Flying Fish Over-The-Shoulder Jinyiwei

A script-oriented martial arts novel, a hodgepodge of backgrounds in Jin Yiwei's film and television series, Xiuchundao is the main theme, what's the hidden line? Sword rain? ; Text: 8, I can write what I want to write + the scenes I want to write are not too low; Plot: 7.5, Excellent, but the narrative feels too bland, a bit not explosive enough, maybe because of the reference to existing film and television plots, readers can vaguely feel that it is not that good, but people who have never seen it can watch it; br>Good points: 7, it's really not a good story. It's slow to kill people, and the harvest after killing is average. The risk is quite high, but the harvest stage is a bit deducted; Poisonous points: Not cool enough + Jiaofangsi + low harvest, some shamans will say it is lv, but that's it; It's a very script-style martial arts story, and the main focus is not to upgrade. . . Follow-up suggestions are to give the protagonist a line for upgrading his military strength, and give him some obvious clues, or a hidden line for extraordinary abilities to give him more clues. Then the perspective of the political struggle is a bit missing, the struggle at the top is not hidden or revealed, there is only one thing that must die in order, and the suspense is not enough.

I guess it's because the introduction makes people not want to read it, and the protagonist doesn't want to be promoted.

This introduction? ? ? ? ? Forget it, let's go

I never look at those who wear too many clothes. No one clicked on the profile

The Hong Pill case is the case of Tianqi's father. You have Zheng He's voyages to the West again. The time difference is almost more than 160 years.

The title is wrong. There is only one person in the Jinyi army of the Ming Dynasty who is qualified to wear the flying fish suit, and that is the commander of the capital. The flying fish suit, unicorn suit, bullfighting suit, and python suit are all gift suits, and not all cats and dogs can wear them.

The title of the book should be called Everyone Travels Through the Ming Dynasty

It would be boring if there were too many time travellers.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that it's an old-school novel and not a cool online novel. After reading dozens of chapters, it's bland and even a bit sadistic. The reality is already cruel enough, I just want to read the novel in a relaxing way.

It was good at first, but after five chapters it got really confusing.

It's so well written that no one has read it. This level is comparable to Lao Wang's Travel Guide to the Northern Song Dynasty next door.

The book is good, but the writing is a bit jumpy. If it catches my eye, I think it's good. If it doesn't, I might not be able to read it.

I have written so many books, but none of them are finished, they are all about eunuchs.

History can't be changed, it's boring