American Variety Show: a Dark Shot at the Beginning

Don't write it in such a messy way. The hero's abilities are too confusing. Goldfinger is too strong. One monster needs one ability. If you kill so many monsters, the more abilities you have, the easier it will be for your combat power to collapse. Don't write too many heroines. You can't write more than three. I feel like the hero is a bit silly.

I remember there was a movie in which the male protagonist merged the blood of vampires and werewolves.

Why must there be a black follower who is holding back? Is it for political correctness?😏

It was fine in the front, but the protagonist suddenly became hesitant in the bar behind him. He showed mercy three times and let off the criminals who wanted to kill him. The protagonist lost some strength after he had some strength? Very unpleasant to watch

Nicole Kidman is a true goddess, the heroine of my first entry into entertainment novels

Wednesday

Cutting it off without saying anything is really a loss of character.

Grace

Zoe

I was persuaded to quit by the supporting character Sandy. This character is really unlikable.

There has always been a feeling that the protagonist is being led along. Although he is decisive in killing, he still feels an indescribable discomfort.

Pig's feet are too poor. What is the purpose of being a policeman? Is it to make money? Mao didn't even see the money he made.

Depending on the situation, the author really likes the black dog's feet and keeps licking them

Wednesday

As mentioned in the introduction, it is an American variety show, but why are there always people who talk about reality and Hollywood, the plot is fictitious, and the characters are fictitious. It is mainly based on the plot of movies and TV series, and has nothing to do with reality... Has nothing to do with it...

The dancing part is really cool

Fox

Annie

Pigeon? No greeting at all

Author, the strength of the protagonist you wrote is beyond the standard 😅 Now that the protagonist has the blood of the ancestor, it is difficult for the protagonist to die. Indirectly, there are a lot of horror movies that no longer threaten the protagonist. It is difficult to do it. Only when adventures and turns are dangerous can the writing resonate and bring a sense of involvement 😠

If you have seen a movie that you think could be included in a novel, you can suggest it and I will consider whether to include it.

The alien space in Silent Hill can be closed down

In the first 20 chapters or so, the titles and content of the chapters where the Brotherhood appeared were too disconnected, and it was very tiring to read. Furthermore, the protagonist is not extraordinary at all. He is already at LV5. He feels so weak. Please fix it a bit.

The movies mentioned in the introduction are all good, and I have basically watched them all.

I suggest writing "The Bad Seed", "The Orphan", "Man in the Mirror" and "Eat Alive"

The author, the protagonist is a vampire. What is it like to eat bread? Can it be digested?

Let's find some pretty girls as well, or let the previous heroines be included in the plot.

Gee, I like this theme very much, it's a pity

It looks good, but the heroine is a bit missing. I feel like we could add dozens more. Many women can digest such a powerful golden kidney as pig's feet 😁

After flipping through the table of contents, this book is a pity. The author has not even finished half of the plot of the movie in the introduction. If he had finished it, it would definitely be a masterpiece.