Strange Tales of Tokyo, Part Two

How come it's already 2023, and there are still people writing this kind of novel, and the money is still 50,000 yen or 100,000 yen? The protagonist was targeted by the Heise Society, and he defeated the Heise Society at the door. The other party's boss begged for mercy and worked hard for only 100,000 yen. The protagonist accepted it and let it go... To be honest, if it were me, I would only feel that he was humiliating me.

Drive high and go low? Sunny Day Baby had just started to feel a little bit better when I encountered the black bear group. I felt that deleting the plot between the black bear group and Naixiang would not affect it at all. I don't understand why it was written. The cutover feeling was too serious. There are also classmates who have problems no matter how they look at it, but the protagonist doesn't even doubt it at all. This is really written by an author, so the difference between the upper and lower limits is too big, right?

I had appendicitis in the last book. Damn it.

I have read 200,000 words so far, and I have two complaints. First, the NT Black Bear team is underpaid, and a helper is only 5,000r. Is this a joke? It has to start at 100,000, not to mention that the prices in Tokyo are already high. 100,000 A day is enough to do anything. The protagonist still looks smug, he is really mentally retarded Secondly, the protagonist has drawn two shikigami so far, and none of them can be subdued, especially the shikigami in the back. At least find a chance to establish contact and then slowly subdue him. He dumped him immediately. It seems really discouraging to quit.

6. I have been reckless again and again. I don't have the strength yet. Every time I rely on the invitation from the guest god and see my luck, otherwise I will be in trouble. What's wrong with pig's feet? Or is there something wrong with the author? Arrange such a plot😅

Emmm, I feel like this is a new author. Let me briefly talk about the current situation of this book. The story setting in the introduction is still very attractive. However, the writing style and some details in the middle are not good. To put it simply, it is the story of Sunny Day Doll in the first few scenes at the beginning. It is not sloppy at all and the clean ending makes people feel good. But when I write about this Yakuza organization, the problem will be exposed. The boss gave 100,000 on the first night. If converted according to the ratio, it seems to be a lot. But you must know that first of all, this is a Yakuza organization. Secondly, at this time, the other party is already a piece of meat. The other party gives money in the hope that the protagonist will let them go. They also want the protagonist to say more nice things in front of Weird and let him go. That's why he said that this experiment is too little. Especially when the Yakuza organization pops up next and asks the monk to slay demons and gives him one million, which is useless, and calls the protagonist over again and wants to bargain for 50,000 or 100,000. This kind of words is no problem for a small citizen. But when you use it on a leader who established the Yakuza organization by himself, don't you think the other party's people can't set it up? To put it bluntly, you didn't bring in the corresponding characters to think about the problem, which led to the society being unable to stand up. No matter how you read the story, it will make people feel like they are watching a drama.

Even if you suck, you're better than a eunuch.

What we are saying is that if you cut it, just come out and say it. Don't hang us up in silence, so we can get together and part ways. If you insist on saying nothing, you still expect to continue writing one day. Do you expect us to wait until you come out to apologize and then watch you continue writing 😆😆

Who is so poor in the second-level game? What about the equipment and props for the first-level game? It's just a bunch of demon jade that haven't broken through the material yet, so funny.

The protagonist doesn't have much enthusiasm, he can really just act one day at a time.

It looked okay at the beginning, but became less and less interesting later on. The author could no longer suppress the swelling combat power and could only suppress it. When entering the dungeon, he just dispersed, found people, crushed, and ended. I felt nothing while jumping around. I didn't feel any horror at all. It was like playing a game called Summoner to fight a dungeon.

The first two or three chapters are okay, but the rest are too formulaic, like an assembly line, which is quite bad. I really can only read the first two or three chapters.

What a pity, I really like this style

Just one chapter for a new book? I have to post 5 chapters no matter what.

Coming from the previous book, I like your story. Please write more words, it is not enough.

It's over, it's all a dream? Doesn't this mean eunuch? I do...

At the beginning of time travel, he was chased by gangsters and the protagonist suspected that he was an alien. Later, he actually met the protagonist Jiangzhi and felt that there were no aliens in the world.

The characters, background setting, and modern Japanese ghost story style conceived by the author are indeed quite interesting, but the writing style is really difficult to understand at a glance. I can see that you wrote it very seriously, but many readers are disappointed because of your writing style. Try to improve it! I still like your novels very much!

I was also surprised how I had ordered all the copies. It turned out to be you.