Signing in to the Heavens Starts with Swordsman

What a wonderful operation, it can be said to be a ten-year brain injury! The dragon knight and the little dragon girl are just paired together. I don't know what the author's psychology was when he wrote it, and how abnormal it is.

It was well written in the previous chapter, and the protagonist has advanced internal skills and is practicing the star-absorbing technique. What kind of brain is this? Later, people who absorbed other people's skills were accepted into their own sect. Tian Boguang was given a sword to ward off evil spirits, a series of tricks to make him die. Really weird.

This long paragraph of yours is not suitable for an online article. My eyes are tired from looking at it. If you look at other books, they are basically one period and one paragraph.

The author recommends seeing a psychiatrist or psychologist

I can only say that in reality, people would kill people and set fires, rape other people's wives and daughters everywhere, and in ancient times, anyone who was dirty or clean would hang himself. Such people could play with him, and come and go. This kind of situation can tell what kind of person the author is, and what kind of book do you want him to write?

It feels like a running account, and the layout is uncomfortable to read.

The main character didn't practice Beiming Magical Skills at the beginning but later practiced the Star Absorbing Technique. This is really a poisonous point. It will easily make many readers abandon the book. Moreover, the protagonist still practiced Wang Chongyang's Innate Skills and then switched to the Star Absorbing Technique. It is simply adding poison to the poison. I don't even know how to complain about the author.

In the second chapter, he was poisoned to death. The novice gift package was Beiming Shen Gong and ten jars of wine. The pig's trotter chose the wine and discarded it.

I really don't understand how to abolish a skill that is more powerful than the innate skill and practice the star-absorbing method. I have said it myself, the higher the attack, the greater the gain outweighs the gain by absorbing people's internal energy. In addition, can't skills be fused to add characteristics? I really don't understand what your idea is, it's useless.

The poisonous point is that Bei Ming does not practice the star-absorbing method, various operations to change consciousness, a protagonist who has no effect, various imposed settings, and the old-fashioned upgrade path of the Swordsman and the Condor. It is better to go to the world of Dog Brother to get to the top of Jin Yong's martial arts first, which can only be said to be rubbish.

Look at the introduction to his novel. Swordsman also added a "Wolf Warrior 2" in the middle. The brain is funny.

I want to know how to report this kind of book

Bei Ming, don't learn to attract stars, what the hell are you?

I suggest the author do a good job of formatting, it's uncomfortable to read.

The plot of Little Dragon Girl is too disgusting, forcibly pairing the original perpetrator and the victim. Can't stand it anymore

After reading these more than twenty chapters, I can sum up. The biggest shortcoming is that the paragraphs are long, there are many poisonous points, there are too many debates, too many political issues, too much rhetoric, and there is a lot of water. Other authors divide two or three periods into one paragraph. This author is really outrageous. He writes a paragraph of five to six hundred words. It made me sick, retching, and dizzy.

So retarded. Was this written by AI?

When I see the author forcibly bringing Zong Zhibing and Xiao Longnu together, I really can't stand it anymore. The author is simply named Hu.

The theme itself was pretty good, but it turned out that Zhen Zhibing was cast as Xiao Longnu. I don't know if there was a magic trick to stuff flies into the buns later, give up!

There are many advantages, but the disadvantage is that everyone is a marionette.

Curious, the author seems to have done some research on history. Dear author, please discuss it👀