No One Told Me This Wasn't a Game

Is there any relationship between the title and the content of this novel? Looking at the title synopsis, it means that the protagonist has done many bad things in the game, and then travels back in time to face the chaotic political situation of his disloyal men and the rebellious people struggling to survive. As a result, the protagonist travels back to a time when there was nothing at the beginning. Isn't this just the rebirth of a full-level server master after the game has just been launched, using top-level games to understand the routine of crushing opponents and leveling up?

I was persuaded to quit after reading Chapter 106. The setting and jokes at the beginning of the novel are very attractive, and the plot is also good. But since writing about Mayumi (the hero's stepdaughter), the author's writing style has been exposed. He doesn't have the skills to handle delicate emotional scenes well. Maybe my requirements for the author are too high. The chapters after it is released are comparable to a novel, pretending to slap the harem Shura field in the face. Out of 100, I give 50.

No, you are going to face the gods, you will die, and there is a "game" with a countdown. If you don't have to brush up on strength, let's just talk about it. Use the methods you used when you were a player. It is important for women to have strength.

Let me give an evaluation first, 73 points (overall 68 points, plus 5 points for a very good writing at the beginning) Then the analysis from my personal perspective (no spoilers, feel free to eat): The opening chapter is indeed quite well written, whether it is the handling of gimmicks, the speed of explaining the world view, or the rhythm of cutting into the main plot, it is almost perfect according to the evaluation standards of online articles. The introduction sets the tone of the harem, Shura field, hatchet, and farming, quickly grabbing the reader's attention. It can be seen from the first two chapters alone that this is a talented writer who is experienced and understands his readers. But from the second chapter onwards, the overall situation is not optimistic. First of all, the plot Since entering the main narrative, there has been almost no outstanding plot, and it completely follows the production model of the standard system of killing monsters and upgrading. And there is not even a single clearly designed hidden foreshadowing. However, thanks to the author's own skill, the overall level remains above the average level. Based on this alone, the score of 73 is obviously low. The second is the characters. Whether they are protagonists, supporting characters or even passers-by who only appear once or twice, readers with a slightly larger reading volume can effortlessly use a few adjectives such as "vicious", "tsundere", "free" and other words to describe these characters. It is estimated that the author did not spend much effort on the creation of the characters. The characters, from their names and personalities to their appearance and linguistic quirks, were synthesized by the author using random generation software. Although there is no obvious logical imbalance in the characters under the author's sophisticated description, it has to be said that it is really regrettable, so it is a deduction point. Of course, in fact, the above two points are mostly common problems in fast food literature. After all, it must be a fantasy to require intensive updates of four to five thousand words of web articles every day to have rigorous logic, lifelike characters, and allow readers to experience delicate emotions. The fundamental reason is the sense of gap caused by the first two chapters being written so well. Some people speculate that the two texts may not be written by the same author, but I disagree on this point. There is no doubt that no matter which perspective you look at, although there are obvious differences in quality between the previous and later texts, there is no doubt that they are all written by the same person. It's just that the level of polishing in the first two chapters is different from that in Japanese. My personal guess is that this opening chapter is the result of the author's careful selection and repeated revisions, while the subsequent articles are written and published step by step, and even the outline may even be modified temporarily. If this book had always been as high as the first two books, I estimate that I would give this book a super high score of no less than 90. However, this is actually a common problem with today's online literature. With the update speed of four to five thousand words, or even six to seven thousand words every day, it is difficult for even the most mature writer to maintain a consistent level of creation. I hope that the author can devote more time and energy to refining the plot and characters in the later period. I also wish the author to write a better book.

The writing is pretty good, so far.

I can't understand it, it's raw or unfamiliar.

I read the introduction and read about twenty chapters. The setting is good, but it doesn't feel like it's written to the point at all. The protagonist is dragged along by the plot and doesn't actively follow the flow. The characters are like empty shells. Moreover, the plot makes me confused and the more I watch, the less interesting it becomes.

I suggest that if you want to write about cute characters, there is no need to write about the main character being a tyrant or something like that. If you like reading this, come and read it. Later, you will find that the characters are different. If you don't like it, you will stop reading it after reading it. The author really didn't catch anything😅

