I Am a Passerby in Konoha

No grouping, no cp dismantling. Observe silently in secret. Isn't this just Naruto with the plot? In this case, it's better to read the comics than to read what you wrote. I don't know what you are writing. Re-write the plot of Naruto?

The protagonist is set to be an ordinary person, so normally he should be an ordinary ninja in the circle, but the first few chapters seem to be just following the rhythm of the main character...

I think Ino and Sai can be separated

Let's talk about a real trivia: Pharmacist Nonou, nicknamed the Walking Miko. In Japan, the Miko = ji maiden, so the walking witch can also be called the walking ji maiden...

When I wrote about the Kingdom of Iron, I felt like all the readers had gone away and no one was discussing it. The plot in the later stages was indeed a bit toxic.

Let's rewrite the plot after the Kingdom of Iron. It's food and grass at the front, but poisonous weeds and everything else, and everyone has run away.

I haven't read the book yet, but this is the introduction. If you were really an ordinary person, would you be worthy of being in a pig's trotter circle? No one from Liu Xiaoqiang will pay attention to you.

... Setting the problem, always emphasizing that ordinary people, even teenage chuunin, especially those during World War II, would laugh at themselves and be attacked by ANBU? Roots? Occasionally mocking? If I had known, the chuunin would be the backbone of the ninja village, and the jounin would be the high-end combat power, but there wouldn't be many of them! But it will emphasize the double power of the protagonist's soul, and will also use the soul power to affect chakra? And as an ordinary person, the feeling of hehehe all day long is that the mastermind is behind the scenes.

You neither assemble nor dismantle, virgin novel?

Killing people and setting fires in a violent organization, looking for comfort? 9The gap between animation and reality is quite big.

The hydrology begins after more than forty chapters. It's totally pointless to go to the Iron Country. I'm just doing water just for the sake of water.

You can tell from the introduction that it's not interesting. The other protagonists will first study medical ninjutsu if they don't have anything, then study or follow Orochimaru themselves, and finally synthesize and strengthen it. You Anxin is just a passerby, but you can't do anything but AOE without the strength, and you are still a warm-hearted Gil!

To be honest, I skipped the Iron Kingdom part and continued to watch the rest, but suddenly I couldn't watch it anymore. I can only say that the author should not write some inexplicable plots, which really discouraged him.

I don't understand, why write about the Kingdom of Iron?

Um... Shouldn't a passerby be as unknown as a grass?

Isn't this male protagonist hehe too much? I just watched a few and kept thinking, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe.

I've read a few chapters, but it's not a heartwarming and everyday novel. Instead, it's a bit like a dark villain novel.