Rebirth of the Free Era

It's well written. The author should write quickly. Don't be a eunuch.

The plot of this article is refreshing except for the female part, but when it comes to the female part, it is particularly greasy. In terms of perception, it is not suitable for a multi-female protagonist route. I hope that in the future, I will focus on starting a business and having sex for free instead of messing around with women. If you have Akinayama's skills, it's fine, but if you don't, it's just a points deduction.

It's well written and very interesting, but the update is too slow. In addition, the method of pursuing Yi Qingqing is too naive. Making money is the right way. If you don't have money, you can't keep it. You have to put your career first.

This heroine doesn't have much of an impression. We need to add more scenes. If the career doesn't work out and the heroine doesn't interact with the protagonist, and we can only write it by adding a new heroine, the book will basically be scrapped.

Write more about the business line, burn money on financing and go public, and write less about the emotional drama. The remodeling Millennium next door has done a great job and is now fully booked.

This is called the style of the Western Regions

Give me one, please! In that era, at least five out of ten beautiful young girls with tattoos and smoking were addicts! Dare you borrow it? Big head!

It's best not to write about women at the beginning of a novel. Women are better. Start looking for women before you even find the money.

It's very beautiful. I stayed up late to catch up on the latest updates. I'm a liar. I'm a fool to death.

Some people say the writing is fine. I think it's just the opposite. The plot is good, but the writing is not. It doesn't control the rhythm well, and it's a mess.

From the first chapter I borrowed cigarettes from a beautiful woman, I couldn't stop reading.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 145. Business war is not business war, daily life is not daily life, development is not development, it's so messy. How can I develop a plot from just a small thing? I feel like there is no outline. I just add a plot wherever I write.

I suggest changing the English name of the anti-angle 'china'. Doesn't the author not know what it means when translated into English? 😦

Reborn to play black industry? Don't you feel very low?

Ignoring the core content of online articles and pretending to be cool is a slap in the face

I have read a lot of urban articles, and this is one I can keep reading. The writing is very smooth, has content and plot, and looks interesting. There must be some slap-in-the-face routines, and some of them, such as the bar scene, are quite reasonable and quite enjoyable to watch. The interaction with the heroine is also very good, which is top-notch among so many novels. It's just that the progress is a little faster, it depends on the author's next arrangement. As for the character of the protagonist, everyone has their own preferences. Some people like the more funny ones, and some like the more serious ones. It's impossible to satisfy everyone. In short, support the author

It's too slow, the dishes will be cold soon

It seems fine so far. I feel like sometimes the heroine is offline for too long and has little interaction with the protagonist.

Brother, what do you mean by Chapter 29? I'll chase people away, okay😒 Oh

This book can still be read.

Why did the old man suddenly force himself into the water?

Has the author written any other books? Let me support you.

There are fewer and fewer good books. Color