Douluo: Qilin Treads the Sky

The author should not whitewash Bibi Dong. After all, Wuhun Palace trained him but he was ungrateful.

The author wants to accept Qian Renxue. In fact, 9 is fine, but she must not be brainless. Don't give her a hug and be completely moved by the slightest concern. In the early stage of "Shou Qian Renxue", it should be the kind of frenemies and friends, competing with each other, and the protagonist cannot affect the Wuhun Palace plan, otherwise a group of old otakus will come out to talk about life with you.

The author writes well. It would be great if the heroine could be added as Zhu Zhuqing. I really admire this strong female character in the original work. I hope the author doesn't add Ning Rongrong, who has the arrogant princess disease. It's annoying to watch.

And the author, I think it's a bit ridiculous. In "Douluo Dalu" written by the third young master of the Tang family, you cannot take too much jelly grass, but I want to say one thing. But didn't Tang San just take more fairy grass? Moreover, the three fairy grasses give people a very contradictory feeling.

It was originally written well, but the protagonist suddenly suffered a cerebral infarction, went to Notting City to meet Tang San for no reason, and then spoke some bird language. I really don't understand the meaning of writing like this.

Readers who like single female protagonists (without female protagonists) will not read it, and readers who like harems will definitely not like it because of the gift of girls, so most of them will be cut off 😅

Author, your handling here is terrible. Attacking the Wuhun Palace is better than attacking the angel god statue. Qiandaoliu is a fanatical believer of the Angel God. He may be able to escape if he attacks the Wuhun Palace. Attacking the faith of a believer. Let's put it this way, Tang Chen would not dare to do this. This is to force Qiandaoliu to kill them all. Qian Daoliu would be sorry for his faith if he didn't kill Haotian Sect completely. Either Qian Daoliu shouldn't appear. If he appears like this, it's better not to appear. Don't call him Sky Invincible, just call him Sky Chicken.

Qilin is a hoof, not a claw. Hooves are the most important feature of the Qilin beast. Without hooves, the Qilin clan is the kind of heretic who will be beaten to death immediately after birth.

You write like this that the peerless Douluo at level 99 cannot leave a half-disabled person at level 95. That's nonsense. Go away.

It's a pity that you drove high and walked low and walked directly to the cliff.

The downfall of this book is that it is extremely careless about the future of Dugu Yan (also the protagonist Qingmei's wife). A snake has already trained in ice and fire, not to mention inheriting cold poison and fire poison. As a result, it keeps looking for spider soul beasts to absorb soul rings, which directly destroys its potential.

It was so well written before. The Lava God King who has been preparing for so long has become the underworld. He also hooked up with the soul beast. I feel a little sorry for destroying their cultivation. It smells a bit ungrateful. Find a god for your wife. I haven't let you be killed by Shura yet. In the divine world, human beings and gods have the final say. The only ones who have hatred are Shura and Poseidon. Why does it feel like the protagonist's butt is about to sit crooked? The writing is clearly so good. There are quite a few poisonous spots in the back. He clearly created his own lava god king. Plus a double super artifact with one attack and one defense. The first god king in the god world. How nice it would be to build the divine world together with destroying them. So much of the previous plot foreshadowing was completely overturned and changed. It's like someone has been replaced. I feel like I'm skipping a beat.

I just saw 143. I killed Tang Hao and exploded a lot of soul bones. Then I said I didn't like it and wanted to book a hundred thousand year one. I was lucky enough to say that the previous ones were all external soul bones. Has the author changed here? Didn't I already have a right leg bone that exploded and a right arm bone that was a championship prize? I forgot about it so quickly. It looks so awkward and inexplicable.

Farewell, 99 Thousand Daoliu, there is no room for Level 95 seriously injured Tang Hao, this made me laugh to death.

Every time I watch Douluo Fans, the comment section below is so exciting

Damn, what a waste of time. This is just some YY articles I wrote after watching "Douluo Dalu". The logic inside is weak and the text is also pale and feeble. It's just a running account. Don't know either. Those complimentary comments posted previously. Are you a sailor?

