Reborn in Tokyo, Opened the Wrong Plug-In

Chapter 116, the girl's mother is not cool yet, she still wants to have sex with the male protagonist? I don't understand why.

The most important thing is that the plot is more brilliant. You can completely ignore the problem of numerical values ​​(because only the protagonist has numerical values, and other people or weird people only have a numerical value of favorability, so there will be no collapse without comparison. The protagonist's numerical values ​​only show that he is constantly improving). It makes people feel like a high-dimensional author with a bad taste is giving equipment to the protagonist through lottery. In general, the settings are light and the plot is heavy, and the values ​​​​for weirdness (kaidan) are not refined as some people say (looking at weirdness is to see that they are unreasonable, and setting numerical values ​​​​for Tomie's charm or monster abilities is the stupidest thing). Instead, through interesting tasks, you can draw equipment to eliminate the weirdness. The numerical value has just become a tool for high-dimensional authors to limit the protagonist's unlimited acquisition of learning abilities.

Will the protagonist change his image later on? If you want to change your image, it is recommended to refer to Diavolo's enchanting and domineering image

When writing a book, don't write a story that others don't know. If you write about yourself and write about someone else, readers will have to look for the original work to read. If you write about someone else to promote others, you will have nothing left.

I have read dozens of chapters, and I feel that the protagonist's learning system requires charisma no matter what skills he learns. For example, learning to take photos requires 50 charisma, and learning kendo requires 200 charisma. The average value of the protagonist's appearance in the first chapter is about 10. He is described as being tall and mature in appearance. As a result, his charm increases by 50 by using props to smoke. Does the author think this setting is reasonable? What values ​​do you want to output when smoking is five times more handsome? If the protagonist's initial charm value of 10 is set to be slightly lower than ordinary people, what is Tomie's charm value? Is there anyone above 200 who learns kendo? Or should we set the protagonist's school's kendo club to have a higher per capita number than Tomie? In short, whatever skills the protagonist successfully learns will basically increase his charm. I just want to know when the protagonist will become a succubus. The system values ​​are confusing and do not have any logical skill learning requirements. It is recommended that the author set the values ​​​​more rationally and set a benchmark for the values. For example, the average physique of an adult man is set to 10. For example, if the charm is set to be ugly, it is 3 or less, the general appearance is 5 to 7, and handsome is 8910, which is clear at a glance. It's easy to collapse if you add values ​​randomly. Like Dragon Ball, combat power is not calculated in the later stage.

Taking the clone to eat a Devil Fruit resulted in the clone becoming self-aware. It was originally written to support Junji Ito, but I really couldn't stand it here.

It's outrageous. Learning how to develop photos has something to do with your charm... Not to mention logical closure... Did you just write this point request out of nowhere?

Just my personal opinion, I feel that the rhythm and transition of the plot are appropriate and good. As a result, when it comes to the plot of Fujiyuan's mother and daughter, it feels abrupt and abrupt, destroying the overall sense of coordination. And it ends abruptly, giving people a sense of powerlessness that cannot be achieved, and this sense of powerlessness is extremely uncomfortable for readers. In addition, the female characters may be treated in a childish way, perhaps to go against the grain or for some other reason. They may seem free and easy, but in fact they show contempt for emotions and a one-sided understanding of emotions. Moreover, the characters that have been portrayed with a lot of pen and ink ended up hastily like this, which only adds to the disappointment in the readers' hearts. All I can say is that if this is not foreshadowing or foreshadowing by the author (although I personally think it is most likely not), then it is "the stupidity of self-destructing the Great Wall."

I just noticed that the protagonist has become more and more greedy without knowing when, and there is no bottom line in greed (cheating Urami Yusuke and their tuition fees, etc.)

I've finished reading it, and as of Chapter 31, it's okay, but there are a few problems First, the numerical inflation The initial attributes are so low, and then they appear in tens or hundreds, and the numerical values ​​are like decorations without any real sense. Do you want to say that the protagonist is able to survive like a normal person with an ugly, low-intelligence, and weak body and can punch and kick weird monsters Or do you want to say that I just thought of it casually and rushed to the street without any thought of perfection? Second, the plot is too casual You can either write something more serious and dig into a story and use it as a branch line, or let the system be more powerful and write it as a comedian It is very inconsistent to be neither up nor down now Third, the background and characters ... Forget it, these things will not be improved in a short time, come on.

