Steam Age: I Can Control the Difference Engine

The writing and plot are very good. The only flaw is that the plot progress is too fast and the details are not well drawn. Overall, it is a fine novel!

Let me speculate on the background of the world. This is a world with difference machines, avatars, evil spirits, the evil god Cthulhu, cultists, and maybe some good gods. The power system should rely on avatars, but the question is, where did this avatar come from? How did you wake up? You must know that awakening a substitute in JOJO relies on arrows, but what about this world? Rely on gods? Rely on aura? I thought it was through sealing evil spirits. For example, it can be like this. Human beings trembled under the oppression of evil spirits, and finally learned to rely on sealing evil spirits to gain the power of evil spirits, and continue to grow. Only evil spirits can deal with evil spirits, but they must be careful of being contaminated and losing control. Relying on will to promote

It's well written, but I don't know what the topic is about

I read Chapter 43, and I feel that the author's writing is very watery. It is not watery about the plot, but watery. It is a running account with a plot 😅. The explanations of the settings are superficial. Obviously Cthulhu is a very important setting. The author was forced to explain it as a marginal background, and all the settings gave people a very childish feeling, too confusing, as if they were improvised 😒 Needless to say about the emotions of the characters, their interactions and exchanges gave people a very inexplicable feeling. I understand why the principal played chess with the minister, but this plot was very embarrassing. The principal and the minister just played chess in a daze, and the only conversation they had in the middle was inexplicably "deep". In the middle of the game, the protagonist smashed his opponent for two minutes, and the minister was inexplicably "shocked." A few words can make readers imagine it, but you are writing a novel, and the characters must be fleshed out, do you understand? 🤔 The author is advised to read more popular novels, and don't write in a hurry. There is no benefit in working behind closed doors. Your writing style is obviously immature. The young world view and themes will make you write like this 👍

It's a very interesting book. Why is there no one? I gave all the recommendation votes.