I Was Mistaken for a Devil by a Witch

To write about mysterious Western themes, to borrow a phrase from those days when we had swords in our hands, we were all demons 🙂 Medicine is also the science of potions 🤓

Note: This brief review represents only one person. The following number is 10. —————— Innovation inspiration: 8.5. Plot design: 4. Rhetorical use: 4. Characterization: 5.5. Detail processing: 3. —————— Summary: Evaluated based on newcomer standards. Although the language exchanges and descriptions of battle scenes are a bit exaggerated, the flaws are not concealed and there is plenty of room for improvement. ——(anonymous).

A rare type, very interesting settings, like magic is 100% miracle rather than science, which is very eye-catching, so... The update is so slow, please give me more background settings (🔥🔥🔥)

The latest world map, updated in this version, is mainly between Ambrose and the Papal States. The powers above the duchy are marked in detail (not referring to the title, but the scale). In order to save space, the baronies and counts are not marked. You can enlarge the map and take a closer look at the sphere of influence from Ambrose to the Papal State. Here is another simplified map, which is a map without so many annotations. Let's see if there is a chance to open a map building so that everyone can see the map in this book after reading it. In addition, the detailed map inside Ambrose has also been updated, adding the yeti and ice witch forces.

First of all, this word was coined by the author, referring to several titles of Grand Dukes, so the English word for Grand Viscount is Grand Viscount In other words, Grand Viscount is the monarch of a country, not a nobleman above Viscount.

7 Points for setting, 3 points for writing, 5 points for early plot, and 1 point for later stage. I have been a bookworm for many years and have a high scoring standard. By the way, Douluo sets a score of 3, so just set the score (with the childhood filter added). Evaluation: What a pity. The advantage is that the magic system setting is novel, and the background is backed by real history, so after reading, there are enough foreshadowings and pitfalls. The disadvantage is that the author of Cross Island progressed too fast, just like the third brother's manned space flight! It is set in a fairy tale background where the three parts of law, knights and wizards correspond to the rulers and the violent class.                                                                           are invincible, the warriors suppress the world, and the monks seek to become immortals. The former is connected with the history of various countries in real history. The knights are a bit like the Astartes' surgical organs. The magic of the wizards is very fairy tale-like and the promotion is very detailed and interesting. What is the main line of the full text? If you are just pretending to be a slap in the face to try to achieve immortality, then I will give you a symbolic 1 point here. The small main line is the process of Prince Yveta from restoring his country to unifying the magical world of the Black Forest and ascending to the throne of God. The main theme is that after many years of recuperation, countries decided to make progress and have a fight. The skeleton is like this, and then Tangerine uses real historical changes to enrich the content, uses magic fairy tales as the skin to make it fantasy and gorgeous, and finally connects everything with the longing for beauty. In which chapters are listed, this is what Iveta said about establishing a utopia and becoming a rare tyrant in history. After all, when someone wants to build heaven, the world is already hell. But heaven is different between people, and hell is also different. Aren't the Brahmin's heaven and the Sudra's hell the same world? I personally feel that there are two images that are best described in the book, namely Chitose Fire and Black Pozi. The former uses the most representative things in the progress of human civilization as sacrifices. It is neither justice nor evil. Everything comes from human civilization itself. The settings of Chitose Fire with different appearances in different periods gave me a sense of human growth. As the patron saint of the volcanic island, Hei Pozai restrained the residents of the volcanic island and suppressed the emergence of civilization because he could not progress. Just like the people who are afraid of awakening, they stop at the rulers who isolate themselves from the country. Yes, I am talking about Qianlong. He was the person who knew the West best in China at that time, and then he learned about the guillotine of his pen pal Louis XVI. He is not stupid, he just doesn't think about people like us when he is smart. When Hei Pozi was burned out by the fire of the law, his last words, "Those kind wishes are not meaningless," moved me. So, Orange, how many pitfalls have you left!        ，，？        ，，，？        …， After Cross Island, the plot progresses too fast. This is a common problem among Internet writers or almost all creators. In the later period, the narrative became more and more grand, and the author's reserves began to fail to keep up. There are recent novels and comics in notebooks, with small gifts but no great righteousness. Two of the Three Great Migrant Workers are unfinished, and Kubo would have been ruined if he hadn't stopped writing in time. After all, the charm of the Shinigami kills one stone and Aizen has nine fights to his name. Kurosaki Ichigo? A brainless dick fight with a piece of chop can't even let go of a ghost. Far away there are George Martin's dragon that has been flying for who knows how long and a country that hasn't changed much in the end. But Orange, it's not good to dig a hole without filling it and the gap between it and the previous one is too big. So, can you make a side story or fill in the pitfalls I mentioned in a new book?

