Get Off Work and Become a Magical Girl

After reading it in one sitting in two days, I felt frustrated, so I wrote it. I must admit that my reading experience is quite good. (Except for the short episode about the delinquent girl) Of course, precisely because of my very good reading experience, the injustice is difficult to stop by reading downwards. It can be seen that the author likes every character he writes, and his hard work for the characters will eventually be seen by readers. The characters seen in the article, no matter whether they are decent or villains, have distinct signs after they appear. Even I, who like quantum fluctuation reading, can tell most of the characters and their corresponding plots after reading it. Because of the complete design, even the villains have arcs. Although the reasons for the villain's darkening need to be discussed, they are all within the scope of understanding. If complete character design is the cornerstone of a good story, then plot design is the blueprint for the composition of the story. As for the plot, I can't comment. After all, the quality of the plot is actually a matter of opinion. You are honey, he is arsenic, it is useless to talk too much. But there is no doubt that the author of this article shows the character's state quite naturally, which may not be considered an unparalleled design and ingenuity. But it gives people the feeling that he is truly trying to take on every character and tell his own existence to the story in his own voice. His plots are exquisite, there's no denying that. As for language... Is the author's language really good? We must admit that his diction is far less beautiful than that of some writers. But does it use rough words? Not really. But it is true that his choice of words and sentences gives people a feeling of "this is how light novels are originally". The just right words and sentences can't be seen as carefully selected, but they always give people a friendly light novel feeling. There may be spoilers ahead! ! ! ! For those who haven't seen it, please take a detour in advance! ! ! ! The novel's reviews are so good, why did I get married? Perhaps it is because I am too addicted to the emotion that permeates this work - that kind of light, slightly real helplessness. A work must have a realistic side and an ideal side. It is not difficult for us to easily detect its ideal side from this book, the "guarding", "love" and the "shining family and friendship" that are almost impossible to ignore and the necessary "cool" points of refreshing writing. The father and daughter misunderstood each other and reconciled because of the magical girl. A lonely, well-behaved and selfless girl met an important person because of her identity as a magical girl. Hong Siyu, who transformed into a moth form and waited for death, was full of regrets. The ideal delphinium sacrificed her life to bring her back. Even an irrational creature like a beast will become a girl with important things under the term magical girl. It seems that all ideals will become beautiful realities after meeting magical girls, but this is for the protagonist. What is honey to you is arsenic to him. Grand miracles are always eye-catching, but those who have not been saved by miracles, those who have been hurt by miracles, or those who have witnessed the unspeakable evil in miracles will have their once-believed belief turned into nothing, and they will naturally have many emotions. It's just that their expressions are different. The rebels rebel, the world-weary are world-weary, and even the longing ones turn their backs on the light after witnessing it, putting their lives on the bowstring that shoots down the miracle, and never return. But after all, those who rebel against the miracles are too weak to the miracles. The killing effect of the bud-level magical girls in the article is several times or even dozens of times that of humans. Someone asked in the question in Mosna's article, why doesn't the kingdom take revenge on the kingdom for its fault? How should he take revenge? Is it difficult for an ordinary person's rebellion to be considered successful if it is not countered by a bud-level magical girl? Or swallow your anger and say nothing? For revenge, he had no choice but to kill himself. Those who kill must be prepared to be killed when they do it, and a "person" can only kill one person in his life. When the flames of self-destruction ignited the arrows of their resistance and the rebels surrendered other lives for their perhaps crazy rebellion, they had already degenerated from humans into beasts, beasts seeking revenge for what they saw as an "unfair fate." The protagonist is lucky. He endured all this and gave up his miracles in a self-consoling manner to become an ordinary person and go to work to support his family. But by a strange combination of circumstances, he touched a miracle again in one day. Perhaps it was fate for him. In his middle age, he was just clumsily guarding the only beauty he had left. Since it is protection, then this word will never be active, and all promotion must be "attack - counterattack." After being attacked and counterattacked, the scope of his protection becomes larger until he returns to the country and is become a sapphire. Does he really want this? I couldn't help but think about it while reading. I couldn't see the active willingness to act in the characters' actions, but a kind of helplessness being pushed forward. If he didn't act, things would develop in a worse direction. He had to act because he had to protect what he wanted to protect. The more he hopes to protect the things that are important to him, the more he is restricted by external things. This is how he moves forward, and that's all. Although I have not finished my words, I still have a thousand words that are difficult to put into one sentence. Everyone has their own opinions. It will inevitably be inappropriate to continue to evaluate based on one's own opinions, so I will stop here. Above

