In My Rebirth, My Green Plum Is a Bit Sweet

🙂 Just like the title, the author is a newbie, and it's a bit difficult to code now. If you can help me to read a little bit, or give me some opinions, that would be fine. It is indeed difficult to generate electricity for love. I feel a little lack of motivation. 😭 ——The pigworm is here to greet you!

The author describes too many supporting characters, I just want to see Tiantian's daily life

There are more than one, so I won't watch if there is only one female protagonist.

It feels a bit strange. It is said to be a sweet article, but it feels ordinary. Sometimes it is a little bit poisonous to make people sick. It does not affect the perception but it is not attractive to people. Is it okay to use it as ordinary toilet paper? 🤔

No, why do you still have to smoke? After rebirth, it is the soul, not the body, and the body is not addicted. . . Nowadays, if you don't smoke in novels, will you die?

The section about the Chairman of the Arts Student Union is very off-putting. I can imagine that the student union is like this. Is the college a technical college?

Few words, too many words to kill 🙂

You are faster, hahaha

I would like to ask if this is a single heroine or multiple heroines? If it's a single, how will you deal with it in the later stage if you give the senior sister so many scenes? If there are more, I suggest two or three...

The writing is good, but I don't know why the results are not good.

First, haha.

Doesn't your profile mean that the heroine dumped you? (●—●)

According to the introduction and name, it should be a single female protagonist, but there is also a long description of the senior sister, so I want to ask whether it is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

I'm from Tieba. No new books?

The writing is quite good, but Qiuyu is quite disgusting 😅

I am a super author. If I hadn't downloaded this for the first time today, I wouldn't have known that you had actually finished writing this book! Congratulations on the completion! The story of two people's lives, their story It's as if it really exists It seems that the author is really emotionally attached, and I really look forward to your next work. It's not in vain that I ran from the next door to find out that it was finished, haha ​​(it's been a long time, and I am not as stupid as before, and I can't type any beautiful words, but I really like them in your writing)

Just read a few dozen chapters and it's all nonsense. No fun anymore.