Hunter: I Really Don't Want to Be a Leader

I've caught up with the latest chapter. The author's writing is very good. Now I have a lot of imagination. Let me give you some ideas. Firstly, a book friend in the comments had a very good idea of ​​The Kingdom of God. I think it is like the Buddhist Pure Land, which establishes deep-rooted beliefs. (Brainwashing, there are many weak countries among hunters. Save a country and become the person with the highest authority there. The people will believe in you. With the land and the people, you will have rights. Develop this place into the first base area and build it into the first "Pure Land of Paradise" Then slowly encroaching on the surrounding countries like a spider web) (direct bee god kingdom ing) Second, the number of bees now is still limited, it is impossible to have bees everywhere, sometimes it may be possible to steal the chicken but not lose the rice, but expose the whereabouts. (I think the current bees are still a bit thin qwq, maybe the author will make a similar invincible version of bees in the later stage??Combat bees??) I think we can make a merit box similar to a temple, such as a sculpture in a church, to teach Through "Donations" such as prayers and praises, the sculptures can absorb Qi independently (① A kind of acquisition of faith power. Qi is obtained through the voluntary supply of believers and will not affect the religious beliefs. There are too many disciples, which is safer than the current worker bees. ②Voluntary sacrifice: A type of voluntary supply. The difference between the former is active and passive. The leader needs to be loyal (foolish) and real (stupid). The believer devotes all his energy. ③ Forcibly deprive yourself of Qi. For example, if you are seriously injured and don't have enough Qi, you can protect yourself by forcefully depriving yourself of Qi. Summary: Teammates have unlimited mana! ). (It doesn't have to be a sculpture, it can be anything. It can be a subspecies of the current worker bee. To unify, I use sculptures to express hhh, ps: bee sculptures are also great qwq) Third, in different places Set up a sculpture, through which you can also check nearby situations and record what the believers have said, which has the effect of gathering intelligence (the eye of God has nowhere to hide! The difference between a sculpture and a bee is that the sculpture is collected at a fixed location). It's great if you can snowball with one or two sculptures! Numerous sculptures have collected qi through believers,that's a very considerable amount of qi! (You can do whatever you want with so much anger!) Fourth, as of now, it seems that the protagonist's physical body is still relatively weak, and the escape skill is on. Set up a sculpture to escape, and after it snowballs, upgrade the sculpture to add a teleportation function (ps: bees will work too, before that the bees were anywhere). (What if the protagonist suddenly descends on the sculpture and it's strange? I think this is a very interesting point. After all, the concept of the hunter setting is monopolized. Ordinary people don't know what the concept is. The protagonist has vaccinated the believers in advance. OMG, you must be sincere to the God of life. Sincerity will impress God.God The oracle will come, and then the protagonist will suddenly appear, which will make it more solid. The god is really there. Finally, a conferred god would be so cool! ) Fifth, I think the protagonist's missionary aspect is not full at the moment, and it may not be discussed yet hahaha. However, I still hope that the author will portray missionaryism more deeply. ①For example, The Story of the God of Life (Isn't it appropriate to make up a story with the word "water"? Directly the missionary journey of the little bee of the God of Life, snickering), ②Christian name, oh God of Life, balabala, the temple of light, no matter how bad it is, Bee God Cult will do. Directly copy Buddhist and Christian stories (Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah, Bah). ③Cultist, you can create a few original characters to play, and they are set to be die-hard fans of the protagonist. When the protagonist is about to die, let's make a sacrifice: Great God of Life, I, xxx, voluntarily dedicate my life to the protagonist, balabala. The protagonist's life bar will be full immediately, and he will make a comeback from adversity. (For example, set nuns, priests, direct teammates to sacrifice to heaven and have boundless magic power!) Hmm, that's it~ I hope this book is a big hit hahahaha

So many time travelers have made their abilities so complex, but their IQs really can't keep up. Why didn't the author choose something as simple and crude as the strengthening system and the releasing system? A protagonist with a low IQ plays well with those geniuses and is really confident. Based on the intelligence of those sinister hunters, it seems that it is difficult for any author to be able to control literary drama.

The idea is very good, the creativity is very good, but the IQ of the characters seems a bit behind, I mean the original one. Hunter, in my opinion, its most attractive feature lies in its strange mental abilities, novel settings and world view, and most importantly, the battle of wits between its characters and the wisdom of fighting. You don't seem to have reflected this.

