Five Thousand Years of Cyber ​​Cultivation to Immortality

The biggest problem in this book is not the so-called Holy Mother, but "the emperor used a golden hoe to hoe the ground." For example, in the section where Old Garlic cooks, there are all kinds of materials that sound high-end, but the results are basically the same as now. I can only say that people in the Han Dynasty did not know how to cook, but today people can cook. This was more than two thousand years before the explosion of science and technology. What about the five thousand years after the explosion? It's like hitting a crayfish with a wooden stick at level one, and hitting a super invincible void lobster with the so-called enchanted sword of the king at level 100. In Liu Cixin's novels, advanced civilizations can exhaust the energy of the solar system to list all the words and arrange them to write poems in order to appreciate ancient poems. As a result, the space battle five thousand years later in this book is still the stereotype of ocean battleships fighting against each other. Please, this is not some space opera 40k that encountered a subspace storm and an Iron Man rebellion. People describe the war with nonsense and numbers. Everything is unreasonable and the jump gang has been complained about for a long time. As a result, billions of people in a galaxy of your top pirate group were wiped out in seconds. Among the remaining people, only the protagonist knows how to build. This is really too naive. The billions are just free-range pigs, right? All in all, the author must have checked some things when writing this novel, but not much. His understanding of society is still too vulgar and superficial, but he still agrees with this innovative attitude. After all, at least the protagonist is a normal person in society, at least a normal person who can be an excellent league member or a three-good student, so the story is just fine.

After reading the latest chapter, I was thinking about whether this book is worth reading. The first two hundred chapters of this book are very good cyber novels. Whether it is the description of the social environment or the description of the people at the bottom and the people in power, it is a qualified cyber novel. However, after two hundred chapters, as the protagonist begins to uncover the mystery step by step, the novel begins to take a turn for the worse. The author begins to turn the novel into a so-called novel that explores philosophical significance and begins to fill in a lot of... The useless plot is just philosophy for the sake of philosophy, including the proposal of the theory of cosmic light. I see that there is no excitement here like Liu when he proposed the dark forest theory, that feeling of revealing the truth (although I thought about it later and felt that the dark forest was completely unpleasant, but it was quite exciting when I read it). You, the author, need to think about whether you are writing an online article or a book about philosophy. Now there is no connection between the two. If the sense of separation between the front and back parts is just an appetizer, then now The plot is pure and pure. Author, you have no imagination at all about the interstellar cultivating war. All you do is repeat the path that the teacher has taken and follow the same old routine. Now Gu Ziche is no longer Gu Ziche, he has become a teacher. This is wrong. After reading the last few chapters, I am still thinking whether I am reading history or reading a novel. If you don't have an outline or you are not sure, I suggest you settle it down. At least so far, I don't understand what kind of world you want to write and what kind of protagonist you want to write.

The quality of this book is good, but when I discussed the decision with Huangdi, I felt that there was a problem with the logic: Since I have made up my mind to correct the world of cultivation of strength and lack of cultivation of mind, is it easier to correct the mature tree trunk or to start correcting it all the time in the sprouting stage? Why choose to do twice as much and get half the result? Plus knowing that the so-called catastrophe five thousand years from now is a conspiracy? The first one The second one, if you think that according to the original timeline, you will die together with the Soul God after you go back, then after getting "Ze Bei Common Life", plus the known enemy four hundred years later, it shouldn't be a big problem to spend four hundred years to find a way to defeat him, right? Third, the author always emphasizes that the protagonist is great love, the love of God. But when faced with a choice, I didn't choose to go back because of the people around me (mentioned in the book). Compared with the countless other people who are enslaved, used as food, and used as tools to lose their lives at any time, isn't this a little love? Can it be called the love of God or the love of saints? This situation will not occur according to normal development after returning. In other words, it is another way of saving the common people (preventing the emergence of the seven major sects). And regarding those supporting characters, after a certain year, is it enough to look for similar flowers like covering the sky to see how well they are doing? Fourth, since we are ready to ideologically liberate all mankind, why not choose to start when the spiritual energy is revived after going back, but choose the difficulty of transcending hell five thousand years later. Does the protagonist have character problems or is he deliberately seeking torture?