First of all, the protagonist's strength is written very rubbish. At the beginning, the protagonist's strength improves very quickly. Later, the protagonist does not want to improve his strength and just hangs around. The main reason is that the author writes the protagonist's talent to be very high and improves his strength quickly in the early stage. But later, in order to suppress the protagonist's combat power, he directly makes the protagonist not improve his strength. The author's talent for the protagonist is too high. According to the talent of the protagonist, the strength can be increased to the current highest combat power in one month. It can only be said that the author's writing is not good. The protagonist's strength is not improved at the same speed in the early stage. The writing is too high and can only suppress the protagonist's combat power Secondly, there are a lot of bugs. City Master Qian wants to use a collar to control the heroine, but this collar is outrageous. Just put it on the neck and it can erase the person's mind without any restrictions. Later, Qian Chengchang held a sacrificial ceremony. This ceremony was also outrageous. In the ceremony, no matter how high the strength was, everyone would die and be directly invincible. This ceremony had no restrictions at all. Every time the person performing the ceremony launched an attack, three people would die in the ceremony, and these three people would die no matter how high the strength was. It was outrageous or not The protagonist is a waste, without any passion. To put it bluntly, he is just a loser. If God hadn't given up on the protagonist, the protagonist would have died long ago. Another unreasonable thing is that a group of people saw that the protagonist looked exactly like General Tianwang. This group of people had a grudge against General Tianwang and wanted General Tianwang to die. However, these people did not want to kill the protagonist and were still looking for evidence whether the protagonist was General Tianwang. I am so convinced. Since when do you need evidence for killing people? You have to give the protagonist time to develop. In the end, the protagonist has reached the limit of his strength before giving away his life. This is true. The protagonist is also wise and does not bother to develop. Just wandering around, knowing that others have no evidence to prove that you are the king of generals, so you are confident, right? It's really outrageous. The protagonist is the King of Heaven, with the same face, and a group of people have to find evidence before they kill him. It's funny Everyone focuses on different things when reading the novel. For example, if you put a collar around your neck, no matter how strong your strength is, your mind will be wiped out. Some people think that this setting in the novel is not outrageous, but I think it is outrageous. If you want to read it, you can read it. If you think it's outrageous, don't read it. The setting of the novel is not rigorous or even illogical, which can sometimes make it uncomfortable to read.

There's some internal flavor, especially the Asasi part of the protagonist's character. There isn't much, but it's particularly appropriate. But now, no matter how many people have been killed, they are just numbers. When a certain incident makes the protagonist really realize that he has killed tens of millions of real lives, and the resulting growth from "Zuo Chang" to "Heavenly King General", I think it should be a climax. Other characters are also well established, but due to the amazing achievements of the protagonist's predecessor, the female characters will inevitably feel a little tsundere and yandere, including the mage and the eldest daughter of the Wu family, two characters who have no intersection with their predecessors. Will this trend lead to too much duplication between characters in the middle and later stages? Is also a problem.

It's hard to live with. The male protagonist's behavior is very strong. I'm the same as me, but when I know it's true, I feel really weird. Although I may be like this too, people have double standards 😏

The writing is good, but every time I see the protagonist being a big boss, having an affair with a minion, I always find it strange, just like a disguised domineering CEO falling in love with a passerby heroine.

I browsed around the book review area and found that the polarization was very serious. Some people said that the first two chapters were very good, but the second chapter was terrible. They said that the protagonist did not hold on to his ambitions and did not improve his strength. She is probably a person with a clear eye. Qiangwei has made it very clear. She has received too much attention and cannot openly assist the protagonist. Then she asked the protagonist to take the adventure certificate test. The protagonist went, got the copy, and the strength was upgraded to the four realms at Chapter 60. Isn't this considered an increase in strength? Why do you want 100 chapters of God War? It is even more brainless to say that the protagonist has left the city lord behind. Does the protagonist have the ability to do what he wants? It has been written very clearly: strength! At the same time, he also took revenge on the city lord's ancient copy. Isn't it enough to relieve his anger? I am too lazy to say anything because the main character is a big boss and a gangster engaging in ambiguous price reductions, so I suggest you go out and turn left. Come up with something like "The Fairy is My Wife After Time Travel", why don't you lower the price? From what I can see so far, the logic is smooth and there are not many poisonous points. It feels like someone is trying to mess with the author, so there are so many bad reviews. This is the first time I have seen this type of book. The writing is quite interesting. I then suggested that the author meet his wife as soon as possible. I loved hearing about Shura Field and wanted to see the protagonist admit his mistake early and accept the harem. I just don't know how the author arranged the twist. Also, I am currently writing a book with my wife's daughter. I am wondering if this is the protagonist's own daughter? I haven't looked at it very carefully. If anyone knows, please help me.

It's well written. It's easy to lose control of this kind of subject matter. It's very good to contain it. But if you can't contain it, it will be cut off before it can be put on the shelves

The rough writing, the chaotic harem, the mother and daughter, and the monsters take one after another. I seem to have returned to the era of dragons 😭 Maybe this is the motivation for me to continue reading.

