.

There is no courage. The demon soldiers are not even guaranteed to live, so they talk about becoming saints. Moreover, almost every chapter talks about revenge. It is also a bit inexplicable. Every commander dislikes the protagonist. It seems that the little demons in Journey to the West are not very intelligent.

The protagonist's psychological activity is very jumpy and arrogant, and he is not mature enough. It is better to describe various psychological descriptions of how to show off in the future than to describe the protagonist's next plan. I wanted to laugh when I saw the main character trying to kill gods and Buddhas by superimposing his sword skills to 200 million levels. Do you really think that the gods and Buddhas are just standing still waiting for you to develop? Do you really think that gods and Buddhas can be killed casually, right?

I heard it is a fairy grass. I came here recommended by a book friend. It is well-deserved. Good luck to the author.

Brothers, as usual, it's Monday tomorrow, and I'm going to rush into the new book list (•̀⌄•́) on March 20th, which is the two updates on Monday tomorrow. I will update at 0 o'clock in the morning and at 3 o'clock in the morning. Seedlings are not easy, rush to the new book list, try to increase exposure as much as possible, the chapter around 0:10 in the morning, if you sleep late, you can read it in time 🥺 As for the chapter after 3:00 in the morning, you can read it tomorrow morning 😁 Thank you very much for your support! By the way, I would like to ask for the follow-up reading on Tuesday in advance. Please help me read the latest two chapters. It is very, very important! (*＾ワ＾*)Thank you! !

The pace is too slow. Seeing that I still have so little strength now, I have to get 10 levels in one realm. Can't I go up, middle or down? The key is that it heats up too slowly

The author should write about the freedom and edge of the little demon. Look what you are doing. Are you causing trouble and not dying fast enough?

I'm really convinced. I saw you advertising everywhere and thought you had written about 100 chapters. But when I saw it, it was only 34 chapters. The number of words in your advertisements is more than the number of words in the book you wrote.

I just updated these two chapters, and I am so angry because of my childhood illness that I was so embarrassed that I dug my toes on the ground and flew right over!

The creativity is quite good, but it feels a bit like a primary school student's composition!

I felt very embarrassed watching it. You don't know how you can write it? Don't you feel embarrassed when you write it?

Can it be normal? I want to see it. I don't want to see it either. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food.

Are the grades that bad? Why is eunuch listed? ?

Can the protagonist's eyes evolve into double pupils? There are three types of double pupil abilities: seeing through the source, destroying the Noble Phantasm with beams, and slowing the speed to a snail's pace. Double pupils do exist. For example, Xiang Yu, the overlord of Western Chu, had double pupils. People with double pupils in history were celebrities.

That's it? It's hard to find a Journey to the West novel that I can look forward to

What the hell? Why haven't you written for three days? It's just been put on the shelves, what's going on?

Author, no wonder you are not popular in a realm that is not even Qi training, but requires more than a thousand points of proficiency. The basic level does not cost hundreds of thousands, and it still requires plug-ins. It is still more than ten or ten points. That is the world of Journey to the West. It does not deserve the name without immortal strength, and the strength is so weak. It is a world of Westward Journey, but the aura is not more than that of other worlds that can ascend. In this way, there is still a realm before Qi training, let's play.

Consider adding a character card author

The natives swallowed the time traveler... To be honest, I really can't stand it