Marvel Experts

These are the enthusiastic neighbor ladies

The problem with this book is that you have to read a large number of film and television works, many of which were produced before the 1990s. Then the author put a huge amount of information into the Marvel Universe, and then used various supporting characters' perspectives to cover 50% of the chapters. It is true that events unfold slowly according to the timeline, but often prefixes like two hours ago, ten hours ago... Cause many places to jump to more than ten chapters without affecting the main line of reading. Instead, if you read chapter by chapter, you will soon forget what happened before. Especially after the author puts three or four events at the same time point, this feeling of forgetting the plot context is even more obvious. The constant switching of perspectives of various supporting characters makes the reading seriously fragmented.

This is Medical Examiner Temprie Breonna

Generally speaking, it's not bad. For me, it's just that it's a bit laborious to read and not very coherent. It doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel but a script.

Well, the protagonist is involved in too many lines, and the character creation of each character is a bit mindless and confusing, and there is no desire for people to continue reading. It seems that I want both a bear's paw and a fish. Next time I open a new book, it is better to leave out some other film and television characters. This is the main way to write about Marvel. The character creation of the protagonist and supporting characters is a bit bad, and I am speechless.

The history of Norman's possible demise... In this story, the protagonist has no sense of existence. Bob and Rambo are the protagonists, and the description of David Rossi is too disgusting. It would be okay if it were a random person, but David Rossi is different. He has the prototype of an American TV series.

This is Carol Danforth.

Support a wave

But you may spend most of this book diving. Write slowly and someone will read it. Because you are recommended in the 100,000-word stage.

When movie characters appear, add pictures directly after or within the chapter. It is originally a foreign film and television drama, and not everyone is familiar with it. You use the name of Marvel to attract people, but it turns out that it is a movie variety show. Then you have to add pictures to increase the sense of substitution. Otherwise, there are so many foreign names that you will feel dizzy.

This is young Johnny Blaze, who is not Nicholas yet.

Why are there basically no pickled peppers when traveling through Marvel? What happened? Is it still a time-traveling self-propelled cannon? Is it soaked in small peppers? I don't know how to write it.

It has been fattened up, and I am ready to find time to take a look.

This book is pretty good, but it looks a bit messy and a bit cliched in some places, but otherwise it's fine.

There is a huge problem with too frequent flashbacks in the timeline, as there are too many interspersed contents. It's cool but not outstanding. It's really messy. If you don't straighten it out carefully, the look and feel will be too bad.

There are too many elements, and the writing is a bit messy. I still need to sort it out a little. If I hadn't just seen all these elements, I would definitely not understand what is written.