A Doomsday Mage Summons the Undead

The plot is decent, but it's too padded out, constantly lecturing on morality. The ghosts' internal conversations take up half a page. I don't even know what the conversations have to do with the plot.

Write more about massive undead hordes, overwhelming them with sheer numbers – that's what makes it interesting! Over 200 chapters without any climaxes is excessive. If you keep padding the story like this, when will we ever see millions, tens of millions, and endless human wave tactics?!

Honestly, the author's opening inexplicably reminded me of *Dark Summoner*. I was only a teenager back then, and I could only understand the beginning. Thinking back now, *Dark Summoner* still shocks my worldview; it's just too damn shocking.

There's been too much sentimentality from military personnel; it's gone too far.

I hope the author won't actually portray the protagonist as a villain or someone devoid of basic emotions.

I watched a bit; it was quite good. In the apocalypse, especially for necromancers, they should stop being human. I alone am supreme; I alone have the law; the calamity of the dead sweeps across the world. Mid-game transition to Lich; late-game transition to Reaper Ignore other similar works that aren't as dark; those that are just tools and fodder for criticism. Don't try to be sentimental; writing that kind of stuff ruins the necromancer profession.

I hope the protagonist becomes inhuman as soon as possible, and absolutely, absolutely no female lead (this is a post-apocalyptic story, not your 18+ romance novel ***...).

It's been a long time since I've read any necromancer novels; I hope it doesn't die out.

Upon reaching Chapter 191, I couldn't help but write a paragraph. Evil thoughts affect intelligence. Let's consider this: was the Commander constantly using his life force to predict the future for his own wealth and pleasure? Was it to secure power for his relatives and friends?

You don't actually think you're good at writing daily life stories, that's why you've written so much about them, do you? 😳