Outer God, I'm Here to Negotiate Terms.

Foster father, update it quickly! ! ! I will start school tomorrow and wait two months to see you again.

They are both game novels. The difference between Alone in the Abyss and this book is that it breaks out of the original framework. The player element is directly deleted. Wrote a wonderful story. I felt pity after reading this novel. Obviously the player factor can be eliminated. Just let the protagonist only have the memory of being a player, so that he can play better. Once a player appears, the story line in the book will revolve around the player, which is a big loss.

The author's name makes me feel a little bit wrong. Could it be some big eunuch's trumpet?

Before players came here, they all had a book of fairy grass, which was very good. Players fall into the trap as soon as they arrive. In Novice Village, I skipped 5 chapters and it didn't affect my reading. I could already guess the content. Just like the super mechanic. Pretending to be very powerful, the player investigates and is shocked. The protagonist adjusts his favorability towards the player and issues a task. Accepting players as younger brothers or something. I haven't read these chapters yet. People who have read them can tell me whether they got it right. But overall it looks very smooth, so let's take another look.

Damn it, I actually thought he was grandpa, I'm here to negotiate terms. . . . .

Why did I think of it when I saw the truth, Pluto in Super Beast Arms and some others🤣🤣 🤣🤣

From the beginning to the return of the child, it's pretty good. Although some plots are classic, they also have something of their own, and the worldview and setting are also thrown out a bit. It's just that the scene at the widow's dinner later was very silly. Come on, keep going and see what happens next

After I met the witch, I felt like someone else had written it. I was baffled and didn't know what the author was writing. I'd like to ask other readers if it's still so strange later on.

What does the protagonist's appearance look like😜😜

At first glance, I read the title of the book as "Grandpa, I'm here to negotiate terms." Is there any way to save it?

The first-level author is so terrifying, I can't keep this kid, watch my fighting spirit turn into a horse,

The first chapter was ridiculous, and I had no desire to subscribe. The beginning was very interesting, the plot was clear, and the narration was also very clear Then there was a sudden flashback and a lot of inexplicable jokes, which made me confused. Before the chapter was released, I still thought that the magic circle was going to be opened, but then it seemed that was not the case. I couldn't understand it.

If heaven had not given birth to me with two peas, the road would last forever like a long night

I've just read Chapter 43, and it's okay I don't know what's going on. The plot is very weak, and the intimate interactions with female characters are really embarrassing. The male protagonist will fall into his own thoughts from time to time. This kind of Japanese light novel behavior really scares me.

The pace of preparing for the escape was quite good, but as soon as I left, I started sleepwalking. I still don't understand why I didn't escape quickly. I just spent the whole day leisurely and leisurely.

It's really slowing down, and the leveling is also serious. Chapter 158 is still level 1 and level 16.

After meeting the players, I couldn't understand it anymore and felt lonely.

After meeting Mel, I started to slow down the pace, or in other words, fill it with water.

Going to have a rest during the Dragon Boat Festival? Resurrection bar bean

A fantasy version of a super mechanic? Is there a Shennong?

Every time I see the title of the book, my first reaction is Grandpa, I'm here to negotiate terms.

It's okay to watch part of it. It feels like a bit like DNF.

I am very dissatisfied with the recent plot. Do you have an outline? Let me ask you, the plot in the first chapter is so mindless and has a perfect ending. How are you going to pick up the story in the second chapter? Or is the second chapter a demigod, and the third chapter is the end of the book? Damn, the first level in Chapter 158 is level 16, and the third level in Chapter 188 is so powerful that it's almost equal to the fourth level? Then a small role can save the world? You want to finish the book directly, right? Don't want to write anymore? You are driving readers away and killing your own writing!

What's your situation?

I've given you the monthly pass. I'll take care of it for a while while you update it carefully.