Starting with Hitori, I Work Nine to Five

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that the protagonist is an aborigine. The Sa family still likes time travellers. After all, it feels so immersive. Otherwise, the sudden appearance of an aboriginal in the original work would be quite inconsistent with the plot.

Test the Poison, in the first two chapters of the current update, the plot starts from the Luotian Dajiao in Longhu Mountain and becomes nonsensical, with time and space traveling, and gods invading consciousness. There is no coherent line, and the subsequent articles are deliberately watery, starting with descriptions of physical appearance. Personal summary, bad

Fang Xiangshi's palms are covered with bear skin, his eyes are golden, and he wears black clothes and red clothes. He holds a shield and carries a gun. ——"Zhou Rites. Xia Guan. Fang Xiangshi"

Mine Clearance: Time Travel and War is full of water. There are a lot of incomprehensible descriptions of the little Japanese sidekick, and they are all complimentary, making it seem like they want to join the protagonist group. There are basically no descriptions of the Nuo beasts that are one of the highlights, and Pokémon has become a martial arts movie. They all describe the protagonist charging forward with the Jin Ge, and what about sweeping, thrusting and blocking, and it feels like it can't be rounded. How did the protagonist defeat Little Japan and a Nuo beast sneak attack came? Brother, you are a witch who can sneak attack with a Nuo beast, so why rush up and fight in melee ( •᷄ࡇ•᷅💧​)

The first part is so good, why is the second part so bad? He also traveled back in time to the War of Resistance, which was pretty bad.

Before 179, it was okay. From 179 to the latest chapters, they are all about fighting. It can be said that if you have read it, you have not read it. It is disgusting. Always describe the battle, the Japanese are tricking one after another, or do you just charge with a gold gun, where is your witch beast? Let me go, I asked why there were no comments on the following chapters, no, I didn't reflect on it myself. I looked at the combat chapter and it didn't improve at all. If it doesn't work, you can just give it a rough description. Write it in such detail. You write about working from nine to five, going to and from get off work, fishing in troubled waters, and improving your strength. There is no need to describe the fighting content so much. After 2 and 30 chapters of physical fighting and life and death fights, I feel numb The experience pack for killing devils all knows the summons. It makes me numb Generally speaking, I can read the front and the back, but I don't recommend it.

The drama has been changed a bit too much, I can't stand it. I can't stand it from the chapter on the death of the Heavenly Master. Not to mention the plot, Zhang Chulan's character alone is very different from Aid. A little cunt has turned into a loser.

The writing is very good, but the problem is the introduction... The ten guys are useless, the Heavenly Master is also a ten guy, can he do this?

Does the back feel like AI? After the fight, the protagonist lamented that the battle gained a lot/lost a lot, and then! There is no turning point, the next boss appears directly, there is a fight, the protagonist sighs, the next boss appears in seconds, my God, is this something written by a human?

There is no need to read Chapter 178. It is all about combat descriptions. The environment description and appearance description account for one-third at the beginning, and then the battle continues for seven or eight chapters. In the middle, there is also a lot of psychological descriptions. After killing a little devil, you immediately switch to the next little devil. It is like a level-breaking game. There is no plot link to directly defeat the boss.