I Have to Live Forever

The title of the book is "After Immortality," but the time is to live according to the day after time travel. Those who come to read the book come in based on the title of your book. It is immoral for you to fool around like this. I will read it after a hundred years.

I hope the author can write the artistic conception of Lan Ke. Don't pretend to be cool just for the sake of showing off. It will be very embarrassing. For longevity, just one word is free and easy. Or, like a creation story, giving a rural boy a chance and watching him grow up is also a kind of fun (this is just my personal idea)

The author's writing is adequate and the plot is adequate. The only shortcoming is that the plot develops too slowly. Because immortality can live forever, the time span is very large, so it usually takes several decades to write dozens of chapters, giving people a sense of vicissitudes of life that things have changed, that everything in the world is a passerby, and that only my way will last forever. Thanks I didn't turn to the chapters directly. When most people look at the chapters, they will realize that so many chapters have not been finished in the first era. Otherwise, they will add them to the bookshelf to support them until the second era, or else they will just abandon it and speed up the plot. This book is still very good. Of course, the author has his own ideas, so don't be disturbed by readers' comments. Although the plot is a bit slow now, it is still good to read. Don't speed up the plot and make the content thin. Readers only give opinions to the author. The author must not be disturbed by readers' comments. He should still have his own opinions.

In fact, judging from the title of this book, it is a work of a similar style to Lanke Qiyuan. The realm does not need to be written so clearly. Otherwise, some stories about the process of improving one's cultivation will be included. It is the same as those articles about cultivating immortals and fighting monsters. Since it is immortality, the protagonist's mentality must follow. The more knowledge you have, the more you change. Now that you are immortal, you can use time to beat the enemy to death or your cultivation level will naturally increase as time goes by. You can get rid of the old routine of fighting monsters, upgrading and practicing diligently, and focus more on writing some ordinary stories that can allow the protagonist to cultivate his mind and enlightenment.

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The title of the book is After Eternal Life, but it turns out that it has over seventy chapters, and the time span is only one to two years. Even if it is a slow start, ordinary people have worked hard for decades, so the protagonist has to write about the hard work for decades in detail, right?

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Thank you for the three seconds the world was destroyed today, brother, for your monthly tickets 🌹🌹 I wish you brother to make a fortune, live in a mansion, and pick up pretty girls😁

It's embarrassing, playing with women and writing about eunuchs. Picture what?

Guo Degang's words can become an introduction😊

Very cool. The protagonist has a humane outlook on life and is very likable.

There is only one monthly ticket left this month. I will give it all to you next month.

It's still very good, the writing is smooth, the writing style is excellent, and the contradictory points of conflict are well-cut. From the current point of view, it is moving closer to half-intelligent and half-smart writing, so it is perfect to use it as an adjustment. 😊😊

These eunuchs are too sentimental. They talk as if everyone in the world is a kind-hearted person, just like everyone in the harem loves each other.

I feel a sense of completion after seeing you get married.

People who don't like Changshengwen to live according to the day.

Your verbal and picture curses are ineffective against me and my defense rebounds.

I lost interest when I saw that the main character was a eunuch.

This kind of article needs to be written well. You can learn from my writing method for Changshengxian.

Let me know what you think after reading Chapter 30! The description of the protagonist and Eunuch Li's relationship are not well written, which is a bit embarrassing. There is also a eunuch who bought a dagger when he left the palace and brought it back to the palace. The halo of the protagonist is too powerful! Also, the scene where the protagonist gives food to Wangxian Pai is too awkward. If Wangxian Pai is short of food, the protagonist will give him a pound of food. The store selling food will give him one tael of silver if he is short. One tael of silver can buy more than 200 jins of food. Does this paragraph want to tell us that the protagonist is a Bodhisattva?

"Can you dine with me?" "I don't like this question." "Dine with me!" "Too strong." "I'm going to eat, but I can't eat without you!" "This will be much better." "But can you please put me down from the pillar first?" Song Jiang, who was tied to the pillar, begged. "No, let me let you go. What will happen to my sober soup?" Dwarf tiger Wang Ying said with a smile: "Without you in the soup, I can't eat it." "Bitter, Xiaoyi Heisaburo is going to die from this! Who will save me!" Song Jiang shouted. "Wait a minute!" "Brother Yaoshou wants to save this guy?" "No, the human heart is wrapped in hot blood. Splash the cold water away, and when the heart and liver are taken out, they will be crispy and delicious." "Sad, why did our Shandong Shishiyu end up like this! Where is my brother?" Song Jiang cried. "Wait a minute, do it!" "Brother Yanshun wants to save this guy?" "No, I've been weak recently. Hot and sour soup is less sour and less spicy." "Wow, it's a pity that Song Jiang died here!" "Song Jiang? Wait a minute, do it!" But it was a step too late. "Just now he said he was Song Jiang? Could it be Yuncheng Song Yasi?" "No, I don't know, he changed three names in a row, who knows which one is true!" "Let's just pretend we didn't hear anything." ...

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Come on, author, I'll take care of it first and then read it, I came from Lankeqiyuan! Come on!

It's really gone, Yin YangGood bookHmm

How did Pig's Knuckle's world-defying power come about, suddenly appearing? ? ?

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