Although I am a rare hunter fan, I still have to say that the protagonist is too disdainful. He doesn't have a lovable personality. He talks about wanting a plain life, but he is actually real. . . (Although this is also a common pattern for the starting point protagonist), and giving away girls and so on (in order to save his life, he betrayed others, and also gave the heroine who was fond of him and loyal to him to the brigade)

It felt like it was written by a female author, and I don't know how many readers were turned off by the Phantom Troupe section.

From a characterization perspective, I find Bisiki's description quite strange. First of all, she is a two-star gem hunter, the inheritor of the Heart Origin Style, and a person with the ability to change minds. But judging from the plot of this extra episode, what emerged to me was a warm-hearted and muscular elder sister. The hunter's worldview is generally realistic and leans toward darkness. Her performance of blocking Xiaodi many times to protect the two supporting characters was too deliberate. In order to highlight the supporting characters and enhance the protagonist's presence, the characters in the play were described in a nondescript manner. Judging from the fact that Killua was trained in the original work and the pervert was used as a test subject, she is not a foolish and benevolent being. What's more, she is also a person with change abilities who is famous for her capriciousness. Protecting the dragon once can barely be considered as maintaining the harmony of the team. Isn't she just a silly elder sister with an overweight mother's heart? It is unreasonable to have to oppose two members of the brigade in order to protect a sidekick who is attacking the protagonist. For the follow-up plot, I still hope that it can be carried out while respecting the description of the original characters. Changing the characters themselves in order to forcefully write the plot is a bit putting the cart before the horse. If you are not capable of writing extras, you should just follow the original timeline honestly.

It was too fast to enter the dungeon. I wanted to come in and see how the leader plays, but after reading dozens of chapters, I lost it. I recommend focusing on the interaction between the church and the protagonist group, and innovating without losing the original plot. The collision between the church group and the protagonist group creates new plot sparks. The plot of the arena is really a failure. The protagonist's strength is straight to the end. Who were the original protagonist group and the people in the arena at that time? It's not an exaggeration to say that there are three religions and nine schools. You let the leader fight in the arena? The protagonist is the leader of a religious sect, and the author has arranged for Aunt Bi. Can you really think of no other plot? Even if you want to find someone to practice with, why not do it privately? For a powerful leader, arranging such a stage fight is a waste of character. Protagonist, you can lower everything, but you can't lower your strength! The game started with cultivating forces, and I thought it was a group game, but in the end, there was a twist: the protagonist was fighting alone, and the forces became the backdrop.

The subject matter is attractive, and it can be seen that the author has the intention to write a novel that is different from following the group flow. From the prophetic poem at the beginning and the concept of the ability to shoot, it can be seen that the author is still willing to write his own things, but the author's writing style is somewhat unable to support his own ideas. For example, the cooperation with the gangster family and sending Xiaodi to the tour group. When the gang leader faced a person with special abilities who saved him, without a reasonable psychological description, his attitude was to simply ask and then directly choose to train him. This kind of bridge that promotes the development of the plot actually, well, feels a bit deliberate, and even has a bad look. Some people may not understand it, but I said it well. As the boss of a gangster family, one day your physical condition suddenly ignited like a catkin on fire, and the family was thrown into chaos. Your subordinates were in a hurry and went to the doctor. A young magician (ps: 15 years old) was cured by you. After waking up, he briefly handled family affairs. He also asked his subordinates and confirmed that the person who saved you was the Holy Son of a small gangster who made money by doing telepathy. The subordinate who took over explained the process again. The boy was killed by your subordinates, resurrected, and his temperament changed drastically. He was coerced and pulled to save your life. By the way, just to force him, he killed his father. What is your decision now? Perhaps, some people will say that the relationship between the protagonist and his father is not good, and the former owner of the body has little relationship with the protagonist, but does the gang boss know? Of course, please understand, I don't mean to be critical. I don't mean to look for reality in the novel But as an author, I hope you can understand that although a good novel that touches people's hearts does not necessarily have to describe the communication fragments well, since you have chosen to use communication description to present what you want to express, wouldn't it be better to improve it? As for the description of letting Xiaodi go to the travel group to develop, it happened without any foreshadowing or psychological description. It is very... Maybe the author should try to see it from the reader's perspective. Maybe you, the author, think that readers can find their own Hamlet in their minds. But my answer is, no. If the character's personality and the delicate inner psychological activities of the character are not much, it will be difficult for the character's imagination space to expand in the heart. It is difficult for readers to read more than the literal meaning. It can be seen that the author really wants to write well, but his writing techniques and ways of thinking are really lagging behind, and he cannot express his inner thoughts very well. It is recommended that you read more books about writing techniques by famous writers to lay a solid foundation.

