
Douluo: Starting from the Engagement with Zhu Zhuqing
斗罗:从与朱竹清订下婚约开始
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- Completed
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- 2.0M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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I saw Chapter 12, 1. A prince surnamed Dai who was born with full soul power and excellent white tiger mutation. The emperor asked him to be used as a consumable in the prince's struggle. He was the one with the least resources and no influence from his mother's family. When the emperor competed, were all the other princes killed by meteorites falling from the sky? 2. The eunuch reported to the emperor the newly awakened White Tiger Martial Spirit, not to mention the innate soul power, not to mention the good mutation, and no one even told the emperor that your family has a genius with innate soul power. It stands to reason that the eunuch around the emperor is also a confidant. Those who don't know may think that this eunuch is the queen's dog. Moreover, the queen's behavior in the following article does not look like a person who competes with the emperor for power through power, but just like a canary that is favored by beauty. 2 The protagonist has been bullied by eunuchs since he was a child. Hahaha, in the royal family and even in those rich families, the master is the master and the slaves are slaves. If you dare to let the eunuchs bully the down-and-out prince today, you might dare to buy spies from other countries and poison the emperor tomorrow. After all, you are all surnamed Dai, so you will not be bullied. Being an emperor is no longer sacred. Sex, is he still the emperor 3. In this case, the protagonist shows no sign of wanting to run away. Only the fifth elders in the entire empire express goodwill. Why don't you quickly find an opportunity to run away? A genius with full soul power is still a talented prince who is bullied every day. Which force doesn't want to be retaliated by the empire? ? Dare I ask how many titled Douluo you have in the empire? 4, the protagonist's plug-in is Qinglian, and then the protagonist said, you are so powerful, it's not good to always be called Qinglian, it's better to be called Chaos Qinglian. Le, now everyone wants to take advantage of the popularity of the prehistoric stream. Some of them are cheated by big guys (systems), saying it is Chaos Qinglian. You are really awesome for using it without cause and effect.
After reading twenty chapters, I can only say that he is a self-pleasure player. The key is that he likes to abuse himself when he is having fun. . This is a bit 6
It was so embarrassing to watch. You were severely bullied by the eunuch for six years. Now that you are capable, your revenge is to be released from the palace directly? Also, when you see a six-year-old kitten, don't write about it every time you see it. Every time you see it, you are so nervous that it is difficult to speak. Oh my god, she is only six years old and has not grown yet. How perverted and anxious are you to write like this? Moreover, Brother Pig is still in dire straits and your survival is in question. How can you still think of being so lustful to a little sister who is only six years old? How dare you write that?
I read 5 chapters and couldn't stand it any longer. I subscribed to one chapter and wrote this review. It's even better than what you wrote. ?
Do you know what royal dignity means? Dai Mubai's escaped prince can live a cool life, what do you think? Will the prince bully the eunuch? This situation only occurs when dynasties change. When the empire is strong, how can the emperor let his children be bullied by the eunuchs when he is in power?
The writing style of this book is like a novel from 10 years ago, and the protagonist is also a mentally retarded fool.
It is too short-sighted to write about the Emperor of Star Luo Empire. It is too unreasonable to ignore a son who can reach the ultimate Douluo.
I'm such a bastard. Even after being scolded in the comment section, I still insisted on reading. Chapter 26 made me angry. The point of high emotional intelligence is that the author is suitable to go back ten years to write a novel.
I read 5 chapters and couldn't stand it any longer. I subscribed to one chapter and wrote this review. It's even better than what you wrote.
Awesome, Douluo is originally a novel written by a poisonous novel. Yours is even whiter than the original novel. It's a pity that the author was born in this era. He should go beyond writing novels in 2008.
The protagonist's sacred white tiger martial spirit absorbs the seven-hundred-year-old Xuan Shui Turtle. Is this theory that the author worshiped Yu Xiaoan as his disciple? If so, congratulations on getting the true biography. A soul ring and soul skill ➕Two protagonists who created their own soul skills and a level 17 Dai Mubai are fighting back and forth, just like a high-level player and a civilian player are fighting back and forth. Will anyone still recharge money in this game? Please delete your account quickly. Also, why does the protagonist stay in the palace? There are no resources. He even killed the soul ring by himself. He also has to face various assassinations. There is no bodyguard, and he may die at any time.
The prince was bullied by the eunuch? Is it possible?
This eternal lotus in the blue sky has been written off by you. Such a strong martial spirit has no repayment for the body and spirit, and is "not as good as Tang San". Author, you only watch female videos and ancient puppets. Have you not read the novels about suppressing all enemies in the world and overwhelming all the ways?
Subscribe specifically to complain. The logic is too confusing.