Let's take a blind guess: the current problems in the world are caused by problems in the future and the collapse of heaven. Then is it possible that it is because people now send Xiao Gu away along with his five thousand years of blessings, destroying the most likely hope of becoming a saint in this era? At the same time, people in this era did not just sit back and wait, but actively looked for ways to change. After Gu Ziche went to the future, everyone began to recruit students extensively. At the same time, the recovery of spiritual energy may also have begun. The matter of cultivating immortals was widely developed, and eventually developed into what it will be five thousand years later. The final result may be that Xiao Gu has to give up his practice and reverse the world and return to five thousand years ago to prevent himself from being sent back five thousand years. Of course, it is also possible that the situation after five thousand years is the result of Xiao Gu not being sent back. Xiao Gu's final opponent may be himself who has lived for five thousand years.

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It can be seen that the author does have ideas, has read through Taoist classics, and has a long history of cyberpunk themes, but the unfamiliarity in the writing is indeed his first time writing. I wish the author a smooth signing. Is there any book club group?

It's funny to say that after reading novels for so many years, I saw in a science fiction novel the race closest to the realm of immortals, which seems to be called Taiweihua. Most of the immortals in modern novels are just mortals who have mastered powerful power. Most of their actions are like flies and dogs, and most of them are the same as mortals in their ideological realm. But there is no way, because everything in the novel is limited by the author, which is one of the reasons why excellent authors can write excellent works.

This is my first time posting. As an old man, I am quite touched to see the classic training settings. I remember that I didn't know whether it was in Xie Feng Song or Wu Song at first, but I saw that Huanglong, a real person, could transform from a mortal to an immortal immediately after enlightenment, without having to worry about exploding his body and dying; in addition, there were also madmen who fell in love with the scene and entered the cave. Cultivation of Taoism and qi training also talks about the foundation of qualifications, and there is always a feeling of being immersed in ancient culture... It feels great to be able to see this flow of cultivating the mind now, and it can be combined with the current trend of novels. The author said that the early writing was too bland, but I thought it was very good. I liked the feeling in the front better, and the fighting and killing in the back was indeed a bit numb... But the above is just my personal feeling. Thousands of people have different faces. The current status of fantasy novels also reflects the majority of people's opinions. After all, the author also needs to have a good meal. I hope the author can maintain the protagonist's original intention as much as possible while having a good meal. I still like the character and philosophy of the current protagonist.

The author gave me an inspiration. He uses orthodox local cultivators to defeat the novel version of cultivators. I can write a story that uses orthodox and detailed Western mysticism to defeat the so-called third-rate wizards in the wizarding literature (

About Gu Ziche. What I see is a person who is not alienated by the times and sticks to his true heart. Maybe you can't understand how difficult it is for ordinary people to persevere when they are not strong. Otherwise, how can we say that he has the heart of a saint? I felt relieved when I saw what he did. It can be said that he is really a Taoist. Treat people as clear as water, or soft. Seeing a treasure does not mean you want to fight for it. I think he is more in line with my imagination of the protagonist's state of mind, and also more in line with what Laozi said, "Husbands only don't fight, so no one in the world can fight with them." There are also people who see how miserable the world is and come here to save people from suffering. It can be said that "to establish a heart for the heaven and earth, to establish a life for the people." "Cultivating Taoism is also cultivating the heart" and "I have a fairy heart, which has been blocked by the dust for a long time." These two sentences touched me very much. The words written by the author moved me no less than this.

I just read Chapter 160. I feel that the setting of this book is quite novel, the philosophical discussions mixed in are also interesting, and the characterization is also good. It's just that the mid-term worldview is too big, and at the same time it introduces too many messy settings, such as other timelines, parallel universes, time travellers, space bubbles, etc., And the details are not carefully polished. If you think about it carefully, you will find many logic bugs. I feel that if this continues, there is a risk of the book crashing. In fact, the author of a book does not need to write down everything that comes to mind. The more he writes, the more confusing he becomes. It is good to be able to achieve logical self-consistency within a reasonable range. The author Junwang has a problem with the rhythm of his article. I feel like you should have an outline. Once the outline is set, don't change it as you write or add it as you write.

Another work sacrificed by big eyes, add it to the bookshelf and take a look at it later

The setting writing is very good, but there is a sense of alienation. The depiction of the world of cyber immortality five thousand years later is extremely close to the final society, and the power belongs to the individual, a society of moral decay, and ideological disintegration. However, the people the protagonist meets, such as the concierge, the cook, and the captain are all good people. From the beginning, it feels that there is a big conspiracy surrounding the protagonist, but it has never been shown, so this book has a great sense of tearing, like writing a classical immortal story in the cyber world.

