Rubik's Cube Space, I Can Anchor the Future

After reading Chapter 52, there are many problems. First, the background introduction is too long-winded. Second, the problem of the protagonist's ability. It is possible to control this ability, but after adding the seven sins, especially lust, it becomes the ability to force brainwashing. Forced brainwashing is not a big problem, but your subordinate is a woman. Women don't matter, but have you noticed that you have begun to change in the direction of licking dogs, and you have this ability to control. , You still have to increase your favorability, so that it looks like you have raised a father. Why do most novels now rarely feature female protagonists, or at least half of the people don't like to read heroines? It's because most authors can't write about female protagonists at all, or they can't write about emotions. Just like someone I once said, the emotional dramas written by Xiao Huang may be more than those of you authors. Anyway, your book is tasteless, so it would be a pity to abandon it.

I felt good after reading the first ten chapters, but I started to feel impatient after about chapter 25. There is a Gil for this control skill, and the mobs that appear are stronger than you. The original sin skill has no sense of existence at all, and the demon skill is used to win over the loyalty of subordinates with a loyalty of 100. The plot is extremely slow.

The elements are too complex, and the author has no control over the writing. It is natural for it to collapse. In the end, he complained that the author is very harsh. It depends on when you become a eunuch.

Are you a Dominator or a Worker? Is 100 Loyalty written just for fun? You might as well write 80 initial loyalty, 100 loyalty still has so much bullshit

I really can't stand it anymore. Does this ruler really deserve to be called this name? This protagonist is like a licking dog. He has to promise something to his subordinates. He is a ruler. To be loyal, he still needs to gain favor. He has no style of the Demon King at all. He looks a bit like his own Demon King. Shouldn't his subordinates be loyal like the Demon King? How can a devil lick his subordinates?

When I saw the third chapter, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. Then I read everyone's comments and felt that the talent of this Demon King is not as useful as the route of the Wizard of Truth. At least it is a very inclusive route with a high upper limit. Also, why do you need to gain favorability by controlling this skill? As long as you have control, do you still have to worry about loyalty? If there is a problem, you can kill the chicken to scare the monkeys, okay? You can sit on the throne and watch them express their loyalty. As long as you don't cancel it, it will be fine. If it doesn't work, you can implement the continuous sitting. There is no need to worry about being betrayed.

The world setting is quite good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough.

It started out well, but as I watched it became more and more watery. . . A lot of useless nonsense and a lot of verbosity

The protagonist's control is the same as that of a dog, and he actually cultivates feelings. What is control?

I can't understand it. There are too many factors. The original sin authority at the beginning, and the subsequent practice of Hunyuan Kung Fu. Does this count as Taoism? That's not all, the later awakening is the Buddhist physical talent! What a hybrid I thought that was the end of it. I simply thought that the protagonist had traveled through time, but I never expected that the carrier for traveling through time was not simple. There are a lot of pitfalls. Although I was born in an orphanage, it is not simple. The talent is sealed, the awakened Buddhist physique talent is compensation, my God. Your setting reminds me of brainwashing ads. The three-year period has come. Please...

When the author repeatedly explains to the readers how clever his idea is and wants to read it later, he should think about whether there are any problems in his current article.

The world view and settings are quite complete, but the author's writing skills are not strong enough, or it will be another work like Samsara Paradise and Lord God's Space.

If you are cheating, just cheat properly. Don't impose too many restrictions. Vampires are disgusting here.

This is really awesome, why don't you write it down? I can only play with the settings, but I can't write the plot. I don't want to write much at all, right?

I can't see the improvement in strength, I don't know what I wrote.

This vampire is really disgusting to watch. Loyalty is either absolute or absolutely disloyal. This hundred loyalty points are of no use, why not write 0?

The role of the hero could be reduced. I have no interest in her background or past. What you wrote can only be said to be a forced conversation. As a subordinate, just be obedient and not betray.

Well (=_=), this is the end of the book😅

Come on, it's okay (｡･ω･｡)

Good guy, I've been reading it for a week, but I found out that it only has 4 chapters. I opened it and saw that it was finished 4 days ago...

It's a classic, the shortcomings have been deleted, but the mouth is still tough.

As the title says, Dominator: Everything that dominates oneself is weaker than oneself. (Trash is the same as nothing. The author can write whatever he wants. The description is bullshit.) Cannot control thoughts, memories, thoughts, and emotions. What kind of domination? It's just like those who start out as gods and are immortal at the beginning. Eat the book slowly.

Sometimes the main character starts off too well and the work becomes unreadable.

No. Let's look at the author's setting. The protagonist's setting is very powerful. But I can't always feel how great it is. It's just a very empty feeling.

A little reflection and a little advice. My feeling is: Many articles nowadays are about time travel and infinity. There are also niches like defensive turrets. There are also fairy and demon science fiction, fantasy and history settings, etc. But this author grouped all these settings together. All settings appear in this book. Of course, there are many books written with this setting. But this book is relatively comprehensive and very good. Many people watch the setting, many people watch the plot, and many people watch the delicate emotions in it. What this book embodies is fusion skills, which can integrate many settings and display them together. This is the essence of this book. One suggestion is that if you use other people's settings, you should respect them. It is best to choose some classic settings and just use them without making changes. The most you can do is change the numbers, which is a change anyway, and it's equivalent to originality. Because there are many people who have this classic complex. If you change it, it will only make a lot of people uncomfortable. It is recommended that you quietly change some of the previous settings, change some keywords, or restore part of it, then there will be a lot of audiences. Anyway, I hope the author will stick to it. Another thing is to believe in yourself, but also to change yourself.

It's too fast to write. How can I write about managing the world and improving my power so quickly?

Feeling good so far, just keep writing.

I've only had it for a month... Why are you so cold? ＼(`Δ')／

The only thing left to achieve realization is hard work and sweat, and the most rare flash of inspiration is already there, so why give up?

After reading three chapters, I think it's okay, food and grass +, the setting is acceptable, the subject matter is quite novel, and the writing is decent, but it's a bit short.