First of all, it was not easy to persist in writing 1.25 Million words. No matter whether the score of this book is good or bad, it should end when it is due. Change a book and start over again. Don't be too insistent. Secondly, I persisted in this book until the duel in Chapter 14. At the same time, I read the content of Chapter 64 that was available for subscription. It was too toxic and I stopped reading. Originally I was too lazy to post a comment, but seeing that the author himself posted a post to explain the beginning, and boasted that his logic was smooth, I couldn't help myself, so I decided to help the author sort out his logic so as not to make the same mistake again in the next book. According to the logic explained by the author, the harem is the queen's territory. So, shouldn't it be easy for the queen to kill the protagonist? Why does the protagonist still live for six years? This logic itself does not make sense. So, the harem is not the queen's territory, but the emperor's territory. The queen only has certain jurisdiction. The queen was concerned about the reputation of etiquette and the emperor's authority and did not kill them all. It was the palace people below who treated the protagonist harshly. But something doesn't make sense here, because the protagonist lost his mother when he was born. According to the author's setting, how can he survive if he cannot walk after drinking milk in the first year of his life? So, in a normal setting, the protagonist should be taken care of by a trusted maid or wet nurse assigned by the emperor or left by his mother. Or he is a grandson after all, and there should be a role like a royal grandmother to protect the protagonist until he is six years old. Just like Jia Huan in the Red Chamber, he is not popular with Mrs. Wang, but he still has room for survival. So, the protagonist is alone from the beginning, which is a mistake in itself. Oh, no, the protagonist also has a third uncle from outside to help him. The third uncle is a prince, so he has no rights. Can he give the protagonist something to eat and drink? Can going to the emperor and the Council of Elders get the proper care for the protagonist? Is it too much to arrange for a wet nurse? So, the setting at the beginning is messy and careless, and the logic is still unreasonable. I suggest you write this kind of palace battle drama. First, watch The Legend of Zhen Huan, The Golden Branch, or better still, watch Dream of Red Mansions. The protagonist has been working alone for six years, which is a sign of stupidity. A prince is still a prince no matter what. If he receives a subordinate without resorting to tricks, what is he doing with his life? Do you really think that you can defeat ten levels just by relying on your strength? Then why do you write about palace battles? Aren't you feeding us Xiang? Let's talk about the duel in Chapter 14. It's reasonable for Dai Mubai to say that he can't activate the martial spirit, but the protagonist can't activate it either. What else can he do if he's not stupid? IQ is not even online, how can I live in the palace for six years? Is it possible? The end is Chapter 64. A killer actually started talking to the protagonist. He stopped talking and prepared to leak his employer's information. I'm really convinced. The idea of writing a palace fight at the beginning is good, it should have been very attractive, but the logic is different.
Author, you might as well write a new novel. There is no need to write Douluo fan fiction. After all, you have already had such a big difference from the one written by the third young master of the Tang family from the beginning. You basically have to fill in the holes bit by bit later on.
Very poisonous
I held it in front, but why did Emperor Tang San come to the rescue later? You can write about Shura God exerting his power, but you can write about Emperor Tian coming out? I can't bear a little bit here.
If you want to see it, go to Biquge to see if it is available. There is really no need to spend this money.
The deformities of the Xingluo royal family should all be destroyed, but don't choose to forgive like Dai Yuhao in the end.
I think the protagonist can be strengthened. I don't know if I've read too many other fanfics. Other protagonists are level 10 and it's easy to hit level 20. This protagonist, who has been in the first level for 700 years, can actually put in so much effort to hit Dai Mubai, who is level 17. Also, can this Qinglian strengthen the protagonist's physical strength and mental strength?
I really don't complain about this achievement. It's rare to be able to write a fan that's so frustrating, but everyone is reduced to reading fan fiction. Not to mention it's mindless and fun, at least it has to be a little bit fun, otherwise it's too rude 😅
This book has a lot of poisonous points. For example, the protagonist's mother, as the emperor's wife, was killed by a palace maid, which is no different from killing a dog. Secondly, the protagonist has been bullied by eunuchs when he was a child. The reason is that it is impossible for the protagonist to awaken the White Tiger Spirit. Could it be that Emperor Xingluo was cheated? In the final duel with Dai Mubai, it was obviously a life-and-death duel, but he actually pretended to be 13 and couldn't activate his martial spirit. There's literally nothing written right
The fact that the prince was bullied by the eunuch aroused the disgust of many readers. Explanation here. First of all, Dai Yao's mother and son were demoted to the cold palace, which was a signal that they were not favored politically. But at this point Dai Yao will not be bullied by the eunuchs. After all, he is the child of Emperor Xingluo. Secondly, the harem is the queen's territory. You are in the cold palace, and the queen can do whatever she wants. Moreover, as soon as the queen gave a little gesture, there were countless eunuchs vying for her favor. Dai Yao's mother and son were hated by the queen. In order to please the queen, these eunuchs had every intention of bullying Dai Yao. The last and most important point. It is impossible for Dai Yao to awaken the White Tiger Martial Spirit. (This is a supplementary setting) There is absolutely no room for improvement. So these eunuchs don't have to worry about Dai Yao's future rise. Without these worries, why can't the eunuchs bully Dai Yao? You can also please the queen and win her favor. Is there any problem with the logic? Final words: I can understand some readers complaining about this. After all, all the explanations are below and I haven't seen them, so there is no problem in criticizing me. But what annoys me the most is that some guys, without reading a single word, just talk about why there is such a stupid plot nowadays.
Three times! Why did I click in?
After reading seventeen chapters, I was already disgusted three times!
Reading the comment section, everyone said that the writing was frustrating. One person said that there is no strong enemy in a fight. The plot line is also simple. How did the author write it in such a frustrating way?
Give it a try~
I'm asking for a book. It's about traveling to the Star Luo Empire and becoming the third prince (it seems). The first few pictures are on the cart. There is also an original fiancée who is the third sister of the Zhu family. Does anyone know the title of the book? I can't find it now.
Md, what a fw useless prince start, the front is really frustrating
Stopped updating?
Stopped updating? No longer updated? It's been 10 days, is it going to end?
Finish it!
We're all here, wouldn't it be a pity if we still haven't finished our homework?