I can't help but want to complain about it. If the protagonist's side and Tang San's side are together, the total sum will definitely be the protagonist's side. Know. Level 95 Du Bo and level 94 Haotian Douluo, neither one can do anything to the other. Then Tang San's side and Wuhundian's side. Strengthen, it will definitely be Tang San's side. Like. Level 94 or Level 95 Haotian Douluo and Level 99 Great Enshrinement. Level 99 Extreme Douluo Qian Daoliu couldn't take it down, and he even ran away with him alone. The combat power fluctuates up and down, just like this without thinking clearly. A lot of poisonous spots were produced. Combat power floats here and there, and many times I have to force myself to explain. 😅

Either don't write about Qian Daoliu coming out. Even if you write about Qian Daoliu taking action, you can still write about Shura God secretly helping Tang Hao before he can escape. This would be a lot more reasonable. And I remember that at this time, Tang Hao's body would collapse when he exploded the eight rings, so I really started to make things up. The original text was that level 96 Tang Hao, who was completely injured, could barely frighten the 98 Golden Crocodile who had lost his spirit by exploding rings. How can you, a level 95 person with only one injury, run away in Qiandaoliu's home court? Bo Saixi can compete with Qian Renxue, who has just become a god, at home, but Qian Daoliu can't leave Tang Hao alone?

Tang Chen also won half a hand during the sparring match. No one could beat Qian Daoliu at all costs, because he was the only one who could fly at the three limits. But here, Tang Hao could run away without angering Qian Daoliu? Do you want to express that Tang Chen is a waste? Worse than Tang Hao?

Zhang Wei has no culture, so he has a perverted yearning for aristocratic etiquette, so he let Tang San enter Yuexuan to use the so-called aristocratic etiquette to cultivate his heart. The author has it, there is no need for the protagonist to enter there, there are many ways to cultivate the heart, the aristocratic etiquette is pure and deceptive, the more aristocratic, the dirtier the heart 🤫

I couldn't stand it until halfway through. Except for the protagonists, the other characters were poorly portrayed, as if they had no brains. If you blindly stick to the original story, the butterfly effect of the protagonist will be the same as nothing else.

It was fine in the front, but I couldn't stand it when I got to Tang Hao. First of all, Tang Hao couldn't kill the level 52 protagonist with a giant Sumeru hammer. Secondly, Bibi Dong, Juhua Pass, Poison Douluo, and Angel Douluo couldn't spare a seriously injured Tang Hao. I don't even understand how you can write something like this? Angel Douluo flies so fast, why did your Clear Sky Hammer escape?

I just don't understand, why can't there be only one female protagonist and one male protagonist? I'm so devastated! And add a heroine? I finally found the beginning, plot, etc. And it was very good. The writing gets worse and worse from now on! I really...😭😭

Woohoo. Douluo is still good-looking. Watched it again. Why hasn't your new book hit the streets yet? It's so easy to write about Douluo when he rushes into the street. I want to see the little girl punched and kicked three times in the anus. And Bibi Dong Qian Renxue is a love brain in the same line as Love Continent. Incredibly delicious. Must taste. Send it to the big cat quickly

Please recommend some Douluo harem stories, as long as you think they are good, you can recommend them.

The writing is dull, without passion or passion.

I think the first part was very good, but the second part fell apart after Ditian and the others came out.

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The writing is quite good, but I have a question here. How is the second ring of the millennium better than the second ring of the nine hundred years? I've also read a lot of fan fiction, and I just want to ask, if you didn't have a super Douluo as your backing, a time-traveling Douluo, and you had the ability to have a second ring for a thousand years, would you dare to absorb it? Do you dare to be this guinea pig? If a person with superpowers appears in reality, who is not directly invincible and can destroy the world, would you dare to expose him? By the way, I'm looking for a book. There is a novel where the author directly helped Dugu Bo reach level 99. Does anyone know which one it is?

The plot is okay, but I feel like there's too much nonsense and too many descriptions.