
The Perfect World Returns, Leading Ning Rongrong to Push Douluo
完美世界归来,带宁荣荣横推斗罗
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- 395k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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I was looking forward to it after reading the introduction. The concept of this book is very good... I originally thought about whether Rongrong's tower could be developed into something similar to the Linglong Tower... The Demon-Suppressing Tower... The Wild Tower, which can directly suppress and imprison... After all, the image of the tower in my mind is that of suppression! It has always felt strange to use it as an assistant... Unfortunately, I was poisoned before Chapter 5! All kinds of distortions of the original characters... All kinds of wisdom... All kinds of writing methods that let you let yourself go!
I can't stand it anymore when I see Ning Rongrong being taught the Kunpeng Technique. The Kunpeng Technique is like cabbage, right? You can learn it just by picking it up. What kind of talent do you, Ning Rongrong, have and what is the level of the Ten Evil Treasures? Can Ning Rongrong's innate soul power be understood by a pig brain that doesn't even have the full level? Or do you think everyone is a clown?
It's not that I look down on Ning Rongrong's qualifications and talents. Just based on the treasures and spells of Emperor Huang Tian in the introduction, can she learn them? Those spells did not exist from the beginning. Even Shi Hao himself learned them through many experiences and passed them on to the auxiliary soul master Ning Rongrong. It is said that a little girl who can't even bear to run on the playground can learn it. Do you think the geniuses in the original work such as Di Luo, Ming Gu, Immortal Gu, and Chaos Ancient Era are all idiots? In the entire original work, there are not many people who have learned all these methods. There may be some, but definitely not many. Not to mention others, among the geniuses in the lower realm, there is the young man from Gong Village, whose name I can't remember. Although he was picked up by No. 10 In one move, I believe that his talent is a rare talent in Douluo.
I remember being able to lift a hundred thousand catties in the Blood Moving Realm, but in Douluo only gods can lift it.
The protagonist is a being who has been fighting Huang for hundreds of thousands of years. Why is his mentality still so childish? It's okay to bring Perfect World and Douluo Continent together! I haven't seen a beautiful woman in hundreds of thousands of years. A woman from the perfect world is always much more beautiful than those in Douluo Continent, even if she is a mainland product. After reading the first few chapters, I simply feel like a licking dog. Even if you change it, you can make the protagonist like Liu Shen. The heroine is like a feeling that someone is around you, but she is far away. In this case, if the heroine is too weak, you can only let the heroine take the initiative. The protagonist will be excited, as if he has never seen a woman before. The heroine takes the initiative, becomes stronger step by step, and gets closer step by step. This person, who is more divine than human, has been around for hundreds of thousands of years as you are writing now, and his mentality is still so bad, as if he has never seen a woman. This kind of writing is modeled on the perfect world, but this time the protagonist becomes a heroine, so it can be written. As long as you have the ability and write from the perspective of the heroine, I believe you can write it well. What you are writing now not only has the protagonist's character dropped to the ground, but the protagonist's experience of hundreds of thousands of years is like a dream, without any growth for the protagonist at all. The heroine is also like a vase, all dependent on the protagonist. I'm not criticizing this book. I've only read the first few chapters. I feel like your subject matter is OK, but you're writing in the wrong direction.
If you haven't read A Perfect World, you can still read this book. But as long as you have read the two books Douluo and Perfect, you will feel that the previous book is really easy to enlighten. Why is Huangta such a garbage? Kunpeng's magic, which can strike across the stars, is not an indiscriminate killing in the world of floor tiles. . . And this Ning Rongrong has such a high talent? If it is direct indoctrination, it directly means that it is pig breeding. The above is really too intellectual. Although the plot is smooth and the character design is okay, the wisdom is really poisonous.
Huang Ta, who has been with Shi Hao for so long, is like a fucking loser. To put it bluntly, doesn't Ning Rongrong directly train her? It's like offering sacrifices to a goddess. . .
So far it's okay, but I don't want Master Tang San to have a good life, understand? 🙂 Recommended votes are given
Don't indulge the heroine too much, otherwise she will be just a vase. You must put appropriate pressure on her. Not to mention being like Emperor Huangtian, even one-tenth of him will be enough.
My evaluation is, don't use Douluo to touch Porcelain's Perfect. The lower planes of Ten Cave Heaven's random killings have been raised to the level of a true immortal by you. You really don't regard the Perfect Immortal as a human being. This is the worst time for a Perfect Immortal to be insulted.
I have a question. According to the introduction of the book, this desolate tower is from the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths period, and it doesn't even involve the Immortal Realm? Then where did your incarnation come from? That thing is a skill that was only used in the perfect finale, right?
And the talent of the emperor is also very impressive. The luck of the emperor covers the sky. Strength. Resource. Comprehension. One of the five qualities of mind is indispensable. It's not that I look down on Ning Rongrong, it's that she really doesn't have the talent. If it were an original protagonist, she could play the role of Douluo. This is a shortcoming.
Ning Fengzhi and the others are not fools. They are not mentally retarded enough to need to find Yu Xiaogang.
I feel like the protagonist's level is so low You assume that the protagonist comes back from a perfect world, and the protagonist Huangta itself is almost a top-notch existence in that world. What you describe in this article does not have that kind of level at all
You don't need so many magic skills, just one punch and one title.
I don't understand a bit 1. Since the protagonist came from perfection, why not teach Ning Rongrong the practice method of moving the blood secret realm? 2. Why does Mao have to go to Shrek for a tour and get a lesson before leaving? 3. Go to the Star Dou Forest without bringing some elders from the sect with you? To be honest, I had high expectations for this book when I saw the title. If the author can't think of any other plot besides following the original work, you can first look at other Douluo fans or other types of novels for reference. You have to have some originality, author
There is a huge difference between the Perfect World and the Douluo World. A person in the Cave Heaven Realm can easily destroy the Douluo World.
The fragments of the Huangta are also Huangta. They can't move because they have no energy. They won't go to the universe and directly absorb the energy of the planet? I remember in Perfection, the patina scraped from the Immortal Palace can kill a bunch of people in an instant. Your desolate tower fragment is not a low-end version, right? That's right. Judging from Ning Rongrong's ability to learn the ten evil treasures, it can either strengthen Douluo or bring down Perfection!
Douluo
It's too low-priced. It doesn't look like a strong man who has experienced countless battles. And he still has a hidden weapon? Still going to Shrek? I really don't know if your Huangta is fake. Can't you even teach a mortal to practice?
Rongrong
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