Xiao Yan, the Emperor's Son Who Fights Against the Sky

The whole book revolves around the imagination of Emperor Xiao Xuancheng, which makes up for some of the regrets of the original work Xiao Yan. The shortcoming is that the starting point is too high and there are too many girls, so the main plot quickly jumps to the evil tribe outside the territory, and the dungeon adventure in Douqi Continent is much less. In addition, although I like the plots of Alien Fire Aftermath and Dual Cultivation, they are too clever. First getting on the train and then replenishing tickets and improving strength have flattened the characters of the heroines. Except for the good description of the weapon refiner Hun Miaomiao who is also a time traveler, the character arc of the original heroines is basically inferior. In addition, the finale is a bit rushed, and some chapters feel like a running account. In the battle, Xiao Yan stood out, the other female protagonists did not appear, and the Dragon Emperor Zi Yan did not explain the confiscation. It was a pity. Although Xiao Yan in the Great Master Chapter of "Invincible from Genius to Doupo" is not as good as this book, on the other hand, it is equivalent to giving the heroines a chance to appear, such as the spiritual formation master Xun'er and the battle formation master Qing Lin. To sum up, the writing style of this book is slightly lacking, but the concept is acceptable and it is still worth reading. Come on, author, and look forward to better works!

Drive high and go low. To put it bluntly, it's a stallion style with some creativity.

Queen Medusa

I just read the latest chapter, it's a brainless read. Not bad. If you look at it with other eyes, don't look at it. The author added some lines in it, such as the invasion of evil tribes in the world, the whereabouts of the ancient fighting emperor, and the regrets of many anime fans, Shui Yunyun. All designed. Now that the collection of women has basically been completed, the author's main plot should be written later. Collect the strange fire, become Dou Emperor, and go to the world

If the author wanted to write like this, it would be too much. With the extraterrestrial demons, people died one after another. When one came, he found that he couldn't beat him. Then he shook people and the protagonist couldn't call them. What happened?

This is unnecessary. In the original novel, Xiao Yan had no choice but to choose Fen Jue. This version of Xiao Yan starts with the same treatment as Gu Xun'er. The Xiao family is the first family to become an emperor in Dou Qi Continent. Their own inheritance is no worse than Fen Jue, so they have to do something like Fen Jue. Nothing new at all. Although the main theme has changed, the routine remains the same.

This Xiao Yan, okay, or maybe this time traveler is just a loser, with a nouveau riche mentality, and the charm of his personality is far worse than that of the original. No matter how many resources and powerful background, he is still the same loser.

The first part was good, but then we got some red-haired monsters and time-travelers to disgust people. If we don't have a villain, why don't we just write about some extraterrestrial races in the world? If you can't handle the new plot, don't try this and stick to the original.

It's quite outrageous. You have done so much and then you can't beat the soul clan saint who is also a time traveler. You are equally talented and have more resources than her. And then you are a 17-year-old Dou Zun, and you still have a Xiao clan with a Dou Emperor. If people hadn't praised you directly for the sake of being a fellow countryman, aren't you just insulting the readers' IQ? Why does it get more outrageous as you go to the back?

I saw this from other book posts, and I would like to share with you Tang San, the madness of the Chinese comic's combat power. A generation of god-kings, invincible in the world, unworthy of being anyone's opponent. Tang San, a milestone in the Chinese comic's combat power, has set a new low in the Chinese comic's combat power. The power is enough to shatter hydrogen gas, and the intelligence is close to that of Patrick. His long-term plan is more brain-burning than Teletubbies, the death of his wife is more tear-jerking than the Midnight Ring, his battle with the six god-kings is more passionate than Boruto, and his reunion with his family is more heartwarming than The Shining. No matter how weak you are, He is always beneath you. He has unparalleled talent and strength, stands at the pinnacle of hydrogen people, and is expected to be close to the working cell. He is more intelligent than single-celled organisms and more principled than Kohei Horikoshi. He is the sewer in Chinese comics and the Sunset Six in Gods. His power transcends the limits of human imagination, transcends great fruits, and transcends the concept of "weakness." No matter what, you can't be weaker than him. Seeing his wife's death from illness, one was in tears, nine were smiling, and one was laughing wildly. He is the only god from ancient times to the present who cannot even cure diseases. Here, I dedicate a poem to Tang San: A hundred kilograms of force shatters the void, and a giant cotton hammer fights unparalleled. The weakest character in Chinese comics is not you, the clown is actually you. The above is all my respect for the great god king Tang San. 😂😂😂😂😂

Jie Jie Jie, the Lord of the Soul Palace congratulates Chief Xiao on his promotion to Dou Emperor.

