My Pokémon Trainer Story Is Indeed Fine

The book is okay, but it talks too much, making the content confusing and annoying to read.

Poison! I was taking a shower at home, and the door lock was broken, so I was watched. You can't blame the protagonist! Have a problem with not wearing clothes in your own room? The door was still locked, but the so-called sister broke the door and came in to see her naked body. Is this the protagonist's fault? Finally the protagonist was kicked out. The protagonist is not his father's son, but a dog, right? If it affects his second marriage, he will be kicked out.

The plot is too light, and the main character who keeps going crazy without knowing the plot at the beginning is really stupid and difficult to replace. Normally he has died several times.

I hope the protagonist's thinking logic will not be too light. For example, he locked the door in the bathroom at the beginning, and in his own room, so what if he was naked? Why would he feel that it was his fault and not the intruder's fault? Other than that, everything else is in line with the appetite, but it is too young, so let's raise it for a while first.

Shennong Index: Four and a half stars (poisonous) The family ethics in the opening chapter are invincible. The protagonist is kicked out of the house without logic without making any mistakes and misses the initial Pokémon (the description of the initial Pokémon does not appear until more than 20 chapters). In more than 30 chapters, the content is supported by systematic dialogue and psychological description of the characters. The main character is neurotic throughout the whole story. He has a tendency to complain, but he is not popular in Pokémon novels. He is neither funny nor eye-catching.

Me. . . After a quick skim, the first Pokémon in the entire series appears in Chapter 24. . . . I withdrew. . .

Does the author think that the protagonist has done nothing wrong but being kicked out is the right way to solve the problem? Still feeling peaceful but not feeling nothing at all. Rabbits will bite people when they are anxious. This does not mean that they have a peaceful mind, but any normal person would not be able to bear being treated like this.

I have a suggestion, the system talks too much, it can be downplayed.

Very good, you are a little fairy author. If you are good at boxing, I would not be surprised at all.

If you write about Pokémon well, what's the point of selling it like a sheep's head? I'm here to see Pokémon, not some Nisei Youth Story.

Originally, I thought the relationship between the protagonist and the system was a bit chatty in terms of writing, but why is it so strange that you have such a one-handed attack on the plot? To be honest, the introduction is quite attractive to me. The idea of ​​Nikki + Pokémon is something I haven't seen before, but with your plot, forget it.

Even Shen Nong can't stand this plot. In the beginning, someone forcefully broke into the door and saw it all. Then it turned out to be the protagonist's fault. Today's light taste is too strong and I can't stand it.

What a weird start! The system talks a lot👋

The author talks a lot of nonsense, so there can't be some plot.

When writing about Pokémon, just write about Pokémon. Don't write about family ethics dramas.

In the first 3 chapters, we are still figuring out family relationships, and we haven't seen any Pokémon...

To be honest, author, if you continue to rely on the protagonist to talk to himself like this, even if you create a so-called system to talk to the protagonist, it will only give you a few numbers, and how many hundreds of chapters can you rely on? The more you learn, the faster the eunuch will be. No one will see me, but I will see if you can really support it and keep writing. Of course, you have to have a big heart. To make money or to be interested, even if there is no one else, I can keep writing the finale. How can I still believe that you can't be a supervisor? It's normal to be a eunuch like you. The system has a lot of resources but is unwilling to give them to the protagonist. It doesn't make any difference whether there are plug-ins in this system, it's just better than nothing. The question is, can these so-called resources of yours give the protagonist an exaggerated talent and power at once? It's not that difficult. You, the novelist, really have your last name and you still don't change it.

Don't blame the author, because the author is just an otaku who likes obscenity and can't write other types of protagonists. Please forgive me.

The author must have been very good at writing compositions when he was in school. One sentence can be extended to describe, and then become many sentences.

It's too toxic. People who use elements of dark literature make the protagonist invincible or pseudo-invincible. You are threatened and aggrieved. I don't think it's very good.