It's not a mage pretending to be a magical girl, or a fake Lily harem pretending to be obscene. Really bringing hope, driving away despair, healing pain, changing lives, creating miracles and realizing dreams, this is the magical girl I want to see!

The first time I read this book was in May 2023. At that time, the theme of the book's Bianwen attracted me, because these days, who writes Bianwen, or it is just a self-pleasure article. But this book surprised me. As a non-mainstream Bianwen + magical girl, I still like this book very much for its delicate emotions and excellent writing. However, the interruption of updates for the next half year really took away too much. Even if updates are resumed, the writing style will still change, just like a tailor using different cloths to sew clothes. No matter how meticulous the stitching is, there will still be a different feel. What's more, this book has plummeted from its authorial status before it was discontinued. You are right, this is a trap, but some people will still jump, because why? For the sake of an ending, even if there is a high probability that this ending will die prematurely, everyone still wants to believe in the Salt Arc. The magical girl who brings hope, the delphinium that escapes from the cage, the cornflower blooming on the top of the tower, the flower of the heart that shines in the cracks. I look forward to an ending——

Regarding Delphinium's acceptance of her mother's identity, how does Lao Lin treat Xiaobai, how does she act as a mother, and how does she treat Delphinium? The discussion of these two issues and Lao Lin's own thinking on these two issues are what I am most looking forward to seeing in future plots 😂 First of all, the first question, what Delphinium said to Xiaolu and Xia Liang at the end of today's chapter These words can be used as a reference (the preview chapter). Those words are exactly what Lao Lin would say. They are the words of a father. In a sense, it can be said that the nature of the elder image that Delphinium has played when facing Xiaolu for a long time is actually that of a "female father." And will the mother-daughter relationship with Xiaobai be different beyond this? How will he play the image of a mother? As for the second question, what does Lao Lin think of Delphinium? I think Xiaobai's recognition of his mother may be an opportunity for him to re-examine this issue. Accepting the title of mother is the first time that Lao Lin has recognized Delphinium as a woman on a social level. Identity, and his previous idea was to only regard Delphinium as a weapon and armor (mentioned in the chapter of sleeping with Xia Liang) Just like Kamen Rider's armor, although sometimes the plot does seem to have a sense of déjà vu, but the more specific actual situation Obviously this is not the case. There is an essential difference between the two. Let's take the knight as an example: the knight's belt is a foreign object, but the original body is more "essential" than the physical body. Laida will not live in a transformed form. Old Lin's days in the secret base were all based on... Life in the form of Delphinium; and the most fundamental difference is that the Kamen Rider's armor does not have an independent identity, and the social identity of Delphinium and Lao Lin cannot be said to overlap much, but are almost completely unrelated 😂 Old Fangting City Team During this period, Lin Yun's and Cornflower/Delphin's social circles were the same, and there was no difference. Therefore, as he gradually got used to the existence of Cornflower/Delphinx, and got used to bathing and being played with by his old teammates as costumed dolls, he would naturally be able to It can be thought that Delphinium is just armor; but if everything that Old Lin did as Delphinium was just acting, then there is no reason for Delphinium to have habits that Lao Lin does not have, but in fact it does, such as akimbo, making people shudder, and some changes in oral habits, etc. These changes Transformation has appeared naturally, but he hasn't clearly realized this yet, or he doesn't care about it Now this "armor" has gradually acquired a completely different social identity from the original Lao Lin, and even a connection such as the mother-daughter relationship has appeared. It has become his second identity, another self as a woman, instead of the so-called armor. Will he further accept Delphinium as an identity rather than a state? Will the perception that "delphiniums are just armor" change? In short, I hope these issues can be expanded on in the text, and not just as my over-interpretation. Otherwise, it would be a pity if I have hastily discussed

