The Legend of the Corpse King's Cultivation of Immortality

I read Chapter 37 of you. Saw the latest chapter. There is no progress in the plot. Repeatedly emphasize the zombies. Already 36 shots, not a single enemy killed. I just went home and saw my mother. Too watery.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I can only say that the imagination is good, but the writing is too watery, like a cow chewing grass, chewing over and over again whether a zombie can kill people or slaughtering a village. I feel that the author is stuck and there is nothing substantial. I really can't stand it.

After reading 25 chapters, there are at least 20 chapters of commentary, and I was fascinated by it. After you start to introduce the types of zombies, foundation building methods, and the first target armored corpse, you should seize the time to practice and take revenge, instead of just developing magical powers and spells without completing anything. Looks very embarrassed, painting a cake? The protagonist also knows that he is staying in a small place and is still procrastinating.

It's better not to write about zombies like this

I'm here to read cool articles, not because you're too verbose.

Very nice, come on

It's very well written, I hope you can stick with it!

The very caring little zombie is willing to help others in the other world, spreading love and spreading sympathy and holy love to the other world!

I only have one opinion or request! I hope all authors write books in a consistent and logical manner. I have read this book in the past two days, and what I wrote earlier is to my liking. So I subconsciously subscribed and recharged to watch it. If you can't finish writing, I can understand, eunuch. But what the heck is written in the back, especially the ending? ? ? The content is so different! I almost thought it was a piece of fiction I read on a pirated website. ~