Shen'ao Clan

The introduction is well written, that's all

After reading part of it, no wonder the book is called Shen'ao Immortal Clan. It turns out that Ao is the master and people are servants 😂😂😂 The beast-controlling family doesn't even have the means to control beasts. It's awesome.

I also deleted the comments. You can't listen to any of your opinions. I guess I'm not far away from the street. The last book was 190,000 words, and now this one is 140,000 words. Well, I looked at it.

There is no generation in the family. How do you classify seniority? You know who is the elder and who is the junior. Maybe even some ancestors and elders don't know that you are a descendant of that generation.

I rarely see the Jindan family. I am tired of seeing the precarious Foundation-building family. It is not the inexplicable deep relationship between the spirit beast and its owner. Golden Finger is also more attractive.

It is recommended that novices not write about indigenous people. The thinking of indigenous people is too simple. Unless they are very smart, they will be out of touch with the readers' thinking. Unless you have good skills and can make up for it in other places.

I can't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters! So verbose! Can we remove everything that is irrelevant? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore!

I haven't read it yet, but I have the urge to read it after seeing this introduction. I'm used to reading that kind of trashy material and I really don't want to read it. I hope the author can write this book well. Come on!

There are only a few monks in the Immortal Cultivation Family. The same founder can be divided into main line, direct line and collateral line. It is better to join the sect directly. At least the sect is divided according to qualifications.

The spirit turtle didn't let it tug the boat (let people row it) along the way, and didn't let it swallow low-level monsters in the sea?

After reading a few chapters, I realized that there are serious factions. Why should there be such factions? This will cause the family to be at odds and create grudges. I hope they can be eliminated later. My personal suggestion.

Also, the third-level monsters are not pigs raised in captivity. It is entirely possible to have a foundation-building monk lead you to an area to capture or hunt. Moreover, there are no monsters such as fish and shrimps farmed in the sea area of ​​10,000 miles. There are definitely a lot of unreasonable things in it.

What a noob, the plot and writing are all like this.

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The ancient aura of mortals, spirits, and immortals rushes towards my face. This reminds me of the first novel I read: Mortal World, Spiritual World, Immortal World, God Realm, and Chaos Realm.

Awesome, the protagonist has a skill called Purple Pupil Magic Eye, which can see through other people's storage bags and spiritual roots. If you find something good, you can find a way to get it 😂😂😂😂

If you can swallow mountains, you should also be able to swallow spiritual veins. First, swallow the first-level spiritual veins.

Now it can only reach 13

A novel similar to the introduction

It's not the past of Earthlings. I can't see it. The sense of immersion is not strong. Goodbye.

I didn't even read the introduction. I thought the author was boring and should change his name. This is considered a family novel, so it's better to call it a wandering novel.