Poor little Delphinium must have been knocked to the ground by that woman and taken back to work hard as a star, right?

After reading the latest two chapters, I have a lot of emotions. The most emotional one is "Magical Girl Delphinium, battle-success". All the vivid, smart, and shining words came to my mind. The words that come out of my mouth are, "What a magical girl!". There is no doubt that if it were in an anime, this would be a sparkling scene accompanied by the theme song. How beautiful. What a blessing. "If I could truly experience what I felt when I was 15 years old, readers would also feel the same and share this emotion." Haruki Murakami said in an interview in France in 2003. It can be seen from this that Arc Yan is most likely a magical girl, maybe a flower card. (Laughing) So I concluded: This is already a great work, and it will leave a mark in the history of online literature. At least it's unprecedented. I will probably always remember this group of magical girls who like Xia Liang, like juniors, and like them too much. It's about dreams, it's about courage, it's about the great adventure that's about to begin, it's about some little humor, it's about some sadness. As for the title name...? When I was still young, I also dreamed of writing such a work, with lovable characters, touching plots, and gorgeous words... It would be great if I could also write such a beloved work, a beloved story about a magical girl.

After listening to the first volume, I couldn't help but comment. Cool! This is called light novel 😎 fun! This is called light novel 😎 fun! This is called a light novel 😎 A veteran two-dimensional author with profound knowledge, he also grasps the emotions he wants to convey very well when writing daily life, characters, foreshadowing, and battles The first pupation level in the sewer in more than 20 chapters, and in the early relaxed and joyful Japanese light novel, a text suddenly appeared that was called a stunning battle, so cool! (This paragraph doesn't feel big when I'm reading it normally, but I've heard it from listening to it every day, and the combination of each word is really exciting) As for the rest of the story, I won't spoil it. I can only say that if I find a reliable animation company to make a new series, it definitely has the potential to become the hegemon of the year This book is simply the embodiment of my longing for light novels when I was young. At that time, I had not seen Niku toilet paper on the streets, and I only had beauty in light novels. Good reverie, and this book seems to bring me back to the feeling of the past. It usually describes joy and warmth, and the fights are passionate and energetic There are no Japanese conservative values ​​that depress life, and there is no ⭐Suppression of the male tendency of the White River Dolphin, the stack of nonsense of Dashuibi, or the smell that the Brahman of the Two-Spined Salamander cannot hide It is just a pure book, and it can be seen that the author is trying to design plots with heart, and write a light novel that satisfies himself. I think maybe it was the pure books and stories like this when I was young that made me love light novels so much. 10 double monthly tickets are presented, Guoqing has risen, and the off-duty devil must be animated,,,

