Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Returns from Kengan
龙族：从拳愿归来的路明非
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 756k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Welcome friends to watch "Dragon 6: The Multiverse of Madness"
Now that Quan Yuan Lu Mingfei is here, will Haihuang Lu Mingfei be far behind?😏
Cover the Sky, Journey to the West, Magical Girl, Tao Weird Fairy, Lord of Mysteries, Fist Wish, Warhammer, Sekiro, Naruto, Genshin Impact, and others. I'm not sure about them. You can add them.
There are a lot of problems The perspective is confusing, the writing style is bloated, there is a lot of nonsense, and the rhythm is unclear. The most important thing is that what you write about Dragon Clan fandom is not Dragon Clan at all, and people who read it will not know what it is. Two suggestions First: Don't create original plots when writing fanfics. To be original, you must dilute the impression of the fanfic. You can't have both. You can't win two rabbits but one rabbit Second: Cut the next book quickly.
Congratulations to Lu Mingfei for adding another member to the family
The writing in the middle is too messy. Originally, it would be a great idea to unify the underworld in the jungle, but it somehow switches to Chu Zihang's perspective. When I return to Lu Mingfei's perspective, I skip the process of unifying the underworld. After that, the plot is so messed up that I can't connect it together.
No mole, more Sister Nono
Nono, my Nono🤤
Identify Lu Mingfei, a popular person on the Internet
The author is a novice, so I feel that you are forcibly imitating Yang Zhi's style, but the problem is that your level is not enough. I feel that the writing is very messy, the fragments are very jumpy, and there is a sense of fragmentation. It is recommended that you learn how to write online articles first, and then develop in other areas after you have finished writing.
To be honest, the plot of this book is too fragmented... It jumps a lot, and it progresses to the next stage without understanding the cause and effect. At the beginning of the summer camp, it suddenly jumps to Chu Zihang without explaining the cause and effect clearly. Then Chu Zihang's side just connected to the main plot and started, and then jumped back to Lu Mingfei's side and directly skipped a large part of the plot. Then when Chu Zihang appeared, Chu Zihang's plot was skipped again. If only it were the plot part of the original work, that's it. The jump in the plot of the original part is really uncomfortable.