It makes people laugh to death

The two main factors that kept me watching were the fairy tale setting and the unnatural words and deeds of the Hearthstone Witch.

Is it true that if a post says something bad about the author, the author will delete it and treat it as invisible, so it's better to just criticize it?

If the Hearthstone Witch is not the heroine, I will not really approve of it 🙂

The acceleration was increased too fast, and the third level of legal magic was passed before it was fully reflected, and it was already the fourth level. I don't dare to read your book like this, for fear that your book will collapse. The wizard's apprentice wrote more than 700,000 words earlier, but he added them so quickly here. Are you so extreme? Not very optimistic. You might as well write more carefully and slowly. You are like this now, and you are rushing to death without seeing any effect. It took so long and so hard to advance to the third level of wizards, but I didn't see any characteristics of your legal magic. I passed it and became a fourth-level wizard, which is pretty rough.

The author is thinking about the ending. The author can't think about it. The author decides to eunuch

I just saw that the protagonist was promoted to the Great Wizard, and I can only say that it is a bit boring. I am obviously looking forward to the subsequent plot, but I don't want to read it anymore. Moreover, I found that the author is very slow to update, and I like hydrology. A simple promotion can be written for four or five chapters. Anyway, I will keep it for now. If the update is completed normally, I will order it all. If The Eunuch is unfinished, just pretend that I have never read this book.

Suddenly I discovered that the Great Witch of Hearthstone is even more popular than the male protagonist hahahahaha

The author's writing was really attractive before this book was put on the shelves. The combination of magic and fairy tales is very touching. But since the book was put on the shelves, the author has drifted away. First, the update has changed from two updates a day to once a day, and he often takes leave. Later, after Ambrose left, it became very busy and the quality of the content seriously deteriorated. This is how it went from serious writing to watery writing. The current unfinished work has long been expected.

From the back, the changes in the protagonist's magic are very simple. There is no innovation in magic. After all, you mainly focus on magic, but I don't see any new innovation. Quite literally. Nor did it expand and incorporate many new magics. The characteristics of a wizard of your first level are not reflected much and you pass. Anyway, I feel like the writing in the back is not as good as the previous one. The book you were rushing to finish immediately collapsed. I feel like I can't maintain your character. Don't fill holes just for the sake of filling holes, you. The main plot is very important, but you don't need to be so anxious.

If there must be a female protagonist, why not the Great Witch of Hearthstone? The Great Witch of Hearthstone meets all the requirements to become a heroine. She is also the first to submit to the protagonist, so she should be the best choice.

The author's daily development is quite good, but the description of the fight is slow and awkward. Overall, it feels like he is fighting life and death while saying "you are too hot" at the same time.

The protagonist written by the author of this book has deviated too far from the beginning... Except that he was a time traveler at the beginning and later had nothing to do with the time traveler. There is no trace of the time traveler at all. It is just a history of the growth of an aborigine.

I thought it was going to be a light novel, but I didn't expect an old witch to appear.

Hahaha, it's my second time reading this book for free. Hahahahaha, limited exemption is good

Of all your books, I can read this one. What attracts me the most is that the setting of this book feels very novel. The Wizard is too boring. I have already finished reading Red Dragon. Although the writing of this book is very bad, I can still read it.

He also said that he was fattening up a book, but in the end he was fattening up another book...

Isn't it too much to add too much detail?

Add finesse?

A rare good book, the subject matter and story are all very good, but it's a pity that the ending is unsatisfactory 😭

Where's your extra 😢

The map further shows details, and the terrain has been changed in some places. Changes were made to be more reasonable and consistent with the characteristic maps of this book. These changes will be reflected everywhere in the following articles! Please note the most important new countries in this map update, the Wallachian Impaler and the Wallachian Basin.

It's been a month, why hasn't there been any movement? ? ?

The author will publish a new book soon. I have voted for you for two months.