Rebirth of Emperor Yan: Speed ​​Through the Battle!

Dear readers, you don't want this book to die!

Xiao Yan, is that also called regret? To put it bluntly, he can make amends at any time. His feelings for those women were nothing more than friendship.

Although I haven't watched it yet, I still agree with the harem flow. When I read the original work, I was very upset. Did the majestic Emperor Yan lack that little waist strength? ! !

Just because there is no follow-up in the original book doesn't mean it's confiscated. Otherwise, why would you take them back? I'm sorry.

I'm speechless. A master reincarnated and went to Canaan College to play house with a bunch of brats, and he spent so much writing 😒😒😒

I just want to give you a reward of one yuan. I just want to say that the protagonist is greasy and wretched, and he is too low-key.

1. Don't think about how it was in the previous life. It didn't depict the style of a master at all, even now it doesn't even have the character of a Dou Di. There will be a paragraph in two or three chapters. 2. Don't be fooled! I always smile bitterly, but I don't want to be too upright, okay? 3. It's less urban Long Aotian, I thought I was reading an urban novel.

I hope that I can grasp the character scale of the protagonist Xiao Yan. After all, the main protagonist of the Internet novel back then was that after passing through the Yunlan Sect, he would not play the kind of killing others, nor would he play the kind of eradicating the roots. He has a relatively easy-going and carefree personality. The only thing that destroyed the Soul Palace was the anti-inflammatory action.

The author's writing style becomes more and more like a potato, and the same goes for water. To be honest this is not an advantage. It gets more and more boring later on, there isn't much content in one chapter, it's all clichés.

The Dou Emperor's bloodline has been exhausted, so he can only use the Three Mysterious Changes of Heavenly Fire to activate the clan pattern, which is of no use to cultivation. Moreover, the original book says that the Xiao Clan's bloodline was used by Xiao Xuan to break through the Dou Emperor.

How many do you plan to collect? Personally, I hope to include less of them. Compared to the original work, just add the Little Medical Fairy, Nalan Yanran, Yun Yun, and Qinglin. Things like Ya Fei, Feng Qing'er, Han Xue, etc. Are not really necessary. They don't help the plot, and they add an extra layer of aura and lose their own characteristics. Too many descriptions will make them homogeneous. It is better to focus on these people's characters and ink to highlight their roles and characteristics. What's more, Xun'er's possessiveness towards Xiao Yan is definitely not easy to share with others. It's not easy to get her approval. It's unfair to Xun'er that she already made a lot of things before marrying Xun'er, and it's also irresponsible to the other heroines. The author did not handle this part of the plot of the Little Doctor Fairy well enough. I personally feel that Xiao Yan's character would not be so "teasing" towards the Little Doctor Fairy when he first meets him. He is more inclined to slowly pour in his feelings to build up his favorability, face his own feelings at the right time, break down the barriers, and things will come naturally. For a character like Nalan Yanran, it would be appropriate to be "stronger". For this kind of emperor's darling to be "molested" by his fiancé in front of Xiao Yan, in the eyes of outsiders, it is flirting. This difference from the original work is probably what readers will like to see. Female protagonists with different personalities have to interact differently. This is one of the reasons why I am not optimistic about having too many female protagonists. Compared with Xiao Yan who lives alone in the original work, with the addition of female protagonists, related plots will also unfold. If there are too many female protagonists, the difficulty will rise sharply and it will be difficult to cover everything. I hope this is to make up for the regretful female protagonists in the original work, rather than to collect female cards. I have read enough stories about studs who accepted a girl's name. Of course, these are personal suggestions and do not represent the opinions of others

The reason why there are not many readers of the second half of the book is not that the author's writing skills have declined, but that the audience of The Lord is not large. Most of those who have read the Potato book have only read Fighting to Break the Sphere, and they are dying to read the other half of Wu Dong Qian Kun. Later on, Tudou kept copying himself, and Leng Shengsheng lost all his popularity. Strictly speaking, the audience of the Great Master was no longer the same group of people who watched Fighting Breaking the Sky. This has led to a split among readers and fans. Those who have watched Battle of the Sky have not seen The Lord, and those who have seen The Lord have not seen Battle of the Sky. There are very few who have seen both. This is the main reason for the decline in subsequent reading. Most of them don't know what the big master is talking about, and of course they don't know what's so exciting about it, which makes the author ramble on about the description, leaving the readers confused. Just like the fans who wrote the Chen Dong trilogy, many of them achieved great results in writing No. 10 And Ye Hei in the early stage. After the Immortal Emperor was sacrificed, the pursuit exploded instantly. Readers couldn't understand it anymore and simply gave up the book. It's all for reasons like this.

I guess the author used to write about Urban Dragon King. There was a lot of oiliness in the early stage.

