Starting My Cultivation Journey by Marrying a Disfigured Princess

Liu Yunmeng

I've noticed that most novels in recent years are system novels; they can't write without a system.

I haven't written about the wife at all, only about the sister-in-law. Although it's off-topic, the reading experience is still quite good. It wasn't until chapter 80, when the protagonist marries his wife, that the two suddenly developed a strong liking for each other.

After reading about ten chapters, it felt like a typical urban drama about making money and talking, but this is an ancient fantasy time-travel story. There's no flirting, no fighting, no martial arts tales. These ten chapters felt like rambling, with narration? Occasionally, there's only a little bit of explicit content?

The author seems to write haphazardly, going wherever their thoughts take them. Jiang Chuyue's role is given more weight than the main heroine; she's just a pretty face from the start, and all that pretense of power is pointless. The Cloud Dragon Secret Realm is nonsensical, serving no purpose other than providing the protagonist with some luck-based power.

Retreat and cut losses promptly. It's written too "commercially," with all sorts of forced lengthening.

It feels like something's missing; it's tasteless, but too good to throw away.

I've abandoned this, so this is where I am today's chapter. Is the entire storyline just about water with no main plot at all?

Xiao Rongxue

I'm getting more and more impatient. I've read up to chapter 95, and this guy surnamed Jiang has more screen time than the female lead. Did the author portray the female lead as too great, and he couldn't write her character well enough?