I can definitely say that this book is not a studio one, after all, it can write about the tears of the times such as ghouls and Yu Yu Hakusho, but it is definitely written by an amateur author who is happy and stuffs what he likes purely according to his preferences.

It's okay for the protagonist to be so strong and trapped in the Zero Series. This is just an AI code word.

The protagonist of this rubbish can handle weird stories, so what's there to worry about? The people above will try their best to make the best use of these weird stories, so there's no need for the protagonist.

Why are you paid for working, but there is no bonus at all for helping the police find the murderer, or finding the child? Is this because the author forgot to write it, or is there really no bonus in District 11? I really don't understand this. It's even more outrageous than the reward for finding a dead murderer in a certain place was higher than a living murderer.

Now I know why my grades are so bad. The main character keeps being smarter and often saves some disgusting characters. Even reading this novel makes people uncomfortable.

The protagonist looks mature, right? 😁

I don't know why, but I just saw the system settings in the first chapter and I can't stand it... Goodbye

The more I wrote, the more I missed the appointment. Recently, there have been more and more poisonous points. Why did Yazi bring her back? Isn't it good to let her stay? Wouldn't it be nice for her to spend so much money every month on the lottery? The financial pressure caused can only make the male protagonist more of a tool, protecting people who want to die. The face thief was poisoned again. I can't stand it when I see him start to threaten the male protagonist from behind. At the beginning, he talked about various shark monsters. But now, how can he hide and hide and still be threatened?

Hahaha

My idea is that many people describe tsundere as unruly. Can the two be the same? I don't understand why Ye Wuming is almost becoming the heroine for no reason.

After reading Chapter 1560, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was okay at the beginning, but when we got to the drainage pipe, the plot started to feel a little off, and the character's personality and way of doing things began to be unpalatable. Later, I wanted to see the protagonist become stronger or something. The motivation for reading Chapter 154 was to see the Sharingan. It seemed that I had finally waited until the protagonist was about to make a difference and slowly became stronger, but in Chapter 160, he gave his eyes to someone else... Watching things requires an attractive plot, otherwise it will be very tiring. I read a novel with a proficiency panel before, in the world of cultivating immortals, focusing on daily life. The upgrade is not fast, but it is still very interesting. Your novel is interesting at first, especially when I read it at night, but later on it may be because the author has no outline. I am on the verge of giving up now, so I will put it away for a while and talk about it later. Looking at the comments and the table of contents, the protagonist's later stage may be okay, with a Zanpakutō or something like that, but I doubt I can persist until that time. Come on.

It could have been okay, but it's a pity that I have to deal with money. The lottery suppresses consumption. If you have money, use it. If you don't have money, sell your integrity. This place collapsed after the ghoul incident was over, and we just let ourselves go.

Chapter 117 is a very bad character. You took advantage of someone's danger right after their mother died. Just reduce the protagonist's favorability to a negative number, and there will be no sense of involvement at all. No matter how much you have desire, you should get down to business first, because your family is still in the sewer pipe. I can only say that I am extremely speechless

The pay for the protagonist is too low, so relieving trouble for the police is simply free and generates electricity with love. Since there are ghosts, why not read books about killing ghosts and exorcising evil spirits?

There is no clear main plot, various other plots are mixed with exorcism, and the language expression is also confusing. There are all kinds of inexplicable equipment, one thing after another, it doesn't feel excessive, the most important thing is confusion.

It feels like the first 200 chapters and the following chapters are not the same book at all

The protagonist is mentally retarded and ugly

Is it bad? After reading it, it's pretty good and quite attractive.

Like when I was in Tokyo, I really didn't have a sense of sight.

Chapter 76 has not been read yet, but I have finally finished it, and it was not discovered until more than 20 years after it was finished. Although I haven't read it yet, I still congratulate the author for finishing it! Looking forward to the author's new book... By the way, is there a new book out? I haven't had time to click on the author's homepage.