Starting My Cultivation Journey by Marrying a Disfigured Princess

Liu Yunmeng

I found that the novels in recent years are all about system writing. Without a system, I wouldn't be able to write.

The wife has not been written about before, but the sister-in-law has been written about. Although it is off topic, the impression is still quite good Until Chapter 80, when the wife comes to marry her, the protagonist and his wife suddenly have a good relationship. The protagonist had never met his wife before, and it was written that the wife was not in love with the protagonist, and the sudden change in feelings seemed very abrupt The author probably felt it later, and started to add settings, saying that the wife had known the male protagonist before, but in the form of a fox possessing her, and later used the possession ability again. Then the bug came again. The possession ability shows that my wife is very strong. This is a world of high martial arts at best. How could she not be able to defeat someone with a useless cultivation? How can I still use skills when my cultivation level is ruined Then the author added a setting, saying that the protagonist's wife took the initiative to eat the poison in order to become a transcendent immortal Now there are two more setting holes that have not been filled in, what is a transcendent immortal, and why does a transcendent immortal need to swallow the poison to become an immortal. Don't make more bugs just to fill in the settings bugs.

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After reading about ten chapters, I feel that the plot is the same as "Making Money and Talking in the City". This is ancient times, a fantasy time travel story. You don't know about flirting and flirting, you don't know about fighting and killing, you don't know about rivers and lakes stories. These ten chapters seem to be written in ink, narration? Only occasionally have a little knowledge of driving?

It feels like the author writes as he pleases, wherever he thinks. Jiang Chuyue's weight is written to be heavier than that of the main palace. She is just a showman when she comes on stage. What's the use of pretending to be cool in front of her? Yunlong Secret Realm is mindless, and it feels like it has no purpose except to give the protagonist some luck power. The logic of the demon clan's martial arts competition is confusing. The demon clan takes advantage of it and the human race doesn't dare to say a word. So what's the point of the martial arts competition? Even if the demon clan loses, he can still say that he has won. Do you dare to question it? You have to have the courage to question right from the beginning so Little Heavenly Master won't have such long intermissions every time. In the final analysis, the author is not good at conceiving reversal and slap-in-the-face stories, and the arrangement of each adversity is very rigid, giving people the feeling of adversity for the sake of adversity.

Retreat and stop losses in time The writing is too "commercial" and all kinds of forced lengthening

I always feel like I missed something, it's tasteless to eat and it's a pity to throw it away.

Abandoned, we're at today's chapter. Isn't patronizing water a main line?

Xiao Rongxue