Douluo: Qilin Steps on the Heavens

The author should not whitewash Bibi Dong. After all, Wuhun Palace trained him but he was ungrateful.

The author wants to accept Qian Renxue. In fact, 9 is fine, but she must not be brainless. Don't give her a hug and be completely moved by the slightest concern. In the early stage of "Shou Qian Renxue", it should be the kind of frenemies and friends, competing with each other, and the protagonist cannot affect the Wuhun Palace plan, otherwise a group of old otakus will come out to talk about life with you.

The author writes well. It would be great if the heroine could be added as Zhu Zhuqing. I really admire this strong female character in the original work. I hope the author doesn't add Ning Rongrong, who has the arrogant princess disease. It's annoying to watch.

And the author, I think it's a bit ridiculous. In "Douluo Dalu" written by the third young master of the Tang family, you cannot take too much jelly grass, but I want to say one thing. But didn't Tang San just take more fairy grass? Moreover, the three fairy grasses give people a very contradictory feeling.

It was originally written well, but the protagonist suddenly suffered a cerebral infarction, went to Notting City to meet Tang San for no reason, and then spoke some bird language. I really don't understand the meaning of writing like this.

Readers who like single female protagonists (without female protagonists) will not read it, and readers who like harems will definitely not like it because of the gift of girls, so most of them will be cut off 😅

Author, your handling here is terrible. Attacking the Wuhun Palace is better than attacking the angel god statue. Qiandaoliu is a fanatical believer of the Angel God. He may be able to escape if he attacks the Wuhun Palace. Attacking the faith of a believer. Let's put it this way, Tang Chen would not dare to do this. This is to force Qiandaoliu to kill them all. Qian Daoliu would be sorry for his faith if he didn't kill Haotian Sect completely. Either Qian Daoliu shouldn't appear. If he appears like this, it's better not to appear. Don't call him Sky Invincible, just call him Sky Chicken.

Qilin is a hoof, not a claw. Hooves are the most important feature of the Qilin beast. Without hooves, the Qilin clan is the kind of heretic who will be beaten to death immediately after birth.

You write like this that the peerless Douluo at level 99 cannot leave a half-disabled person at level 95. That's nonsense. Go away.

It's a pity that you drove high and walked low and walked directly to the cliff.