Devouring Begins with Coiling Dragon

I've read dozens of chapters and can't stand it anymore. The writing is good, but there's no sense of immersion. The protagonist should have been set as a native from the beginning. Well, let's put it on the bookshelf...

About updates Lao Niu updates four thousand words every day. It is not divided into two chapters for the sake of plot continuity. As a part-time employee, Lao Niu considers himself dedicated. I never ask for leave, and I never update. Even if I come back late at night, I can code more than a thousand words. From the time I started writing books, until now, I still insist on typing even if I have a fever or illness. It's just a matter of how many words. In order not to handcraft, in order to keep updating. The last book was not brilliantly written, and the results were not good, but I persisted in finishing it. This will be the same principle in the future. I will never ask for leave. I have an old book that never stops updating for a day, and my words are tough. You can scold me for being a bad writer, but you can't scold me for not being diligent. Anyone who has written a book knows how difficult it is to persevere. Who has never had an emergency? Congratulations! Note: In the previous book, the daily average was more than 5,000 words. The specific data will be counted to single digits after the completion of the book and reported to the readers.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that Buu is the protagonist, and the protagonist is just a tool that provides plug-ins.

This combat power positioning is too outrageous. In the original work, Linley has three lower-level gods, plus the will power of soul mutation, Augusta. You, the middle god of three lines of mutation, plus Dzogchen's 4+4 fusion mystery of water and fire, and 2 more willpowers of 4+4, you tell me that you have just reached the lower limit of the rule of law???

Some books make me want to read them at first glance, while some books just can't be read no matter how much I read. This book gave me that feeling, and there was nothing that attracted me. What to do

I don't know what I'm writing about, but the protagonist's IQ is inexplicably off the mark. Traveling through a different world, I don't practice cultivation, and I don't make money to settle down. I spend every day tinkering with my friends about what to eat. Looking at the catalog, I was baffled.

Just ignore the commemorative sticker.

After reading the introduction, I wanted to complain about the title of the Lord of Chi You, but it turned out that the protagonist's name was Moliqi! What do you think?

Who is the protagonist? It feels like Morich is like a cook. All the good things are given to Buu, and he is eating the leftovers. The benefits obtained from the same thing are not as much as Buu's. There are more descriptions of Buu than the main character (twenty pictures ago)

How dare you keep up with reading every update a day?