One Piece: Reincarnated as Black Carbon Orochi

Very good. Kill Kozuki Oden. I feel sick when I see this character.

I have read the latest chapter. According to the description in the article, the main character, Orochi, is completely representative of human evil and a lunatic without any heart, so I asked the author what courage and writing power he had to control this "world's most evil creature".

To be honest, the black charcoal snake is too ugly. I always skipped this thing when watching animations.

A hammer here and there, a stick here and there, a pig's trotter with no target, all these fancy things, in a world where force is paramount, I don't know what kind of office conspiracy is going on.

In a world where power is paramount, what you write makes people sleepy. The protagonist has gourmet cells, the mysteries of the demon world, fantasy beast-type fruits, and excellent swordsmanship. There are so many powerful elements, and it is written as if he made a fortune through conspiracy.

As long as the male protagonist takes care of Gekko Oden's wife and daughter, just follow Roger with peace of mind (and take Momonosuke with you by the way) 😏😏😏

I remember reading a setting somewhere. It said that people in the pirate world will become more and more handsome if their ambition is not drained away. In turn, it is similar to Moria. The inspiration seems to be the two Straw Hats that Oda drew at the back of the manga decades later.

This is the hero in my heart, the original one is...

In the food world, as long as you eat enough and precious things, your cell level will rise. Just like the strong people in the food club, there is no need to learn the meaning of food. Moreover, communicating with food and cherishing food are not in line with Orochi's personality.

It's very interesting. The villain character of Orochi has risen to an epic level, and he has the feeling of a super villain. The introduction is a bit confusing and not at all relevant to the content.

If Black Carbon Orochi looked like King of Fighters Orochi, that would be a proper inspirational story

The author, The Riddler, writes in a foggy way, and the protagonist has no sense of involvement, or even the feeling that the protagonist is one of his own.

Protagonist

If you have the energy to write, why not write a pirate fanfic that doesn't look like a pirate? Azu, stop it, fairy tales and fantasy are your future.

The power system is well combined, combining devil fruits, monster abilities, and food cells. At least I won't be afraid of Wang Lufei's abilities in the future.

After watching the 24 photos, I suddenly felt that the protagonist's revenge is just this.

Although I'm reading a One Piece fanfic, you're too dumb. The whole story about Che Lulu has no content at all.

The current problem with this book is that the protagonist is too open-minded. Even Roger Whitebeard in his heyday was not as good as the four beast clones in Gourmet. After eating the delicacies in the human world and then going to the gourmet world to eat something good, the protagonist can be unparalleled in One Piece. In order to prevent this book from becoming a gourmet fanfic + kindergarten matchless, I had no choice but to play conspiracy in One Piece instead of leveling up in the gourmet world. Readers will be very unhappy when they see that the protagonist is lacking in combat power.

The whole story is just a blur, with no plot at all. What story are you telling? The importance and presence of the protagonist are not felt at all

I remember when I first started reading Pirates fanfics, the fanfics at that time always had overlord characters (there was not much use at that time except for showing off), so it was quite annoying. There was still a market for your book at that time, but it is no longer available. As an advanced attack method, the protagonist does not have it, so I really want to persuade you to quit.

This paragraph emmmmm, the author is not writing an online article. The writing style is so good that it needs to be improved, but this is a bit overwhelming.

It's really too slow. No one will notice you like this.

The author, I would like to give you a small comment. Your writing method of inserting a lot of background stories or your experiences and insights between two sentences of dialogue is really overwhelming and very tiring to read. It greatly affects the continuity of the plot. By the time you finish writing the little background story, I have forgotten what the character said in the last sentence🤔

The writing is scattered and not coherent enough.

I would like to make a suggestion, the author's obscene style is not suitable for writing about pirates, so why not start a hunter fanfic?

The author has watched Dio in Jojo and Aizen in Bleach. I think the protagonist was written with no feeling at all. He said he was crazy but not crazy. He said he was evil but he was not a born evil person. He wrote like a disgusting and selfless person. He was not attractive at all

After Revenge, I don't feel as good as before.

Three Generals

Isn't the money in One Piece called Bailey? How did it become a sword?

I think it's pretty good-looking, but I'm still a bit unsatisfied