The Proud Immortal

There are always people who criticize the relationship between Mo Chuan and the heroine. Not to mention that Mo Chuan cheated the heroine in his previous life, and he also wants to cheat the heroine in this life, because he has a grudge against the heroine. And he clearly said that he would tell the heroine the truth as long as he was given 100 spiritual stones. He ate so many youth balls and didn't tell the heroine the truth. There was no hint at all. He believes that the heroine is not the child of destiny, but if there is no chance that people from the aristocratic family find out that they have exchanged garbage for it several times, won't they take revenge on the heroine? It shows that he doesn't care about the heroine's life or death. I really don't understand, can there be a handsome and wealthy person in the novel who can be a candidate for the male lead? You don't even care about whether you have any hatred or character? And if you really want to talk about cp, it would be better to work with both Xuanyuan You and the heroine. Xuanyuan You and the heroine have the same chemistry, he is a nice person, and he has a straightforward temperament. Of course, I hope that the heroine in this novel will have no CP, and can write about the world of cultivation after ascension, and then about the content of the ascension to the fairy world.

I hope Mo Chuan will eat shit. If he is the male protagonist, then abandon the story and the author should stop washing it.

This is a very interesting immortality novel. It is unique and unforgettable among so many immortality novels. The author's writing style is smooth and the characters are vividly depicted. Each one is vividly displayed in front of the readers, making people smile every time. It is a novel worth reading. Everyone is welcome to enter the pit. I also hope that the author will work hard and write more exciting plots.

I don't understand why Mo Chuan's male protagonist is so popular. He is essentially no different from other people from aristocratic families who compete for the opportunity of female protagonists. On the surface, he and his family prefer to do superficial things, create a good image and be helpful to others. In fact, it is equivalent to killing you half to death first, and then pretending to help you, and you still have to be grateful to him. Typical people have to count the money after being bought. Maybe the author described him as handsome, with an outstanding personality, and as a mysterious figure, which makes people think that the male protagonist is like this. None of these can change the fact that he has been plotting the fate of the female protagonist in his past and present lives.

Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. It's an orthodox article on cultivating immortals, and strong women have no CP. The key is that the topic selection is relatively novel! In fact, in many fairy tales where the heroine is reborn or travels through the book, there will be content related to "luck" and "opportunity". However, most of them are a means for the heroine to obtain a golden finger or advance the plot. The author of this article has a bolder and unique vision, and the topic selection focuses directly on "the opportunity to plunder the Son of Destiny and the counterattack of the Son of Destiny". Although it is ultimately for the "road to heaven/ascension", this article still gives people a refreshing feeling that seeing something from a small perspective makes a big difference! 2. The writing style is very good, combined with the vivid and distinctive character descriptions, such as the thick-faced and sinister heroine, the congenial Xuanyuan, the powerful sects who have a masterful demeanor and full of inner drama, etc., So the story in the first 400 chapters is joyful, funny, and quite contagious! However, the shortcomings are also very prominent: 1. After chapter 400, the writing pace speeds up and the plot changes abruptly! The heroine, who has always been cautious and fearful of death, and always predicts when she goes out, has just tried her best to lead her disciples to break through the siege of many Nascent Soul Transformation Gods. The frightened bird leads a group of disabled people who have no ability to protect themselves. Before they can get out of danger, Goldfinger strikes again! In such a situation that is tantamount to "walking naked", the heroine miraculously has a big heart! As a result, due to the heroine's sudden and only carelessness, almost the entire army was wiped out. Even the master came to "take his place" and described the whole process in less than 30 sentences. Game over! What a dramatic turn of events! I almost gave up on the article! After that, the heroine became dark, and the writing style changed drastically. The focus of the writing was on how the heroine took revenge and killed her enemies, such as cutting them into pieces, grinding them into mud, lighting up sky lanterns with her soul, etc. (It felt unnecessary, venting hatred, is there any meaning!) If the heroine's image in the first 400 chapters was full of likability, but after the plot turned upside down, no matter how aggrieved and unwilling to hate forced her to turn black, her image was negative! I can really understand it, but I can't accept it! Even though the second brother was reincarnated and rebuilt, and the master was resurrected, the readers felt less regretful, but the work was still a failure, giving people the feeling that it ended in a hurry! 2. The author seems to be a bit erratic in his positioning of Mo Chuan! Starting from participating in the conspiracy to find the heroine, he approached the heroine again and again, with the intention of seizing the chance of the heroine and trapping Lin Wangchen to avenge his sister. Later, it was suddenly revealed that he was the dream lover that the heroine had longed for in his previous life. He was talented, good-looking, talented and lucky. He had all the conditions to be a male protagonist. He secretly did good deeds to save the family and was a good person, even throwing out the Fusang Sacred Tree to endorse him! There are many inconsistencies in his character image, which cannot be explained by "complex human nature". There is indeed a suspicion of forced whitewashing! (In order to appease the readers' anger, Mo Chuan was asked to save the heroine but was killed by the heroine? It's quite boring!) Putting aside personal preferences, I personally think it is a failure in terms of the character image of "Mo Chuan"! In general, the first 400 chapters are exciting, but after the 400th chapter, it is very helpless! I can understand that the heroine cannot win all the way to the end, I can understand that "revolution cannot be without sacrifice", and I can also understand that "the plot needs to have a twist", but I really can't accept the overturn! There is mixed praise and praise, let's take a look!

This book is not witty, the characters are flesh-and-blood and grounded, and there are not many cliché plots. It keeps writing around the theme. The opening chapter is a bit ordinary. The subsequent plot is not about fighting with the uncle's family. After leaving the family, it becomes more and more interesting. Selling opportunities is the funniest, and the Destruction of the Sky Secret Tower is the most touching. Looking forward to the subsequent plots, yes two chapters a day are too few, at least three chapters are needed!

There is a small bug, that is, the Fuso Secret Realm. Later in the plot, Mo Chuan was actually brought up by the spirit of the Fuso Secret Realm. Many of his opportunities were also obtained by the secret realm spirit for him. Then why did he go to the heroine in the middle to get some disguise skills in exchange for the Pure World Lotus? The woman's Pure World Lotus was picked from Fusang Secret Realm, and there are many in it. There is another question, which is a question. I don't know if the author will come around later. Mo Chuan is a member of the seven aristocratic families, one of the people who are to be liquidated by heaven, so why is his chance so good? It is true that his luck is a bit stronger than that of the heroine. It is not logical to say that the Fuso Spirit can only help him partially. In other words, why can this person get three tokens to enter the secret realm at a young age, and directly enter the center of the secret realm? This fact itself is a sign of bad luck! I hope he really dies after being killed by the female protagonist, and doesn't want to be resurrected later. This is really disgusting, it will be extremely disgusting. Although the author now says that there is no CP, many authors want to eat both sides, saying that there will be a male protagonist later. If there is a male protagonist, I would rather that the male protagonist is a master or something else, rather than a member of the seven major families.

Why is it frequently emphasized in the article that women are jealous? Isn't this an article about women?

I would like to ask if Mo Chuan is the male protagonist. If so, I will not subscribe. Also, besides taking advantage of the female protagonist, does Xie Siniang have any other uses? If this female supporting role only takes advantage, then abandon it in advance without equal return.

Why doesn't the heroine have a serious name? She's always called her by her ranking. She's obviously the eldest heroine. If Xie Jiuniang is called Ranking in her own family and she's almost gone out, she can't also be called Ranking. Then shouldn't the eldest girl be called Auntie Xie😥