Douluo Starts with Alchemy

The subject matter is good, but why forcefully include the Seven Treasures Sect? To put it bluntly, the protagonist is just a domestic slave in the Seven Treasures Sect. Even the sword bones are just like disciples. Joining this kind of sect means that you and your descendants will be slaves to others. You can make elixirs and weapons, but you are worried that you will not have the resources, and others have no resources for anti-inflammation. It is just a slower accumulation, and it is safer to live on your own.

It's poisonous again. The protagonist is a time traveler. Will he care about parents he has never met? When a supporting character talks about the protagonist's father, the protagonist is so anxious that he wants to kill someone. Chapter 32

Should the author come up with a method of refining elixirs from the human body? Then the protagonist will directly harvest the elixir from the human body and cannibalize people for cultivation.

The supporting characters also have brains, and the comments always refer to Chapter 9, but I want to say that Ning Fengzhi also has a brain. He doesn't just ask someone who is born with full soul power, let alone one who doesn't know whether it is true or not. As for why Ning Fengzhi forces the protagonist, I hope everyone can use their brains. Do you have to explain it all to me? The hint is so obvious. After Ning Fengzhi learned that Yang Ming suddenly went from level six to full level, he consulted ancient books and found that twin martial souls might have this situation, so he felt that the protagonist was either a false innate full soul power, or he might have twin martial souls, even if the probability was very small. But in the book, Ning Fengzhi chose to take the risk and exchange a certain little genius for a peerless genius who might be a twin martial soul. Twin martial souls are peerless geniuses. It was mentioned in Douluo's original work, but there were only a few of them in total. In addition, Yang Ming may be a spy if there is no irrefutable evidence. Between the two, what's wrong with Ning Fengzhi's choice? A small genius who may be a spy is exchanged for an even less likely peerless genius. As the leader of the top sect in Douluo Continent, why doesn't he have the courage? Besides, Yang Ming chose to stay, why didn't he choose to stay? Is there any other force in Douluo Continent that is easier and more suitable for development than the Qibao Glazed Sect? Some readers have encountered this kind of thigh in real life. I don't need to say more. Why are you angry? Because I just saw a lot of malicious comments. Some people don't understand themselves and still think others are dogs. Readers who said that the protagonist is a dog licker, think back to a video clip that appeared on the front end, where he kowtows for ten thousand people. I remember reading the comments and many people said that they could kowtow to the end of the world. How come in the novel, the protagonist is called a dog licker in order to be happier, more comfortable, and more relaxed in the early stage of development. I also mentioned why I didn't choose Wuhun Palace to start, so I don't want to explain more. Also, Wuhun Palace does not have the Qibao Glazed Sect that is suitable for the development of the protagonist. Don't always think that Wuhun Palace is brainless.

I can't stand it anymore. You need to expose all the secrets in Chapter 10. Don't hide the secrets from the beginning. Your setting will disgust readers. The first dozens of chapters are spent desperately interacting with six or seven-year-old children. It's unnecessary. You came from time-travel. Why do you write so much about interacting with little kids when your soul is decades old? It doesn't advance the plot. It took me dozens of chapters to write before I even thought about getting the first ring. What did you think? There is no distinction between primary and secondary. What should be written should not be written more, but more should be written. What should not be written, a lot should be written.

The author doesn't understand what the problem is. You think the logic of the plot is smooth and there is nothing wrong with it, but the problem is that everyone feels too frustrated, right? ? It's not the same thing. In reality, working in a family is always not satisfactory. Reading a novel to relax results in the protagonist being trained like a dog. No matter how smooth the logic is, there will be many people who like to read it?

Why do I look a little bit disgusting?

After reading ten chapters, I feel so embarrassed. Can't I just be a little more modest and develop properly? He is six or seven years old at every turn, counting the heavens and the earth, one congenital person fills the sky, and he goes back and forth in these ten chapters.

A harem story that starts with alchemy and goes off topic

The protagonist's real sword is poisonous in waves. Nausea

Is the protagonist the licking dog of Qibao Glazed Sect?

What did you say? I'm unhappy. I'm unhappy watching this plot.