The reason why I abandoned the book at that time was because the main character's Japanese wife met with her daughter and wanted to see how the blood would flow. The author also said that the blood would flow in the next chapter. As a result, it took more than ten or twenty chapters and before getting to the main topic, I came up with the sentence "My wife put it on hold to see what the general wants to do." The shelving made me feel deceitful. If I were an author and I knew what the readers wanted to see, I would not write anything, but I would not say anything. I would just say that I am looking forward to it. Thinking about people scratching their heads because of me, watching people get angry because of my words, watching them obediently take out their money to subscribe, it is so interesting. I earned ten yuan for one yuan, and they still liked me and thought my writing was really awesome. I know that the nature of writing a book and putting it on the shelves is that the author PUA readers, but the author of this book has played it off, as if the scumbag's Neptune behavior has been exposed, or she took the initiative to expose it, and she pretended that nothing happened and acted like you are good to me, which is disgusting.

The imagination is okay, but the plot is somewhat lacking. The previous setting was a cold and ruthless player character, but after time travel, he turned into a greasy, lustful, blind and unaware loser. The main reason is that the routines in the article are old-fashioned and the packaging has not been optimized. It is almost the same as seven or eight years ago. If you are still a little stupid, you can dream back to ten years ago.

The plot is too old-fashioned. I thought it was about war farming, but it turned out to be a show-off. It was interesting at first, but became more and more boring later on. Over fifty chapters, there was no sign of a lord or anything like that. Although the protagonist was accumulating power, the characters involved were just wage earners. It was not clear that the protagonist wanted to be a lord.        ，，， After reading it in one breath, I can only say it is tasteless.

What's the problem? The mismatch of virtue means that the protagonist is not well-shaped. If you give him a nuclear bomb, he can wait until his teammates are dead before releasing it. To put it bluntly, he deliberately suppresses the protagonist and uses the plot to promote the protagonist instead of the protagonist promoting the plot! The protagonist gives people a sense of muddle along

This eagle commander hates the male protagonist, so he can't kill him because he has been thinking about how to relieve it? Isn't it okay to let him and the city lord both lose? As mentioned before, if the ability is not good, then the ability is not good. Why continue to think about alleviating hatred? What can be gained by killing?

Ah, let me tell you my feeling after reading Chapter 70: it's too dragging. The storyline that everyone wanted to see about the recognition of Shura Field is not available at all. It is really uncomfortable that you can't even pass the Novice Village in Chapter 70. You still have more than 90,000 yuan now, brother. In the future, do you plan to finish the Novice Village and then jump like crazy in one go? It's too slow. You can't cultivate your body and nature like this.

Laughing to death, P club players only know love and peace, but they don't understand what strength is.

Before Chapter 17, it was pretty good. But at the end of Chapter 17, I suddenly became wise and it felt like someone had changed. You go to a weapons store to buy a spiritual weapon, but there are no such "high-end goods" there, and then you borrow it from a workshop. You have to say "borrow the workshop to create a spiritual weapon", which is like a primary school student. Then he took out very rare materials out of thin air in front of others, and he was convinced. Compared with the previous content level, this article feels very fragmented and does not look like it was written by one person at all.

If other Japanese light novels are like toilet paper, this one is half-soaked in water.

There are flaws in the plot advancement. When I entered the battlefield dungeon for the first time, I couldn't figure out how the weakling protagonist could reveal very important information in front of a woman I had only known for a day. According to the author's previous image, the protagonist is not this kind of person, so it is a routine of seeing a beautiful woman's IQ drop, which is too low-key.

The writing is very good, the narrative is clear and logical, and the language is concise and vivid. However, there is a problem with the direction. Don't waste this book and your own inspiration. Recently, I have been a bit neglecting the basics. The core attraction of your book is the characters, not the plot or the world view. The focus of these recent chapters has been entirely on introducing the mechanism and justifying it. The attraction of this book lies in the power of the protagonist itself, as well as the plot lines and emotional lines based on this. The most important thing is to focus on depicting the protagonist's subordinates in the previous life, creating a sense of fantasy, a fantasy style, and the various attractive characters that can be drawn. It is not the game mechanism. No one is interested in that thing. Just follow the plot naturally, and there is no need to explain it at all. You should let readers slowly understand this kind of setting thing along with the plot instead of taking up so much space with cumbersome language. Abandon these background introductions. When the writing reaches this point, don't do things that are not suitable for this stage, and do things that are the core attraction of your book. Characters, especially the protagonist's former subordinates and enemies, should be portrayed with some distinctive images, and then the story should be developed around these people, rather than letting the characters serve the plot. Don't reverse the order of priority.

Has the new book been released? Give me a kick if you see it.

If you haven't finished it yet, you don't need to continue to spend money to read it. The climax of this book is terrible, and the ending is just after the final boss is defeated.

As much as I looked forward to the foreshadowing in the introduction, I was disappointed by the main text. The protagonist didn't look like a strategist at all. The novice protagonist was very disappointed.

It really started off well, but it kept falling behind the girl... Recently, I looked at it and found it was unfinished, so I read another page and found that according to statistics, I read this book for more than two hours. What a pity😢