King Elden in Teyvat

As the protagonist who has become a grandson, let me see if there is another Shennong who is as stubborn as me.

Does the author want to write about the protagonist pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? In the eyes of our readers, the protagonist is a pig!

A small suggestion, it can be the system of another world, but apart from the protagonist and the things on him, don't bring the things of another world to this world. Try not to change Teyvat. For example, the next pyroxene meteor shower in Teyvat feels very chaotic and unreasonable. This is how I feel personally, and it only represents my personal opinion.

I can't stand watching Ke Qing. What are you writing about? As one of the Seven Stars, Keqing is quite busy and has time to go shopping and date with a foreigner. However, he is still a guy with no identity and suspicious behavior. He still commits the common problem of colleagues and is too self-pleasant!

Very well written, don't write it next time

I don't understand why the King of Elden came to Teyvat to be a blacksmith's apprentice.

I've read ten chapters so far and I can't stand it anymore. Come here to complain. First, the protagonist is a time traveler from the King of Elden to Genshin Impact. He uses his personal name. I feel a little disconnected. It's like a three-year-old child suddenly holding a weapon that can decide the life and death of others. In short, the mentality cannot keep up with the power. But most of the starting points are like this, so I won't say anything. Second, there is the problem of the protagonist's character. He must have been an adult before the time travel. The dialogue with the character of Genshin Impact is too childish. Although Genshin Impact is originally a 12+ game, Genshin Impact itself did not give me such a childish feeling. That's about it. The main thing is that it doesn't give people the feeling of writing a story about the King of Elden reaching Genshin Impact. It's like randomly choosing a relatively high-quality Goldfinger and then going to a certain game world to enjoy the game. It is extremely inconsistent with my expectations. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

It's really "cooling" It's just the author who is "cooling". People are enjoying themselves, and cooling takes off.

It's so uncomfortable to watch. You obviously have super strength but you just don't use it, right? It's just a battle of wits and courage, right?

Another Genshin Impact novel written by a cloud player.

I can't stand it anymore. After all, he has the power of King Elden. He's just like trash.

The protagonist doesn't feel like a king, which is the most intuitive thing

I've never played Elden's Circle, but I've heard that it's not why the protagonist is so secretive. It should be quite cheating after clearing the level, but the protagonist doesn't want to take risks anymore? What kind of risk did the protagonist take? He just played a game.

If the article is good, then the article is good. If you can't write well with your imagination, don't write it. This book is like the author's self-pleasure, and it was written by

At the beginning, when he was trying to persuade him to quit, the leader of the Seven Stars of Qingqing Liyue was still focused on infrastructure construction. How could there be such a brainless businessman?

It's uncomfortable to watch. If you want to write, just write it as Genshin Impact does. This price feels like a fragmentation. It is simple and comfortable to write according to reality, but it makes readers uncomfortable. For 100 moras, Wanmintang cannot buy even one egg.

After a calm analysis, this should not be a fanfic of Elden's Ring. It should be called op fanfiction. If you have not played the Ring of Magic, it will not affect your reading. But it's not OP, so it's hard to feel involved. Those who think the beginning is poisonous are definitely not a qualified OP. If you have only played Elden's Ring and have not played Genshin Impact. Then after seeing the exchanges between the characters of Genshin Impact, I put my cup in the cup. You will feel very uncomfortable. How can I, the King of Epileptic Fire, bear this feeling? Wouldn't this destroy the entire world? But from OP's point of view, they are all my wings. 😏And I just like to see the interaction between the protagonist and the character of Genshin Impact, and the interaction between the character of Genshin Impact and the character of Genshin Impact should be the change brought about by the butterfly effect of the protagonist. If you are like me, you are both an OP and the King of Elden. Then you will look forward to how the two sides will meet, what stories will happen, and you will predict the subsequent development. And think about the conflict between your wife and your wife, who should you help?

You told me this is God King Elden?

There are too many plots that have nothing to do with the main plot, making the protagonist look like a grandson.