Hong Kong TV Series Starts with Thin Tiger and Fat Dragon

If you become a policeman with this status, you have a serious mental illness. Invite a dozen armed bodyguards to follow you to work?

A glimpse of the beauty of the prosperous world ❤️

Madonna gives them all, and the girls give them pretty good ones.

At the beginning, the rich young man is directly related to the director. He is a Wall Street genius. This congenital condition is a bit poisonous. I don't understand what it means. It feels like Long Aotian's model, a relatively humble Long Aotian.

I would rather you hide the female character in the plot than see the plot of giving away the girl. It's too poisonous 😆

Based on my experience, I couldn't stand the first chapter. What's the point of being so handsome when he's the son of the richest man? What's the point of working as an errand? The starting point is too high, what's the point of fighting for various heroines? It's not challenging at all. Long Aotian is all kinds of pretentious. You don't have to pretend at all. It's not as good as the kind of writing that was put on the shelf early.

You'd better revise the previous ones, otherwise it's really hard to read, and it's a bit like a running account. Your writing format is really not suitable for online reading, and the reading experience is very poor. If you don't revise, it will be difficult to get good grades. Novels need to be written in the third person to make it easier for readers to read. Take a look at how dialogues are written in other novels, and then revise them yourself. I support this type of novels, and I really hope more and more people write on this subject. It's getting better and better, so I didn't mean to step on you. If you think this comment will affect your performance or mentality, you can delete it.

Sit back and wait for the rush! The writing is neither fish nor fowl.

Cheng Ruohui😃😃😃😃

If you really have the ability, write it all in Cantonese pronunciation, otherwise, don't have a few nonsense Cantonese sentences from time to time. Just like a few mouse droppings suddenly appeared in a pot of porridge

Sister-in-law

I don't understand why you want to become a police officer with this background? In other novels, either the protagonist does not have the family conditions to become a police officer and uses the profession of police as a stepping stone for advancement, or Goldfinger is a police officer, but the protagonist cannot figure out why he wants to become a police officer? If you want to get into the drama in a place like Hong Kong, wouldn't it be easier to get in touch with the protagonist if he has such a background?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing such a disgusting golden finger.

It feels a bit like writing a diary, without a deep vision of the protagonist.

I saw you giving your daughter away in the first ten chapters. I couldn't help but spend ten points to evaluate you. It's poisonous.

Song Zijie died in 1992

What the hell are you writing! Rubbish! Go into the factory and hit the screws!