The author doesn't listen to advice, he's the kind of person who goes against his will. Every chapter has content, but it's all narration and clichés that can be said or not. The specific plot is just not willing to advance. There is a meeting in one chapter, a fierce fight in one or two chapters, a killing of demons in one chapter, a return to the Dou Qi Continent in one chapter, a capture of Qing Yanjing in one chapter, and a fight back in another chapter to escape. Keep it compact and make the scene bigger, and you can get through this plot. But look at what our dear author has done. The camera switching is artificial, the writing is stiff, and it took seventeen bland chapters to write this climax. I can only say that there is really no sincerity at all. Looking at the numbers mentioned in this chapter, you can see how unsatisfactory the recent plot has been. The subscription will be completed after subscribing to this book, and it will be over to see if I will continue to follow up on the next book. Don't ask for votes, just finish the book as soon as possible.

The alchemist's ingredients for refining medicine are all medicinal materials, with at most some magic core and blood essence added. However, in recent chapters, after coming out of the Chaos Furnace, there has been a tendency toward human elixirs. It's true that they are enemies. Even if you beat them to death, you have to refine them into spiritual liquid, and then absorb them yourself to speed up the level. It's really a bit unnecessary and scary. Originally, Rebirth is an invincible style. Practicing everything not only gives readers a bad impression, but also has little effect on promoting the plot. One reader Zhang said it well, this is Emperor Yan, not Evil Emperor, the character should be there. Moreover, the most similar experience to this in Xiao Yan's original work is probably only one, the source of the soul in the Soul Absorbing Palace, but that was a choice driven by pressure and surrounded by powerful enemies. It is also quite different from your direct refining of human spirit liquid. This is not a question of whether the Holy Mother is the Holy Mother or not. Using human beings as raw materials or absorbing them directly is already crossing the bottom line. I hope the author will see and pay attention to this issue. I gave 8 double monthly passes last month. I hope this book gets better and better.

This book is obviously so well-written at the beginning. Before Fighting the Saint, it has the passion and passion of the original work. However, after Fighting the Emperor, it starts straight away. With various water scenes and water plots, readers can even kayak in the hydrology. The main reason is probably that the author's mentality has changed and his attitude is not correct. Author, look next door. The author of the book about Cheng Di. He just finished the last book, Cai Guicai, which was written at a level, and it has been discontinued for so long, but he has an attitude and will not be meaningless. The quality of your opening chapter is obviously very good, why can't you write it well? Achievements are temporary. If you write well, readers will naturally keep up with you. In the future, you will have good resources and recommendations. Then won't you make money? This is your problem. I don't have the same determination to write articles as before. You have six or seven monthly tickets in your hand, let's see how you play out this climax.

I admit that I am just a nerd 🤓 I hope the author can write about Feng Qing'er's psychology even if it is just a picture of stamp collecting 😌

Everyone in the comments is talented and speaks nicely. I like them very much 😎

Isn't this book a lot less than the previous one? It's a pity, I personally still like the more cool harems, the better It would be better to have both quality and more heroines like Fengqiqingshan Bigger is good, more is beautiful

Xun'er Meimei's Invisibility Chapter 100

I don't want to say anything else, it's so poisonous, I won't bury the trap, the follow-up of Fengleiyue Shadow Sect is coming.

In fact, the author, you are more suitable for writing Dou Po fans.

The writing of this novel can be regarded as the first level among all Dou Po fans. Although I actually think the content itself is only above average, I have read all the Dou Po fandoms from Qidian. Com, and it is indeed the first one. It all depends on peers. The content is quite satisfactory, but it is a bit watery. Especially after breaking through the Overlord, I basically finished jumping to the Tianyuan Realm when I first arrived. However, the shortcomings do not outweigh the good points. The plots in Douqi Continent are well written, and most of the pitfalls have been filled.

I feel like there could be more emotional scenes

I have read a Perfect World fanfic before. The protagonist in it is a villain. He plots against his family, wife and children, and refuses to save them. However, he knows that as long as he can transcend the universe, he can resurrect them, so he will not be so heart-wrenching and uncomfortable. But Emperor Yan is different. , He knew that he could not prevent the deaths of his relatives and friends, but he didn't know if he could do that. He was hesitant and helpless. Brother Dongzi was completely desperate. Don't delay the author anymore. Don't write the little doctor fairy and Ying Huanhuan to death anymore. I feel bad for them. Please

You guys are awesome too, the author's words are considered farts

How can I put it this way? I feel that the lifespan is not long enough. It only takes tens of millions of years to reach the end of the world. According to the decimal system, the protagonist should give it 1 trillion years. It should be the same life span as the big universe in the world view, but that's it. There are a lot of numerical units later, and there is still a gap in the protagonist's rebirth.

Tell me, is it you who speeds through the main god space?