I have seen the data about magical girl books on the site before. There are so many followers on the site, but only this book has exceeded 10,000 orders. I have to say that it makes sense. If it is updated steadily, the results will be better. Mainly because of the current starting point. Writing about magical girls does not write about love and hope. Writing about dark, deep and disabled people is a big deal. I don't understand if I follow the trend. But this book is written from Lin Jun's perspective. Adults have difficulties as adults. They work to raise children at the same time, and at the same time, they fight monsters and rescue teammates after work. It's really hard to read the chapter when you have to work overtime to process materials after fighting monsters. Looking back at Xiaolu, it's okay for her father to be very busy on weekdays, but he was absent at the critical time of her mother's death anniversary. There is a reason for the poor relationship between father and daughter. It's also stupid to be afraid that something will happen to Delphinium and sneak up to support her and cause Delphinium to be injured. Later, the character image of Xiaolu who wants Delphinium to be her mother becomes directly three-dimensional. She is no longer a "child from a single-parent family" in the reader's impression, but a little girl who truly longs for "parental affection." Hei Shenzhen is also implicitly reflected in the book. The members of the Magical Girl Team are all "missing parents". Some of them were harmed by the beasts, and some were from divorced families. Looking at the destructive power of the beasts in the past, we know that ordinary people must have a lot of pressure to live in such a society. If the dark disability is more profound, it would be like the older generation of team members all died in battle, the magic country lost contact, most of the untrained newcomers died in the battle after an unexpected incident, and the survivors were missing arms and legs. ——However, the remnant beasts have not yet launched a general attack, and the remaining girls are facing the coming enemy with a belief that even if they die on the battlefield in the next second, they will still smile and live. After all, the flowers blooming on the ruins are the most beautiful.

No, has this author ever been a magical girl? I took a lot of things for granted and just wrote them there.

Hurry up and give your daughter some magical girl shock.

Delphinium, come on! My belief in protecting Xiaolu has reached its peak! Delphinium's power continues to expand, and it has surpassed the most transcendent flower cards! However, this is not enough! Swallow the entrails of a beast and turn into the strongest witch! The silk threads are entangled, turning into a giant cocoon, breaking out of the cocoon into a butterfly, and becoming an immortal! At this moment, Delphinium is invincible! As long as she defeats this guy, she can protect Xiaolu! Next chapter, the death of Delphinium!

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"} It is no exaggeration to say that this book is my second most anticipated work this year. There are three reasons: first of all, no one can dislike the little blue kid... I mean, the reliable little senior Delphinium, especially when she is actually a weather-beaten husband inside (?); Secondly, the interaction between the magical girls full of youthful vitality makes people feel I feel as if I am ten years younger, and the way Delphinium, as an elder in every sense of the word, strives to maintain its majesty is also hilarious (laughing). Also, the various twisted fans in the book club are also one of my sources of fun, and they really make me laugh! Book title: "Get off work, and then become a magical girl" Author: Arc Salt Type: Light novel·Original fantasy·Magical girl·Dad·Family·Friendship·Warm healing·Joy to (?)·Serialized Recommended reader types: Old two-dimensional, magical girl lovers, twisted monsters, warriors of love (?) Recommendation index: ★★★★★ (5/5)

He is defeated by Qingmei! Anya-chan is truly the light of green plum! Whether it is an infatuated elementary school girl, a transfer student from a foreign land, or a mysterious eldest lady, they are not the enemies of childhood sweetheart Anya-chan! He can only run away in humiliation!

At first I thought the strengths of this book were the writing, but later I thought the strengths were the creation of characters and the appropriateness of the plot.

The biggest problem with reading this novel so far is the lack of a charismatic villain. The villain at the end of this volume is too clownish, so that seeing her beaten up is enough to relieve your anger, but you said the sense of accomplishment does not exist. To put it simply, there is no opponent strong enough to play the opposite role.                   ， But if we want to show the growth of the next generation, the children must be separated from Lin Jun, and the leadership of the entire team must be handed over to the children themselves. If the theme for children is growth, then the theme for adults should be choice. When unable to do anything, adults can only make the least bad choice. Although they are on the road to being killed at that time, Lin Jun's entire image can stand up at that time. When Delphinium can no longer save everyone (at the end of the first volume, basically everyone who can be saved is saved), how to choose becomes the shining point.

I'm keeping it, I hope I won't die of it, I was stressed out once I stopped updating.