After reading Chapter 100, the author couldn't grasp this pattern. He wrote it in an empty way and had no purpose. It was tasteless and he abandoned it.

The protagonist is like his ancestors who came to modern times. Maybe he is rich and powerful now, but he always feels something is wrong. The foreign enemies in the book are as fierce as tigers, and human beings are seeking stronger power. It is not like the situation back then.

The setting is very interesting, but the technical problems are huge. The article is not particularly attractive to people. Including the protagonist, all the characters who have appeared so far are very flat. The corresponding effects of many plots are not very good. For example, the concierge at the beginning felt that he died very lightly. My suggestion for revision is to find more novels with more prominent characters and more reasonable stories, and study them. Let the story fall to the ground and be grounded. Now it feels like it is light and weightless in the air.

Author, I don't know how to send you a private message, but as someone who is familiar with the philosophy of Lao Zhuang and Zhuang Zhuang, Nietzsche, and Schopenhauer, I personally believe that immortality does not help all things, but is a kind of transcendence. What is the shortcut to becoming an immortal? Lao Tzu said that heaven and earth are not benevolent and treat all things as stupid dogs. Water is good and benefits all things without fighting. The meaning of these is that becoming an immortal and becoming a Taoist is to become something like a natural law, such as the law of gravity. Gravity helps everyone without asking for anything in return, because the existence of all things is dispensable to it. You can learn about gravity, but you can't change it. Just like one of my favorite poems, the author, who was demoted after experiencing the peak of his power, passed by the Yangtze River and saw an old man fishing leisurely with a warm cup of wine on the boat. No matter what happened, he always smiled and met each other with joy. This is an immortal. No one can affect the life of this old man. He has achieved self-sufficiency and has no material pursuits. This is the Linjiang Immortal: a white-haired fisherman on the river nagisa, accustomed to watching the autumn moon and spring breeze. Happy reunion over a pot of wine. Many things in ancient and modern times are all talked about with laughter.

After reading Chapter 94, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is a good guy who is bullied wherever he goes. All his friends and comrades are dead. The entire high-level human thoughts and society are extremely dark and cruel. There is no value in saving them. The best thing is to die. The thought of the protagonist trying to save these scum makes me sick. It's better to be killed by bugs.

Live, live! Hahahahahaha!

The speculation in the later period fell into chaos and gradually went out of control, affecting the rhythm of the story. I hope that the priority of the next book's story integrity can be placed higher, with some speculation. Generally speaking, the protagonist's character fits the beautiful image in my mind. Gentleman-like characters are really rare to see in the world of immortality. The first half of the story is very interesting, but in the second half the Tianzun who faked his death lost the highlight moment of his appearance, which is a bit regretful.

In fact, the quality of this book is so good. I think the reason why it has not become popular is that the anti-theft is too good, which leads to low spread. Many platinums are also capable of preventing theft, but they deliberately do not prevent theft just to spread the word.

When science and immortality are combined, immortality and power collude. Cultivation is as simple as drinking water and eating. The immortal dignitaries firmly control the government and pass it down from generation to generation. The story of this book was born. I saw the protagonist practicing qi to kill the golden elixir. The method of practicing the golden elixir was really fucked. From here, I saw a microcosm of the book five thousand years later. The practitioners in it were all deceived and lame. No matter how high they were, no matter how they practiced, they only increased the blue bar, level up, and had no skills. The protagonist had this blue bar, but he had all kinds of dazzling skills and was killed directly, and nothing else. I dare to imagine how miserable it is. Originally, the previous gods could only be janitors and felt nothing. As soon as the protagonist fought, the whole world felt suffocated. I boldly predicted that it was because the protagonist arrived and taught the dragon slaying technique. The dignitary in this future world studied the protagonist's footsteps and found that he came from the past. Then he used magical powers to destroy the protagonist's era, and was predicted by the protagonist's era, and then the protagonist traveled back to form a ring.

The latest chapter was updated in July last year, and it has been almost half a year without any changes.

There is a book called The Wall Facer, but the Nascent Soul Stage feels very similar to the author's style of writing

The biggest and most common problem with this type of book is that the author's personal content is greater than the plot, resulting in extremely poor readability. Even if the author's views are correct and the author's views are not discussed, too much about Bianjing will cause the online article to lose its entertainment, and it is not surprising that the results are poor.

The dialogues in the middle of Chapter 465 of Volume 3 of Peach Blossom Land are gone! 😭