Isn't it normal to find out that you have a big secret when you divide the elixir yourself?

It's been a long time since I've seen such an aggrieved 🐷corner

The subject matter is good, but I think it's Qibao Glazed Sect's dog-licking.

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to discard it. The author should write urban novels I haven't written what should be written, but I've written everything that shouldn't be written. It's barely edible, so it's considered a coarse grain and a weed.

This book can be read without thinking

The protagonist has destroyed the Qibao Glazed Sect for a long time and called me

Isn't it normal to lick a dog and get cheated?

I never paid much attention to it before. Some people said that they didn't respond to the diaphragm, but there were indeed many such voices, so I also reviewed the chapters of my entire book. The reason is most likely seen. The protagonist is quite frustrated, such as being forced to explode his twin souls, Sword Douluo discovering traces of Yang Ming's soul skills testing and Yang Ming's behavior of practicing many times, and Bai Miaomiao's appearance later, Yang Ming is passive, and so on. In summary, the protagonist has never been able to take the initiative, and only complies with the actions of others in order to take the high road. Why is this happening? I guess there are two reasons. First, the protagonist's level in the novice village is too high. In order to make the writing more reasonable, the protagonist is always passive. For example, even if he hid in Qinghuang Furnace, he was eventually discovered by Sword Douluo. But I'm afraid that if I don't write like this, people will criticize me for being unreasonable. The people Yang Ming meets now are basically people with too high levels. The plug-ins I give him are partial to assist development. They can save lives and assist growth at a very fast speed, but they don't have the absolute strength to ignore everything, so I define it as a semi-invincible article, but I don't seem to have this label. The second is the plot between Ning Li and Yang Ming's mother. I guess many people had a bad feeling after watching it, but the fact is that the plot has already connected the previous one and it is too late to change it. I'm sorry! !

After reading it, I wanted to hack Qibao Glazed Sect to death. . . .

Regarding Shen Nong's many comments in the comment area, I haven't deleted them. They are mainly about my personal thoughts, but I hope I can take a look at them myself before speaking. If I find it annoying afterwards, I can accept it, so I'll just give it a chance.

In fact, this book looks okay. As long as you survive some so-called not-very important poisonous points in the early stage, you will feel much more comfortable later on. Moreover, the author likes to drive😍, come on, don't be a eunuch

A book friend just made a comment, and after reading it, I found out that it was indeed my design that was wrong at the time. My original intention was that I was rejected by the guards at the bottom of Wuhun Palace and refused to enter, so I had no choice but to choose the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. To be honest, the design was not rigorous and the timeline was wrong. It became the Wuhun Palace he went to when he was three years old. I'm sorry, someone's comments related to this before. But I didn't pay attention to it, but it has been changed now.

Is this book pro-Tangshan? According to the attitude of Ning Fengzhi in the original book, he will only be pro-Tang San. If it is pro-Tang San, then I won't read it. Can the author tell me what the outline is? No matter what, he could directly become a god in the free world, or he could develop silently and directly destroy Tang San and others of the Qibao Glazed Sect.

I still don't understand why I want to go to Shrek. It's completely unnecessary?

There's a problem. If you have a stove, your soul power must be high. You said it yourself. If the soul power is high, can an iron sword be considered an ordinary martial soul? Douluo's soul power and martial soul are directly proportional, right?

This book is okay. I can barely accept the poisonous points that everyone said, but I really can't accept the protagonist's mother and the so-called sister. I would like to ask, is it the protagonist who lacks love or the author who lacks love? I didn't look too far ahead. Will they be of any use later on? I feel that so far, it doesn't matter whether I write about them or not. If I write about them, people will feel poisonous. It would be better not to write about them.

There are always typos in the articles written by the author. The author has checked them again, but there are still some omissions. First of all, I would like to thank the readers who reminded me of typos in the comment area. This is my mistake. I am sorry, but I still hope that if you see it and remind the author, the author will correct it in time. I will also review the following chapters several times to avoid too many typos. Thank you all again! !

Friends who are following the update, Chapter 89 was blocked. I revised it and added it to Chapter 90. It's only a dime for 4,000 words. I don't care. If you want to see it, you can read it again.