The Traitor's Guide to Turning Over a New Leaf

It's a very interesting book, but the title is so easy to overlook. If it weren't for this, I probably wouldn't have turned the page. 🤣🤣 Maybe you should come up with a new title? After all, this title probably only covers the early to middle stages, and the middle part is also a bit off. Also, the god's contact with you came too early; your system seems both useful and useless.

That's incredibly arrogant of you. You barely changed the setting at all. At least other people write fanfiction, and you think changing a few names makes it your own? You should at least mention some kind of tribute in the description. There aren't many readers yet, so the comments section isn't too hostile. My suggestion is either to restrict comments or to accept the criticism with an open mind.

Damn it, author, you really lure people in only to kill them!

I clicked in from the system recommendation, read the introduction, and was planning to check it out, but it was updated seven days ago. Sorry, never mind.

It's a shame I'm not writing anymore. All that reading before was for nothing. They haven't said anything for so long, keeping me in suspense. I checked every morning to see if there were any updates. What a pity.

There's really no need to write such heart-wrenching stories. If you write something enjoyable but the reader is uncomfortable, do you want to keep reading or just want to be happy?

The content is good. However, the title and cover are a bit uninteresting; if I weren't bored, I wouldn't have even discovered this book.

What's next with the author? Oh, there's nothing below.

What the heck? It died after only a week?

It's normal that it was cut off; it looked alright at the beginning, but things started to get messy from the murder scene onwards.