I Have a Blue Lotus to Prove Immortality

Advice on poison testing, this book is extremely poisonous, and it abuses the protagonist at the beginning. I finally got a golden finger, but in the end I fell into despair. I finally got my revenge, and I met a mountain-eating python. I was originally going to die, but was forced to accept it by the author's aura... This is really a twist and turn. This kind of poisonous start is really rare. I don't think so. If you are not afraid of the poisonous start, you can continue to test the poison. I can't stand it anymore. I died from the poison.

Tried poisoning. You can skip the first dozen chapters and start with Planet Martial Arts. After writing so many things in the first two chapters, I feel that Goldfinger is very powerful and the protagonist is very incompetent.

It's too wordy. Slow pace and dragging pace are two different things. You will enjoy it if you listen to the slow tempo. And dragging the rhythm means not spitting out and not fast. I clearly feel that I have deliberately suppressed the protagonist a few times. I feel that the road is going smoothly, but God has to block the way. After a long time of explanation, I can accept this suppression. Is there any real progress in terms of the protagonist's abilities and the plot? No. After almost thirty chapters, I started practicing the exercises and getting started. The previous plot seems to have content, but in fact it is all a bunch of words to introduce, and there are only two or three meaningful things. The summary is empty and long-winded.

The protagonist's ancestors wanted to surrender, so why did he have to say it was for the sake of the people in the city? At the end of the Ming Dynasty, when Micuchi entered the Pass, were those traitors who surrendered to the city for the sake of the people in the city?

The plot is too long, not to mention starting to become an immortal and inheriting the starry sky fleet. You have been through more than ten chapters. Entering a martial arts hall is full of twists and turns. Many authors have this problem. In the early stage, they use water and pressure hard, in the middle stage, they directly upgrade at light speed, and in the later stage, they directly eunuch.

Kill a few people and have nightmares? What logic? Is the protagonist mentally so fragile?

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The cheat code at the beginning was so high, but the result was so low. The author of this book probably just wrote it for fun. If you want to experience the feeling of being poisoned, you can read this book. If you don't want to be poisoned, you can withdraw it.

A sinner is worse than a slave, how can he have the arrogance and backbone? If you pretend to be a grandson, will you be beaten like that? It was difficult to survive, and they were still clamoring to kill this person and that person every day. . . Like a 7-year-old kid

This is really outrageous. The whiteboard technique is so awesome, but you will become a demon and lose your life if you practice it yourself. Do you need to spend so much time describing it? Is it necessary for the protagonist to be really powerful?

What kind of plot is this? Use Qinglian to travel to other places and live another life? Vomited directly.

I have been talking about learning martial arts, but I have not learned it after more than thirty chapters. I introduced a golden finger and introduced more than ten chapters. You are not as good as you. He even suppressed the protagonist all the way and was convinced.

I've read Chapter 12 and I've been abusing the main character. No matter how good your writing is, I don't want to read the previous one.

I read it again and found that the protagonist has a petty attitude and does not dare to accept other people's investments. After all, it is understandable that I am in a state of desolation and my experience is average. But the protagonist has a great opportunity and is destined to become an immortal and a saint. His courage, calmness and wisdom will slowly emerge. Even if other people's investments are poisonous, there is no need to worry about their strength. Even if I invest sincerely, I don't have to worry about getting a hundredfold return on my wealth. This kind of grandeur. Also, Zhang Wa's appearance is a bit abrupt. His appearance seems too fake. It's better to have a talent that the protagonist can help awaken when he becomes famous. Even bring out the stars. It feels like an important sleep aid. Okay, this is my suggestion

The intention was quite high, but there were too many ideas, too confusing, and no resonance. I saw the barking of an incompetent person, which was a bit depressing, so I gave up and said goodbye!

The idea is very good, but the writing is a mess and the plot is a mess. After reaching chapter 60, I really can't stand it anymore.

I've been poisoned to death. I feel like the author wanted to write down his ideas but didn't have the writing style, so it looked very messy and wordy.