Complaining about a few minor bugs 1. Without the persecution of the Soul Palace, why didn't Yao Lao break through to Half Saint when he appeared on the stage? In the original work, after staying in the ring for so long and being tortured by the Soul Capture Palace for so long, he broke through to the semi-saint level as soon as he was resurrected. It stands to reason that Yao Lao must have a semi-saint when he appears 2. Where is Ancestor Fenyan? This person in the original work is also very confusing. He probably died under the persecution of the Soul Clan. If the Soul Clan is gone, this person should still be alive. Since Xiao Xuan is not dead, the Three Mysterious Transformers of Sky Fire are still in the Burning Flame Valley and have such a good relationship with Xiao Xuan. Then he should not be dead yet, where is the Nine Star Dou Sheng late stage 3. Byd Why did Dragon Island split again? Since you arranged that Tuoshe Ancient Emperor is still there, Xiao Xuan should also enter the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's tomb. Then there is no reason for Zhukun to still be in the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's tomb. How could Long Island be divided? 4. Since Xiao Xuan has become Dou Emperor, why doesn't he draw the source energy of heaven and earth? If it is said that attracting the source energy of heaven and earth will destroy that big formation, then you can at least write it down? 5. Judging from your attitude, Xiao Xuan must be willing to fight against the evil tribe outside the territory. Then why didn't BYD kill the remnant soul of the Demon Emperor on the Sacred Artifact Mountain? It doesn't take much effort, right? You are not sure that the sealed Demon Emperor is still alive, and you are not willing to deal with the remaining soul? Also, after Xiao Xuan became emperor, he still allowed these low-level evil races from outside the territory to run around? Any force may have extraterritorial evil tribes, which are also 6

If your book is related to the world of Zhetian, to be honest, you have been ruined. People of Zhetian always think that their emperor is extremely awesome, and other books are not as good as him as a saint if they practice to the top. If you write about fighting to break the world, write about fighting to break the world. Don't add other worlds. You can add their items, but you can't join their world. You have to figure out who your audience is.

What, harem literature is too vulgar? No man, I've already read the fanfic. I really like harem stories. It's so cool to see Xiao Yan take on all the heroines.

Author, you have to make it clear that you are a Dou Po fan, not a Zhe Tian fan. If you don't write about Infinite Streaming, then don't rely on other novels. If you write about Dou Po, just do Dou Po. Can you please stop making some messy stuff?

It doesn't matter if you have a single heroine or multiple heroines, you can even turn into a bulldozer and push one by one, as long as they are willing, but it's really a bit extroverted for you to choose a strong one. The other plots are so well written that I can only pretend that I haven't read this paragraph. I hope you will think more about it when writing later.

Author, what I want to read is Doupo, not Zhetian. You can make fun of it, but if you continue to write about Zhetian, I will delete the book!

Logically speaking, since Xiao Xuan broke through the Dou Emperor, the Xiao clan should not have had only one Dou Emperor for more than a thousand years. In the original work, Xiao Yan cultivated five fighting emperors by himself by absorbing the source energy.

The engagement with Nalan Yanran doesn't feel right. What is Xiao Lin's identity? Even if he was saved by a small family by chance, he should give him some skills and elixirs as a reward. What the hell is it like to marry him directly with his fingertips?

When I saw the submachine guns and pistols, I felt something was wrong. The more I wrote, the more outrageous it became. Wouldn't it be better to write more emotional lines? I have to add some messy plots.

This is Xiao Yan's original growth trajectory

It is very important to follow up on reading. I hope all interested readers will follow up on reading! After all, you don't want this book to be buried, right?😏

It's so studdy. There's a big difference between harem novels and stallion novels. Every subsequent chapter is about women.

What's the way to smile evilly? He smiles evilly at every turn. The way he wrote it ten years ago is still written today. It's too cliche. Whenever I see this evil smile, I always think of the God of War with a crooked mouth. It's so embarrassing.

This book is considered to be the most enjoyable among the harem battles I have read. Unfortunately, I still use the Sky List to break through the Great Master later.

Is the blood essence and blood in the middle stage of One Star Dou Sheng not as useful as the Po Zong Pill? ? ? Several snake people gave a drop of blood essence. Shouldn't everyone directly break through to Douzong for several stars after swallowing it? ? ?

Have you forgotten the Demon Saint of Underworld and agreed to take it?

Is there anyone who likes to discuss? Marshal Lei and I discussed whether Dou Po is the Heavenly Supreme or the Supreme, but we couldn't come up with any results. The key point is that the author of Dou Po Mask Man supports the Supreme Realm and has deleted several of my comments. Is there anyone who shares my opinion that Dou Po is the Heavenly Supreme and is more leisurely? If so, you can join the discussion.

The author should take a few days off. The progress has been too fast recently. It feels like you are reading the outline instead of the plot.

Why is there a missing chapter in Volume 4? In the volume about going to Canaan, Chapter 4 goes directly to Chapter 6, and there is no Chapter 5.