The first volume as a whole was definitely enough for me👍. Originally attracted by the title, I just wanted to have fun😄. I thought it was a light comedy, but I didn't expect the work to be unexpectedly delicate. I have never watched the magical girl animation series. I heard that it is very "healing" so I dare not watch it. I only have a superficial understanding of the magical girl system. However, the logic of the system described by the author is online, which also successfully made me want to read on. Gradually, I was attracted by the emotional entanglements of the protagonists, and became more and more interested in the development of the storyline. I hope that the author's performance will still be online in the next volume. If there is no big decline in my level, I will subscribe to the full version. 😋

The most annoying character in the first volume is the golden-green cat-eye! The appearance of such a Riddler + corpse meal + taking advantage + boss in the story of a magical girl is simply more awkward than eating half a fly in a dessert, stepping on a frog to urinate on an outing, or being unwatched while practicing sub-manhood! You must beat such a big female ghost hard!

The off-duty demon and I are like childhood sweethearts separated by high school schedules, and we only see each other once a week. That time was so short. Just when I felt happy, I had to separate and fall into painful waiting. The expectation from the heart is like a colony of ants scattered into the limbs and bones, making me feel sweet torture. Ah, Lao🧂, may the god of inspiration take care of you and free me from the whirlpool of desire!

I can only say that just reading the beginning is indeed a rare good book. I didn't watch the starting point at first, but I came here after seeing it on nga. The writing is delicate, like a trickling spring, sweet and quiet. The characters are flesh and blood and full of emotional details. The plot unexpectedly made me feel the flavor of ancient tokusatsu, with warmth and instruction hidden in the blood, and ulterior secrets hidden in the darkness. The coexistence of royal morality and social beasts, the intertwining of old father and motherhood, the conspiracy of the daughter's future and the death of his wife... It's hard to stop. The update is so slow, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent

This is my first fully-ordered book, haha. Maybe it's because I'm getting older. It's really hard to find works about royal magical girls on the airwaves. Good luck. I hope it can be published in my lifetime. The author also works hard 😁

The author graduated from school two years ago and just started working. It was also two years ago that the author's updates became increasingly unstable, and there was no update in the last half year. Combined with the author's previous record on the Shu Ke case, I thought this book was probably a eunuch, and I was very lost at that time. For me, this book is just like Su Nuo expressing his victory thoughts after finishing 2.5 Pieces of enlightenment. I will probably never forget this book in my life. It has become a lifelong reference to Bai Yueguang and Yi Nanping (there is also a book about Conquering Demon Experts, but that one was really sent). Because of this book, I began to discover the interesting aspects of magical girls, and started watching a series of anime and tokusatsu dramas. For me, who first entered the society two years ago, working in a different place and the various things that happened due to working in a different place all weighed on me for a while, leaving me with no energy to notice that this novel that I had unpinned and placed in the corner of the bookshelf has now come to life like the forgotten sprouted potatoes in the warehouse, which makes me feel like tears are filling my eyes. Although I have not read this novel again in the past two years, it has ignited my endless creative desire for magical girls like a flame. Various settings and plots have been written countless times in my heart and on my mobile phone. It has been two years since I became a social worker. Although my heart is no longer as turbulent as when I first came into contact with this book, the desire to create has never disappeared. In the past few months, my work has finally been on track, and I also have free time to do the things I like. The poster works during the day and goes to night school to learn painting after get off work at night. He practices painting on weekends when he has nothing to do. He hopes that through continuous learning, maybe one day everyone will see a second-generation comic that looks like an off-duty devil on Tieba or Bilibili. By then, even if the author is a eunuch, there will be free meal replacements.