Living under someone else's roof, living a life of captivity, why does the protagonist think he is safe? ? ? ?

The poison spots are not big, they are all small poison spots. But even if the protagonist is capable, why does a two-star hunter like Bisji always ask the protagonist for his opinion? The protagonist is not even a hunter. The author can still make some adjustments now. Just to highlight the protagonist, don't make everyone else smarter. Hisoka and Bisij have no opinions of their own. They all listen to the protagonist and ask him about everything. Hisoka wouldn't say it anymore, a veteran like Bisji and a two-star hunter didn't have any opinions of his own, and he was still the leader of the team. What does the protagonist think of everything... How does such a character pass the hunter exam?

The setting of the embodied telepathy ability of equivalent exchange is really good. The restriction should be lower potential and energy than normal people. The telepathy ability can fill oneself with other people's energy and use it for equivalent exchange.

Chapter 18: Giving a daughter away makes me numb

Both his brain power and reading ability are relatively high in IQ. But the aquarium scene really made me feel embarrassed... It was a copycat routine from ten years ago.

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Personally, I feel that Xiaodi's plot is a bit baffling

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Any script drags on for too long, such as Aquarium, which ends in an anticlimax and ends at the beginning. It would be better to move it faster. After reading it for a long time, there is no gain. It's not feasible to write in a comic style. The content of the comics is intuitive and quick, but using words makes people tired, and the progress is only a little bit improved. And a casually created resentment can cause so many telepathic users to be unable to solve it, which is a bit of a physical trance. According to your description, they were bombed by resentment by the big country. What is the Dark Continent? Bisji and Hisoka, as one of the top hunters, are also at the top of the human race. They were made unable to fight back by a group of thangkas made into hunter versions. Resentment can still have high intelligence and sign contracts. I thought it was a mysterious resurrection. The hunter exam has started to be written this way again. For example, you will feel tired, annoyed and disgusted after watching more than ten episodes of "Trap Tower" in "Hunter Hunter". It just makes people want to skip it.

In the early stage, it seemed very novel and good. I wrote a plot of "Exception", but it plummeted instantly. Bischi seemed like a mentally retarded child. He couldn't survive without the protagonist? The protagonist begins to position himself to strike, but the result is that the protagonist needs to save everyone. Is this the ability of a two-star hunter to prepare for adventure? The prophetic poem is as if I haven't read it. What I think is that after a few times of mind-killing by the Hunter Guild's mind-killer, the price is too high. The protagonist picks up a small mind-killer and gets rid of it. The result is that he is the protagonist from the beginning to the end. Otherwise, if you write that the protagonist is powerful in mind-killing, the Hunter's Guild asks you to be reasonable, otherwise the plot will appear too brainless.

Xiaodi is leaving now, no longer with the protagonist and the Phantom Troupe?

The writing is really good, especially the aquarium section is particularly attractive to read.

This kind of book is difficult to write. Once the logic fails, it is easy to collapse. Especially the ability cannot be too strong or too weak. You have to play tricks. I have read a few books about Jojo and the Hunter. There are few good ones and even fewer willing to write them. I don't know if there is a group, but Shui Gequn

It's really good-looking. I think the protagonist's abilities and the scenes with the troupe are quite interesting.

Ask the teacher to draw Bean, handsome🤓

The writing is quite good, just stick with it until it is finished😭

Why don't you have a pirated copy? I still have to pay to see it. But it's really okay, otherwise I wouldn't have spent the money.

Your book on starting point anti-theft measures is so awesome now. Basically, I can't read any new books. Anti-Theft

The previous poisonous points are very poisonous. After getting over it, the chapters on the shelves are very good, especially the hunter exam chapter. After more than two hundred chapters, the protagonist can compete with Jin Wuwu but cannot beat Catwoman. . The fighting strength has collapsed.

Is there a group? If I order the full amount, it will be completed for 680,000?

Will the author write about hunters in the future?

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