To change the angle, the protagonist is a female. In the opening chapter, the adopted brother directly looks at the protagonist in the bathroom, and then tells his brother, and then his brother kicks open the door of the protagonist's room, and angrily scolds the protagonist for running around naked while looking at the protagonist. Then her biological father and the two weird brothers agree that it is all the protagonist's fault. The protagonist took advantage of it, and directly boarded the protagonist out. . . .

The taste of Riqing is very strong. After reading the first few chapters, they were all jokes. Then the protagonist was kicked out by the author for a random reason. I stopped reading after that. I want to know if there is any connection with the interpersonal relationships in the introduction?

It's okay to write about elves, but what about elves?

The protagonist's physique is known to be weak compared to the people in this world, but he still tries his best to be more charming. He feels unhappy that the protagonist dies quickly. The protagonist dies in the aftermath of such a high-level elf battle. It's already been 200 chapters and he's still alive. It's really contradictory 😅

This world does not have the taste of utopian Pokémon. There is a lot of intrigue, but little interaction between people and Pokémon. Most of them do not regard elves as friends and family, but tools and property, and prefer special dark elf novels. The author wants to mix the two, but he obviously cannot grasp it. There are also so many inner monologues between the protagonist and the system. When it comes to the elf battle, he has to have an inner monologue with the system, and also provide battle ideas and pay attention to each other. There is a kind of schizophrenia and contradiction. If you don't resolve these, it is very tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

I read the reviews and read this novel specifically. What is this thing about Riqing and strong flavor? Now everyone is shouting about Riqing? Still leading every day. Can you tell me which one is younger? I haven't read it for a long time, but in daily life I still remember that The Laughing Cat was quite interesting and had a lot of jokes, but this one is not the same, at least it didn't have half the appeal for me to finish reading. Comparing other light novels, including Endless Chain, Unorthodox, Evil Virtue, The Wrong Place, Headless Lonely Princess, God Is Absent, etc. That are still in my memory, they are not similar to this one in terms of style or writing, and the plot is even more different. Almost close, Star Engraving, Forbidden Curse, Dragon and Something (previously animated "masterpieces"), Elf Sword Dance, Holy Sword Academy, etc., All have bonuses at the beginning. At least I enjoyed reading them when I was short of books, and the character creation is okay, but I will get a little bored after reading a million words or later. Where is the strong Riqing flavor? What does it mean to be light and strong? Even if it's a saccharine light novel that's an assembly-line industrial saccharine, you can still read it through one volume. This book... I can't stand it. I feel it is worse than some of the books in FL, such as Studio Guoyun Liu. I can't sense the so-called Riqing and strong flavor, and I feel that its purity is too low. It can be compared to the free online articles in Japan. Some of the online articles that are not library-based are still quite good. The minimum limit of free online articles there is lower than the library version. When I was eating raw meat, I seemed to have collected more than 20 web pages, which were filtered out in various ways. Actually, the writing is terrible. I specifically mentioned that the Japanese light taste is too strong. I really don't understand what it means.

I felt relieved when I saw that the comments were all criticizing him. For Pokémon stories, if you want to write about daily life, it is also recommended to establish a relationship with Pokémon. You can only read the basic settings when needed, rather than reading three or four chapters in a row. No one has the patience to read it through. There are too many useless dialogues and too much nonsense. There are also differences between Pokémon and Japanese romantic light novels and dramas, and most of their audiences do not overlap.

To be honest, it's too verbose The writing is too detailed The content is too slow.... It's a bit boring And the accessories are too templated They are all hahaha and the like

"The heroine of "My Youth Daily Life Can't Be a Skillful Blacksmith" 🤭 Actually, I feel that the team selection is a bit abstract. The initial Blacksmith is a small blacksmith, and the second favorite is Slimy Dragon. What logic is used to select this Pokémon to join the team? It feels like a no-name team purely relying on personal strength.

Why did the Steel Team suddenly run towards the Dragon Team at the beginning 😅? Could it be that these three evil dragons are the three evil dragons of Taijing Steel?