In the past few months, I started with the magical girl short article on the forum next door, and searched for food all the way to the starting point again. I stayed up late to read the seventy-fiveth chapter of the second volume. Although I enjoyed reading it, I felt like a disaster was coming when I saw the update rhythm and the wailing in the comment area. I just checked the forum and saw that the scheduled completion date of the exam chapter was last year. Lin Yun and Cui Que, as an elder, have a calm, rational and gentle character, the various feelings of the various girls and aunts towards the male protagonist, and the male protagonist's obsession with his deceased wife. I was very attracted to it. I really like this kind of transformation content that allows me to maintain myself. I feel like my inner self has changed and I no longer have any inner taste. However, after Lin Yun became the chief, his daily life as a father and daughter (and others) became less and less, which is indeed a pity after reading these chapters. What else can I say, I hope you will never die and enjoy watching the finale of making dumplings

It took me a few days to catch up on the latest chapter, so let me tell you a little bit about my current feelings about the second volume. First of all, the strange motivations of Yuan or Clawhen in the first part are very puzzling. The author repeatedly emphasizes that Yuan is very martial-minded and does not want to cheat the victory without using force, so that she can let the protagonist group get into trouble at some key points. It gives people the feeling that the author does not know how to deal with the powerful skills of this character, and can only solve the problem by turning into a straw bag villain. Although the logic of Yuan's own behavior is barely self-consistent, the logic of sending this idiot to carry out the key task of Claw Mark is very strange. Either Clawmark deliberately sent such a idiot to "play big chess" for some reason, or it means that Clawmark itself is a strawbag organization. If it is the latter, it will appear that White Wolf's defection and Black Cat's ideals are idiotic, and the serious character background will collapse... I don't know if the author will add an explanation for this paragraph later... As for the second part, the author has added a lot of worldview background and skill settings in this chapter. This is nothing in itself, but the problem is that the author is trying to create a worldview that looks complex and serious, but various idiot characters, especially the villains who still look idiotic so far, conflict with this. Whether it's Black Ember Dawn, which is fighting for its own good, or Clawmark, which wants to be wholesaled by the state for all kinds of civilian equipment, neither of these two underground organizations seems to be able to truly fight against the state. In the "World War" that is not suitable for the theme of magical girls, the coalition forces who were born in the desolate world were able to fight back and forth with the country. I don't know that so many resources from them can compete with the country that has developed in the Feng Shui treasure land for thousands of years... I wonder if the future chapters of the world (if I am lucky enough to see it again) will explain this. There are also three teams divided into three teams to test three projects, and the test chapter lasts for nearly 100 chapters. It really slows down the story rhythm of the second volume, which was already bloated because of the supplementary world view and settings. I don't know when I will be able to see the rest of the story. The climax... But no matter what, although the story rhythm is not as smooth as the first volume, at least the excellent characters and plot creation are still here. Some of the unfilled holes in the world view and character design mentioned above will not hurt as long as they are filled in. (If I'm lucky enough to still see it) I just hope that the second half of the second volume can make up for the villain's settings and not let the idiot villain ruin the climax of the story. Finally... May I live a long life...

Yugan, I am interested in the recent hell jokes of Japanese wobos and the social characteristics there After a little understanding, I found that Liao Lin's way of doing things and the logic of his behavior have a strong style of island society Never contact again is the most caring and gentle choice. This was fully reflected in Lao Manali before the Kingdom Defense War and the company. But it is not completely written as a person of the Japanese society type Although the behavioral logic is strong in the Japanese style, its bottom layer is still the family framework of the Chinese people It is also commonly known as the male mother. This feature is really good. San Xiaozhi and Lao Lin can be said to have achieved each other. The special subject matter, unique style, and excellent writing made me obsessed with the dead eunuch.

Hold on with the salt

The author must keep writing. I can't find many books on the same subject, and even if I find the writing style and plot, I can't stand it. I finally found yours, and I'm really immersed in it. Readers are easy to coax. As long as you keep writing, even water is better than not writing at all 😭 You have worked hard and I don't want to rush you, but there are not many fine grasses like this.

Live well

Kick me when you are a treasonous idiot😭😭

I can't stand it anymore. Author, please give me a picture. I feel itchy all over, ah~ come on, come on, come on~